Lovely vdo - packed with information. The conversational style was very well executed. Just a couple of suggestions. 1. Slow the speed of your speech. 2. Stick to one language. If you decide to go bilingual, make sure that you repeat the same point in both languages. 3. Try and keep the vdo around 10-12 mins. You need to precis the script for that. 4. List the ingredients (and quantities) of the recipe,as an overlay on the screen or a slide, after the introduction. We had to re-run the vdo to confirm the ingredients. You could also list the recipe /recipe link in the vdo description. 5. Give a link to your Arishtam online shop in the vdo description.
