Here are the lyrics :) Time will tell If there's a hole in my heart Forever, forever Time will know If there's a world where we shine Together, together But if I ever lose my mind Keep me safe but keep me blind Save me from my troubled self If nothing else Give me a Hollywood sign Give me a Hollywood sign Lead me down a sunset sky Tell me all your pretty lies Just to kill me one more time A Hollywood sign Ooooh, ooooh Deja vu Say goodbye to the girl That I once knew, I once knew Is this life? Or a wildfire dream Where I loved you, and I lost you So if I ever lose my mind Keep me safe but keep me blind Save me from my troubled self If nothing else Give me a Hollywood sign Give me a Hollywood sign Lead me down a sunset sky Tell me all your pretty lies Just to kill me one more time A Hollywood sign Ooooh, ooooh Lead me down a sunset sky Tell me all your pretty lies Just to kill me one more time A Hollywood sign Time will tell If there's a hole in my heart Forever, forever
Dont use autotune(I'm not sure if you are but it seems like it). You have talent, the reason I am saying this is because I haven't ever heard such a deep and american voice ever. Create more extravagant lyrics. The terms u used in the song weren't special, they were just too ordinary. I can see that the background music is just some plain old boring riff. We need you to cook. Take weaks,months to come up with just 1 tune. Sit along with your chorus and try to think. Don't get distracted by a phone or anything. The more u sit without any distractions, u can develop an interesting background riff. It will be boring but it is possible. Not every tune has been used in this world. U dont need samples or anything. Just your own pure creativty. You may have already thought about what I am saying but you need to take it to the next level.
