Good Story Telling: A Simple Breakdown

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@quantumimagesQC Год назад

Mark, your transparency and will to share your knowledge is remarkable. It is humbling to see such a talented filmmaker putting years of experience into free videos. Thank you for helping so many people out there!

@markbone Год назад

Wow, thank you. Appreciate these kind words

@Videofilealways Год назад

Agreed!

@joostelffers1728 Год назад

Re-mark-able haha

@ienpassi Год назад

Well described absolutely true

@DimiFerrest Год назад

Indeed! He puts the ‘mark’ in remarkable!

@GoodBloodGames Год назад

Wow I think this is groundbreaking info for me. I think a lot of the time we could *feel out* the edit at the cost of time and trial and error but having a clear guideline like this will streamline that whole process.

@justinburgan Год назад

this is powerful info!! when you can visualize, feel, and touch a film outside of an editing software that's where you begin to experience an outside perspective which usually provides the clarity you needed.

@markbone Год назад

I've come to realize that most 'complex' problems are just a series of simple solutions. in this case it was matching colours that saved our feature film 😅. What's a simple tip you've learned?

@chepilevski Год назад

I just like the video before even watch it as I know I will get exactly what I need and you never disappoint! Those are some awesome tips I never heard around and I’m looking on this topic for ages! Thank you so much for sharing your knowledge for us the mortals who want to understand more about the magic of documentary! You are like bird with the never ending gold eggs! Much much love Mark

@markbone Год назад

🙏🏻♥️ thank you!

@QuinnAden Год назад

The colour coding is absolutely brilliant. Love the idea of being able to come out of the edit suite and look at the big picture, without any footage or images clouding the story. Well done as always sir!

@markbone Год назад

it's been a game changer for me

@DanielDaveta Год назад

I’ve watched a ton of your videos and it helped me make my own mini documentary this year. A local film festival called me and wants to feature it. Your knowledge and sharing your experiences has helped me tremendously and I couldn’t thank you enough. Love from the Fiji Islands.

@B-Moye Год назад

These are some really gold nuggets here. Any time I’ve tried to write or tell a story I’ve always just focused on the plot but never let emotion build or characters breathe and develop and I can understand why in films I like these character arcs have always been so pivotal to supplement that plot. So good!

@markbone Год назад

Breaking down my films like this has been a game changer

@CJDuckett Год назад

This was really helpful. I’ve honestly never thought about it like that in terms of too many emotional scenes or too many plot scenes in a row. But you’re right, that IS how you lose your audience. And you’re right, this applies to all forms of visual media. I’m gonna pay closer attention to that from now. Might have to go back over older work to see if I find the same thing happening there. Good stuff bro. Thanks a lot. P.S. awesome haircut by the way. Lol ✊🏾

@chriskingcreative Год назад

This is fantastic. These ideas, are great for all modern drama, even work for theatre. Thanks so much!

@KMadanzi Год назад

thank you so much for sharing, cant wait for the documentary course I realy need it

@BryceDocherty Год назад

Seriously man. The best advice ever. I learn so much from you constantly! Looking forward to seeing your two new docs, and also, His Name Is Ray when it comes out :)

@LucForsyth Год назад

Nice one Mark, I used to do this with pen and paper and it would inevitably get super confusing and messy. This is a much better system - and perfect timing for me as I head into the edit on my own feature. Thanks for sharing!

@TonyVsEarth Год назад

This is what Casey does with his Vlog well. One scene he expressed how he feels about something and in the next you'll see how it relates to the story with some context to the plot.

@michaellynchfilm Год назад

Thank you so much Mark. Your knowledge and kindness has elevated and supported my work within filmmaking - truly inspired to make something special. (Need to jump on that AOD course!)

@markbone Год назад

Yes! Jump into AOD brother. You’ll love it

@madelyneekeh9317 Год назад

Emotion and plot.

@ienpassi Год назад

Mark... Every video you share with us is full of presents thank you for doing that

@jean-pierrejoubert2438 Год назад

Another gem Mark. Cool stuff. Can’t wait to see these projects

@markbone Год назад

🙏🏻♥️

@tatanslife Год назад

Man, this video is awesome, this "simple breakdown" (as you called it), is one of the best piece of advice you can lernt n the filmaking movie. THANK YOU TO SHARE IT WITH US!

