Far better than the average youtube short scifi stories. The writer has real potential as this is as good as the stories many of the professional writers produce.
Hope there are more stories about Grimm and Jack, making their story more about their healing these stories always seemed to be too short. Really hope this writer takes this story much much further.
I was hoping the narrator could work a female (for Grim) into the story. She would have a huge litter of pups, and the military base would be full of soldiers vying for a chance to raise (spoil rotten) one of Grim's pups. Pups, all of which had inherited their fathers ferocity and loyalty. A base known to all as a fool's endeavor.
