A show idea I have is about a toddler that is super smart and becomes a super spy. My inspiration comes from Rugrats and Mission Impossible (or whatever spy movie you can think of). This video might help me with developing the idea more as well as pitching it to cartoon network or nick when I am ready. Thanks so much for this video.
@powergirlart5333 I would personally stray away from trying to make a pilot a two-parter, since they’re usually one episode. Depending on what format you choose to go with (11min vs 22min) I’d try to establish the main characters & exposition within that timeframe. Remember, the point of a pilot is to win over your audience enough to get a greenlight, and if folks aren’t invested enough in the first episode they won’t continue watching. No need to pad for time with extra fluff, less is more! 🙌🏼
I'm making an indie animated show, the pilot movie, a hero named Kenyon would meet 5 heroes, the pilot would be about the introduction of our 6 heroes working together fighting the pilot villain near the climax which would lead into the series, in case you're wondering no, its not going to be an adult show, I want to stand out from most of the indie animated shows on RU-vid, its an action kids show, the main series would be about meeting new heroes/villains, a group of anti heroes would be seen. (the anti heroes will have their own mimi series) The slice of life episodes would be about the heroes doing normal things when there is no villain to fight, the series will focus on certain characters either about the main heroes, sometimes the side heroes as well, I just wanted to know what do you think about me making an action kids show for kids and adults to enjoy by everyone. Also its TV Y7-FV
@@Piixelatte Truly an honor, I can only imagine the amount of time you took to make this informative video. Cant wait to see your channel SKY rocket as I know it will.
This was incredibly helpful, thank you so much. Biggest road block I have is that the I.P I want to revive doesn't belong to me, but it also hasn't been touched in 15+ years
Thank you for watching! Hollywood def seems to be leaning more on reboots nowadays, but getting permission from the owner of the IP can be tricky 😵💫 You can always try to reach out to them directly, the worst they can do is say no or never respond. Stay resilient! 💪🏼
@Piixelatte thanks man, I really appreciate it. I'm gonna get started on the pitch, literally today. Fingers crossed they love it and they help me get the license to use it!
There’s a variety of different software used for animation depending on the style! I don’t know what specific software was used on Adventure Time, but Toon Boom Harmony is the most commonly used in the industry. I’m pretty sure the bulk of animation was done overseas though (Korea).
I’m making a show and I need as much information as possible so I know what to do when I pitch it. If there’s anything else you think you could help me with, do you think you could make a part two? Also my pilot episode is in my channel if you want to check it out and give feedback.
Hmm...I never really planned to make a part 2, but now you've given me something to think about 🤔 I'll seriously consider it! (Stay tuned✨) As for giving feedback, I'm not open to reviewing work at this time. Apologies for the inconvenience! However, I recently started reading a book that I strongly recommend and might have some of the info you're looking for! It's called "The Animation Producer's Handbook" by Lea Milic & Yasmin McConville. books.google.com/books?id=Umnu3M05XZUC&printsec=frontcover#v=onepage&q&f=false The link above is a preview of the book, but I've found the ebook version through my local library and started reading it for free before it was gifted to me by a friend. Definitely check it out!
Thanks so much for this video! I love how it felt full of information without being an hour long. Also thanks for linking some Pitch Bibles in the description, because they’re gonna help a lot!
Hi Jaiden! Thank you for making this video. I've had an 11 minute pilot script on hand for a couple years now that's gotten great feedback and support, but I've always been intimidated by pitch bibles themselves, since they really are the show summed up and it's hard to organize all those ideas. This video was a really good, succinct summary of how to lay everything out.
This helped, A LOT, before watching this, I thought I was in over my head. After watching this, I still think I'm in over my head, but with an outline. If anything comes of it, I'll let you know, but right now I need to stop stalling on youtube, and get 'R done.
thank you so much for this! i have to ask, do you have any suggestions as to where to write the pitch bible? like google docs, indesign, or something else 0:
Of course; honestly there's no right or wrong format! I've seen examples of pitch bibles done in powerpoint/keynote/google docs as a slideshow presentation, video with voice over and some still drawings/images, etc... In today's day and age, the format has become more fluid because of the option to pitch virtual/remote. My advice would be not to get caught up in making it look fancy, but rather showcasing your personality in the delivery of your ideas! Hope that makes sense/helps :)
This was an utterly informative, concise, and clear pitch bible for a children's animation series. You've been enormously helpful!! Thanks so much, Jaiden!