@markbone Год назад

🙏🏻♥️

@zongmuas Год назад

Let's all be honest here. We're all Lewis when we're editing. LOL. Great tip, man. I'm working on a small project right now and every new video you post I've been able to implement it into my project some how, super helpful. It also makes me feel better that even a pro like you is still learning new things. Love to see it!

@MrEattheworld Год назад

Don't do it this is a scam.

@zongmuas Год назад

@@MrEattheworld LOL. Fully aware. This happens every time i leave a comment. 😂😂

@MattAitia Год назад

Working on a short doc project and I keep referring back to your videos. Things really started to click for me when you mentioned characters need to want something and to not just chase cool looking shots.. Excited to share when it's all done!

@markbone Год назад

Keep at it Matt! Don’t settle for cool. Look for desire, progress and journey

@tazyt3388 Год назад

Mate you just keep making me think about new approaches to the old goals it’s brilliant but also doing my head in a we bit in a good way ,kinda gone from just filming a ride to plotting an adventure ,good shit mate cheers

@markbone Год назад

Thanks brother appreciate you taking the time to watch!

@Justin-vaseur Год назад

hell yea thanks for sharing brother

@drmatthewhorkey Год назад

Emotion or Plot... sooo golden. I take so much out of every one of your vids...

@markbone Год назад

thanks Dr!

@edmundobaca3498 Год назад

love the story.thank you Mark.

@ibrahimozpuylat6468 Год назад

mark you are simply a great person! in 2 months we will begin to our big journey which is going to be around the world with sailing boat starting from greece and film it also. I am basically learning too many stuffs from you so, I appreciate that man!

@markbone Год назад

Mate! If you’re making your first doc, you gotta join AOD! It’ll help you tell your story so much better

@ibrahimozpuylat6468 Год назад

@@markbone I just applied for module i and ii! made tons of reality shows so far but this is a bit new to me. docu-reality is gonna be our genre so thinking on too much about character goals, their story and searching ways to let the viewers feel the characters in the show as one of them. Cause I want to focus more on the cinematic aspect! hope to see you soon in aod and collaborate things together!

@lindalawson4296 Год назад

Love the tips! Keep ‘em coming.

@rooplukka Год назад

This is gold of a content. Thanks Mark

@siehstefilm7695 Год назад

Mark, I love your Content! Great stuff! It's so true that emotion and plot should alternate but I think you can apply this rule from shot to shot not only from scene to scene. Every scene should take the story a little further don't you think? And then there is another thing: exposition. Ideally a few shots can combine all of these things within a scene right? What's your opinion about that?

@mrfryfilmguy Год назад

Only found your channel last week, have been binging it since! I am currently in film school and have learnt alot from you. Keep up the great work! Greetings from Australia :)

@markbone Год назад

Love it. Welcome to the community.

@mrfryfilmguy Год назад

@@markbone Awesome, thanks 🙏

@timdanyo898 Год назад

Next level info. Thank you!

@ryanguidofilms Год назад

As always, Mark saving my workflow days in advance🙏

@abelmuhangi7696 Год назад

Yes 🥰🥰🥰

@merccciii Год назад

Thank you for sharing the knowledge. I'll try to put it to good use

@antoniorosado 3 месяца назад

00:06 Balancing emotion and plot is crucial for engaging filmmaking 01:07 Using Millinote software to improve film editing process 02:10 Emotional journey over plot in film editing 03:15 Using Milinote for plot progression and character development 04:21 Millinote is a great collaboration tool for referencing and story breakdown 05:24 Achieved audience award and special tour across Canada 06:30 Using Musicbed for sharing song selects with Louis to convey the vibe and scenes without interfering with his timeline. 07:38 Discussion on the tornado project and filmmaking simplicity

@ArunMPEdison Месяц назад

Thank, you, The tool Milanote, was a piece of new knowledge for me and it opened doors for more organized approach! Even though I don't do movies, it helps me for Corporate/Work townhall presentations and for making RU-vid Videos!

