Galactic Council Warns Alien: NEVER Mess With Humans!| Best HFY Stories 

Sounds like they got lucky to me because they didn't touch our boats. DON'T TOUCH AMERICAS BOATS!

Who writes these things? The word repetition is absolutely abysmal. Please send me an address so I can send them a thesaurus

Humans being merely "Resilient" it too weak a descriptive. Should use terms like "fierce", "Hostile", "aggressive", "tenacious", or even "downright nasty" along with appropriate modifiers, to empathize the "sticky" predicament our warlord has found himself in. He "has kicked a proverbial "Hornets nest" and knows he is about to suffer the result. He will be lucky to survive. The tone of the story is just too "Even" . It needs more description and a more "Highs and Lows". It's what one gets when one attacks a species who have been fighting terrible wars among themselves for thousands of years, and have it down to a science. Forced to adapt "peaceful" ways, for their own survival on Earth, they would not hesitate to take on an off- world threat with relish, if only to make up for lost time.

oh boy, another advanced tech faction that doesn't know about cyberwarfare, EMP, or small unit tactics. Sure. They have the ability to cross the galaxy, but not to harden IT and electronic systems. They have thousands of years of experience in warfare, but have never seen small unit actions. Why of course only humans know about these things. What a lazy story.

When an enemy is making a mistake why stop him ?

Kind of a good idea. Didn't need to be 24 minutes long. Waxing eloquent every 30 seconds about cunning, determination, adaptability makes it a bit repetitive.

Repetition and boring. Bad writing worthy of grade school.

24 minutes you wish you could get back.

Another 'alien name' starting with a Z. You're not very imaginative, are you?