You are really talented!^^ But I found your name funny as in Hungary geci is a swearing word and it just resembles me when I see Han Jisung doing anything that would kill me, because everytime I say "Han geci megölsz.." (=Han you are fckn killing me)
astro star Wow, I cannot believe that you put effort and time to write this!. A hardworking AROHA I see!. :D I am also an AROHA!. Well... huge multifandom. ;)
OMG 😆!!! YASSSS EVERYTHING I NEEDED, THE MUSIC 🎵 IS SOOO GOOD 💖 GREAT JOB 👍 I KNOW THAT IF YOU BECOME AN IDOL FOR KQ, THEN YOU WILL COMPOSE THE SONGS SO GOOD 😊!!!!!
Saw that you're open to tips/criticism so I figured I'd put whatever's left of my music theory knowledge to good use. There's a lot to say, but I'll try to be as concise as I can with two major elements of composing. 1a. First off, I'll say that you have a good sense of Dynamics, contrasting between soft and loud sections and transitioning through build-ups and fade-outs (crescendos & decrescendos). Just a tip when editing: check the audio levels for any parts that spike the volume or may be too soft to hear the notes clearly. 1b.) Using dynamics on a smaller level can add interest to an already good song. Obsession by EXO has some good uses of it. In the first verse, Baekhyun and Kai each have a word ("hani" and "moksori") that crescendos. Baekhyun uses his voice alone to get louder while Kai's word includes layered voices. Again, you have the dynamics between sections down, but changes in volume can happen over the course of a phrase (like a line in a song/poem) and not just the transitions. 1c.) Another use of "micro-dynamics" is having variation in how the notes are played (articulation). A note can be accented in a few different ways; basically it depends on the combination of strong/soft and long/short. In your piece, the first build-up about a minute in has some great variation in articulation. The snare drums gradually go from soft to strong but the notes are always short. And then the piano also gets stronger but instead the notes stay long yet separated. 2.) Instrumentation. While you don't have to recreate a full-on symphony when writing, it's also nice to have layers of instruments with varying pitches. The low pulsing bass drum you have adds some balance, but just for bits here and there. I think a lower string section (think bass and cello)- or just a general string sound but playing lower notes- could add a cinematic quality by filling out the sound. You're almost there with those sustained piano chords at 1:45 that contrast nicely with the bright and bouncy piano part. I'd probably add a lower string that has smooth and sustained parts but also occasionally emphasize the strong beats to propel the music even further. I hope I said everything clearly. Have fun with it- you're doing great already 👍
The two songs are so amazing! It's so my style and i cant wait to see what you drop in the future! Don't stop doing what you love! I will be right by your side and listen to the great music. I really do mean it i would listen to this and jets all day. Good luck! Hwaiting!😀
Wow, you can create lyrics videos, also... create music. I sense multitalented vibes over here, lol. I already checked the other song you created. I love both of them!. The other one is calmer and I like that one more, but they’re both very special and good in their own ways. You keep doing what you’re doing, so... hwaiting Hangeci sunbaenim!.
You are very talented 🌟a brilliant musician! I love this tune it is amazing! I really enjoy listening to it. It has a power all of its own. Music is powerful and tunes stay in our memories for a long time. I love 💗 this tune. 🙏🏽
I wanna see The Boyz, Astro, or Treasure do this song. Shoot, I can even see BTS singing to this beautiful backtrack. I think it could easily get 50M views or more with underrated groups, but like 500M+ with BTS. It's that amazing.