@Bush91 Год назад

Great video as always. It’s nice to think about the balance of emotion and plot across scenes. I used Milanote for a year but cancelled as I always found myself going back to google docs and slides, they are much easier to share and collaborate with clients. Milanotes iPad and iPhone apps also need a lot of work. Thanks for the good content.

@DonovanLee Год назад

I wanna apply this to RU-vid videos and even shorter form content like reels and TikTok. Watching this channel always makes me feels like there is so much potential to continue to grow and learn

@markbone Год назад

💯

@KevinThornMusic Год назад

For your interview vibes I immediately spotted American Animals in there, one of my favorite films lol! The two journeys tidbit is a big help to framing the story. I guess I viewed it as a physical one with some emotion rather than the metaphysical being like its own arc intertwined with the physical as well - which seems so much more engaging and may be what's been missing for me! Great video!

@markbone Год назад

Great film!!

@jkswanepoel3453 Год назад

always sound advice Thanks Mark

@markbone Год назад

🙏🏻

@unclejezza Год назад

Your content is unique Mr. Bone. It is a refreshing departure from all the kit review stuff. Good, honest film-making advice 😎

@markbone Год назад

I appreciate that!

@maxim.horoshilov Год назад

Man, feels like I had been blind and then you opened my eyes. 😂 Great tip, Mark! Can’t wait to watch your new film. ✌️

@JonathanRichey Год назад

I love Milanote! I use it almost every day now.

@onlyblackbox Год назад

Some really good points were said here! Great video

@rogerregor2489 Год назад

Thanks man 🙌

@emanirashad Год назад

bro.. you're great

@MeviMadeThis Год назад

the color coding is a great tip, visually seeing what scenes are about, Im def trying that.

@mmlewis1030 Год назад

I think I found Milanote about a year ago. I've been using it ever since and love it

@dmitriflorez Год назад

Love the video man, it’s impressive how you can really breakdown everything so that we can all understand it. Unrelated, love the shirt! Where is it from?

@markbone Год назад

Appreciate it! madhappy.com

@jaguarprophett Год назад

Thanks Mark...I moved from StudioBinder to Milanote - it's great.

@mcmaschio Год назад

Thanks Mark for Sharing ... this amazing information ...appreciate t .. my focus of 2022 is to get better in storytelling in my videos . ❤️

@jamesmccullough1162 Год назад

So pumped for the tornado doc.

@markbone Год назад

as am i!

@ILLATIT Год назад

Great breakdown Mark!

@markbone Год назад

thanks James!

@Myers_toast78 Год назад

Super helpful! Digging the new haircut by the way

@markbone Год назад

thanks mate!

@mikemorrison3913 Год назад

Liked saved for later, can’t wait to learn 😂

@landonmetcalfe3302 Год назад

Such great tips!

@markbone Год назад

you're going to be removed from this channel soon

@BryanElliott_ Год назад

Was up mark love your channel man! Hair cut 💇‍♂️ looks good bro!

@DimiFerrest Год назад

What a great idea to color code the scenes or clips to get a clear understanding of why something is not working in the edit. 👍

@adsmithtx Год назад

otherwise this is a good and very informative video!! Thank you for your time and effort

@Framesbyfrisby Год назад

This genus! I’m definitely going to apply this to my 1st short film! Soon! Ohhh and did I hear a FX3 giveaway!!!! That would be a dream!!!

@markbone Год назад

Go check the link and enter!

@nemisis4804MaddLabsTv Год назад

Grand Rising 🙏🏾 First thing Nice haircut and once again thank you for this valuable information and great video 💪🏾🎥🙏🏾

@markbone Год назад

🙏🏻🙏🏻

@DevotedMediaGroup Год назад

thank you

@markbone Год назад

No. Thank you.

@sarcasticfpv3862 Год назад

Hi Mark, towards the tornado documentary have you incorporated some fpv drone footage? Because kind of in the same timeframe when you were working on it cpt vanover had posted footage where he has flown inside a tornado from a pickup truck

@BanguraEdits Год назад

I noticed then haircut but definitely looks good bro.

@-carterlloyd- Год назад

Dude, Mark! Thanks for the good tips. I just made a new wedding video and I used milanote! It's such a good tool I love it. Thanks for all your tips. Great video man!

@-carterlloyd- Год назад

Also, thanks for the great advice when working with other filmakers. I think that's so important!

