ehhhh, not an improvement over the original, sorry. I'd love a good trapstep version of this song really - but you should try to make sure that the tempo of your song and the tempo of the original song line up - it's very noticeable when the original lyrics are now offbeat on your song.
Thanks for the advice, my friend. I'll take it and upload a new version of this. I'm still learning a lot; I started producing a few months ago, and all the feedback helps to make it better.
@@DA-NTRAXXDJ best wishes on your journey! Everyone has to start somewhere, keep going! I like the idea you had, and I think the drop does go hard still ^^