@Image1Nation Год назад

Nice haircut MB!

@sultanmia3895 Год назад

Nice 😊🧡

@joshmoxey. Год назад

Can you please do a breakdown of how you organize your footage and project structure? I'm deeply fascinated by learning about this topic and getting a peek at your files right there has me intrigued!

@markbone Год назад

I’ve done a bunch of videos about this and we even break down our entire documentaries in theartofdocumentary.com about this!

@jerrykyaligonza4197 Год назад

Third view on this video. Great love from Uganda, mark Bone.

@mosiomaaugustine Год назад

How is Uganda?

@markbone Год назад

thanks Jerry! Much love

@thengatv9254 Год назад

Which camera you used for Tornado documentary...it's beautifull

@Jaa_morant Год назад

Guys how do I start a mini documentary about a contest that took place in our university?( it’s like a talent show) Should I use a flash forward and show them coming to the stage at the day of the show (like rise tension really height from the start and them cut off and tell the story with “ 1 moth before”) Or should I start somehow slower?

@augustoliver2779 Год назад

Love the video, but just remember that it is not ok to be stressed.

@markbone Год назад

well... stress happens... if you're saying it's not okay to experience stress that just about disqualifies everyone in the human experience. The point i'm making is that I think it's okay to experience stress but what you do with it is where we can quantify what is okay or not okay ;)

@oeunouch Год назад

Thanks Mark, I'm in the middle of editing first all out Documentary and struggling to the conclusion to my video.

@markbone Год назад

You can do this! figure out where you think the film should climax to and conclude and work backwards from there, don't work towards it in the edit

@tootsllaneta4753 Год назад

Your Tips are extremely helpful. Salamat 🙏📿🕉️

@HerbityProductions Год назад

How do you manage the logistics of co-editing with someone across the country? Would love an inside look at that!

@Dancing_Alone_wRentals Год назад

Very valuable insight. I'm not a channel by any stretch of the imagination but I enjoy the challenge of every video I post. Some derail so far off the tracks, rescue crews won't even put down a Tim Horton and respond. Other videos have a spark of potential but under my direction they skid off the runway. It really is helpful to follow along and see how you compose. tHank You. PS Bring on Eva! To see her work flow would be great! tHanks for the videos!

@markbone Год назад

yeah i should def have Eva on the channel! she's the best, an incredible editor and person.

@Dancing_Alone_wRentals Год назад

@@markbone looking forward to that someday! Have a super week!

@mylzq Год назад

I’d love to see a film where the metaphysical journey is more important and holds the plot, And the physical journeys conflict with it.

@GrantAce Год назад

Wait… can’t a scene have both? A motion and plot at the same time… if they can happen in the same scene, can it blend together or is it still separate throughout the scene?

@FlexMotion Год назад

Hey Mark! Quick question, how do you send all your footage to a editor on the other side of the country?

@markbone Год назад

www2.thematrx.net

@PixelLingoMultimedia Год назад

Keep cutting your hair and you'll end up with hair (or lack thereof) like me! Be afraid! Great vids!!! Keep 'em coming, puh-lease.

@markbone Год назад

haha, I'll be there soon enough

@speedstarz_media647 10 месяцев назад

So say for example I making a car video. The plot has a character (our vehicle perhaps the driver as well) , but how do I progress or write a story where character doesn’t realistically have an attainable goal or a goal that could be even metaphorically stated?

@PhilipvanLonden Год назад

Hi Mark, thanks for your video’s. They are very insightful! Also this one. I was wondering. Might this have a relationship with Walter Murch’s Rule of 6. I’m trying to work out your approach according to the rule of six. Like this: if you cut, according to the rule of six, you have to prioritise cutting first for emotion and second for story, but if you cut too much for emotion and leave out story too many times in your prioritization your story falls flat. I’m just wondering wether or not you would have had kind of the same outcome if you would prioritise using The Rule of 6. You would have to consider emotion and story (and the other 4 of course). If so then your approach would be kind of a simplification of the Rule of 6. And I reaaaaalllly like simplification! Keep it up and thanks for your great work Mark!

@markbone Год назад

yeah the rule of six is really preached by Walter. and it seems to work for him well. My brain isn't wired that way probably because I'm a bit more daft. i try to go a bit more off feel and I find this milanote system doesn't squelch the life and creativity of the film while still be systematic

@PhilipvanLonden Год назад

@@markbone oh thanks Mark, never thought about having the rule of six 'squelching' the creativity out of the film, but you got a point there.

@kore996 Год назад

Out of curiosity where will be the first place to get updates and information on the upcoming Tornado 🌪 Doc?

@markbone Год назад

both here and my isnta!

@CristianMercadoYT Год назад

I need this video because one of my weakest points are storytelling.

@mosiomaaugustine Год назад

Just fear is what am overcoming.

@markbone Год назад

it can become your strongest Cristian!

@CristianMercadoYT Год назад

@@markbone yup

@WhySteve Год назад

Thanks for mentioning the telegram thing because I've see it so much and I'm always afraid people thing I'm spamming!

@markbone Год назад

big time spammers attacked that contest hard!

@WhySteve Год назад

I don't even know why I'm targeted, I only have 200 subs and half assed content, haha.

@damm0014 Год назад

Milanote is great but their app sucks big time. NO way to work on your film when you only have your phone with you. i hope they improve that, the workflow on the desktop is just fantastic.

@saulwormwood2136 Год назад

Should change the title of this video to “This video is sponsored by Milanote.”

@markbone Год назад

indeed it was

@julianz342 Год назад

One question: does my plot have to reflect the character's journey to the goal even in like short films, where the plot isn't so complex? And does the character even have to have a journey in shorter form videos?

@markbone Год назад

In short films there still should be a “want/desire” for the character but of course the journey will be shorter

@julianz342 Год назад

@@markbone Thanks, Mark!

@Roman.the.explorer Год назад

I like filmmaking, filmmaking doe snot like me

@tonnib Год назад

thx :)

@MrEattheworld Год назад

This is a scam.

@tonnib Год назад

@@MrEattheworld I told him that instead of the camera, I wanted another prize...

@MrEattheworld Год назад

@@tonnib After he continued to insist he was the real Mark Bone I tried to get him to send me a selfie with today's date showing in the picture, and he stopped messaging me.

@tonnib Год назад

@@MrEattheworld he told me that I had received the prize but that I had to pay the postage "immediately"

@MrEattheworld Год назад

@@tonnib What a bummer man I was really excited at first! I wonder how many people he got...

@A1Bokeh Год назад

MARK how long have you been creating "professionally"

@markbone Год назад

depends who's asking ha! i graduated film school in 2010 but I don't think I was really making anything good until about 2014

@A1Bokeh Год назад

@@markbone wow OG

@lionroots11 Год назад

I HAVE A QUESTION NOT UNDERSTANDING WHATS GOING ON, I RECEIVED A NOTIFICATION FROM YOU SAYING I WIN THE SONY CAMREA, I PAID FOR SHIPPING AND IT WAS A SCAMMED, WHAT THAT ABOUT?

@markbone Год назад

Brother. That was definitely a scammer. The contest doesn’t end until July 21st. I will never ask for anyone to pay for shipping or anything like that.

@lionroots11 Год назад

@@markbone that's what I told him. I said Mark is not a person to do that. You need to look into it bro. I have all the text between me and the person. They got me using your channel. You might want to looking into that

@lookeast3047 Год назад

Is this really about software and money?

@markbone Год назад

🤔

@napatsaeng Год назад

New hair good look 😂

@markbone Год назад

why thank you!

@scotey Год назад

I love this channel. Mark's content is inspiring and incredibly helpful. But this is a commercial and should be disclaimed as such.

@markbone Год назад

Lol. It says paid promotion at the beginning

@scotey Год назад

@@markbone It's no big deal. Like I said, I love your channel and you contribute so much to the community. I still don't see any "paid promotion" disclaimer upon second viewing, but if I missed it ... my apologies! Keep up the great work!

@Not_Yuto_Horigome Год назад

I just found out y'all get paid more for incorporating a product into your storyline on here......nice job with the milanote promo! ha. I joke I joke! And there are so many content creators from Canada on here that I've started to pronounce "Project" " Prooooject" and "templates" "templaaaates" lol