For sure!! A series bible can definitely be used to pitch a comic concept to a publisher (something I'm currently doing my own research on). I wish you the best in crafting your story! :)
Thanks a million for making this video! I have a great idea that I would love to see get turned into a full fledged series and this video helped a ton!
man, i was really hoping that this video would have more tangible moves to undertake. we always hear "know what your story and characters are" from every direction regarding every creative project, but I wanna know how to potentially organize all this knowledge i have swirling around in my head and written in a dozen discombobulated forms. i figured this was some sort of, like, idk a style of zine made for pitching creative ideas. but even looking up zines, people love to leave videos about creative stuff so open-ended. and i get why, but it starts to be frustrating hearing the same broad points being made with no action steps being given by anyone :/
Hi! I’m trying to understand where you’re coming from; if you’re looking for /specific/ advice on EXACTLY how to organize your thoughts, I’m afraid you’re not going to find that answer from someone else. Every creative brain ticks differently, and what might work for someone else may not be the best solution for you! I can’t tell you what action to take, I only wish to share what I know. If by “tangible moves” you mean selling the pitch somewhere, that’s where it becomes outside my expertise. This video is meant to help the viewer /conceptualize/ a pitch, not sell it. I personally haven’t gotten that far myself, so I can’t speak on something I haven’t done. I still wish you the best on your creative endeavors and that you’re able to discover a method of brainstorming that helps clear the fog! 🙌🏼
Nice vid and helpful info im making a video series going through pitch and series bibles, allwhile making my own shows and comics, any productions you favor over others? i wish to do extensive research to upstart a production studio
Thank you! 🙌🏽 If I had to choose, I prefer 2D animated production for TV. (Though I'd like to try working on a feature film and experience a change in pace!) I wish I could offer advice on how to start a production studio, but that's outside my area of expertise 😅 If you're looking on advice on how to produce your own series and where to start, I recommend "The Animation Producer's Handbook" by Lea Milic & Yasmin McConville. I've been reading it lately and it's been extremely insightful!
I’ve seen alot of indie creators make their own merch and sell it via etsy/store envy/Shopify (at least for charms, buttons, prints & apparel). For shirts, there’s lots or print-on-demand websites where you upload the artwork and request the sizes/quantity that you want (one example I’ve seen is Stickermule.com). As for plush toys, there’s a website called makeship, where you can create campaigns (kinda like a lil kickstarter) to have plush designs made. If you reach the pre-order goal, they go into production! Pretty cool, def worth checking out. As for toys, I’m not sure to be honest because I don’t have experience with manufacturing products like that😅 but the other resources I mentioned are a great place to start! I’d say the key to success when it comes to selling merch is making sure there is an audience/following for it. I hope this helps!
This is so informative! Love all the examples you used. Say if I had made a pitch bible would you be willing to look it over on discord and critique it? I'd love some advice 🥺🥺🥺
Thanks for commenting! At the moment I'm unable to critique pitches, but I'm definitely considering creating a community Discord in the future! So stay tuned for that c: ✨
Thank you for watching! From what I’ve been told, it’s not recommended to send unsolicited pitches to studios; it’s best to get an Agent or Manager to help arrange a pitch meeting with a potential buyer. (I’m still learning how to do that myself) Hope that helps!
I don't offer reviews on pitch bibles; I made this video to share what I've learned from courses I've taken and feedback I've received on my own pitch bible through mentorship experience. If you'd like feedback on your work, your best bet might be to take a class with live instruction (which is what I did). Here's a couple of courses I know of that are starting this week that offer reviews: www.projectcity.tv/projects/1880/2023-02-27/creating-a-pitch-bible www.stage32.com/classes/Stage-32-4-Part-Class-How-to-Package-Pitch-and-Sell-Your-Feature-Film Both of these sites have TONS of workshops and on-demand videos for reference at varying price points. 🙌🏽
@@Piixelatte These look good. If I didn't work on Wednesdays I would take that class. The other one seems to mainly focus on films rather than tv series. However, these links have given me an idea to look into other classes like these. Thank you very much. You're an inspiration.
I know sometimes classes can be tricky to balance with work availability, but the good news is that there’s always different courses circulating every few months or so! Hopefully you’ll be able to find one that aligns with your schedule and works for you. Glad to be of assistance! :)
I want to write a pitch bible for an I idea I have for a serialized series. What exactly do you recommend I put on there? I ask this concerning the overarching plot and character arcs.
Hi Ryan! I would advise to add the components mentioned in the video, starting with a logline & synopsis. That should give a concise and general idea of what your story is about. Character arcs aren’t necessary, just a brief description of their personality, goals, and relationship to other characters. Less is more! If all you have is an idea so far, I would challenge you to explore that further. Think about what your central theme is. What is the main character’s objective, the stakes (consequences) of not achieving that goal, why this story matters, and how to get your target audience invested in finding out what happens next. I hope that helps! Best of luck 🙌🏼✨
@@ryanw5500 Well, I can't write your pitch bible for you 😅 As the creator, you have the freedom to make your world anything you want it to be! I struggle with world-building myself, but here's some books that I found very useful: "On Writing and Worldbuilding: Volume 1 & 2" by Timothy Hickson www.amazon.com/Writing-Worldbuilding-I-Timothy-Hickson/dp/1798967650/ref=pd_bxgy_vft_none_sccl_1/138-1771640-4201228?pd_rd_w=y6U16&content-id=amzn1.sym.26a5c67f-1a30-486b-bb90-b523ad38d5a0&pf_rd_p=26a5c67f-1a30-486b-bb90-b523ad38d5a0&pf_rd_r=YDYX7FZJJRKZ8Q2V7M3W&pd_rd_wg=77zup&pd_rd_r=76c3f556-3f11-4964-81c0-0bcefd61ec88&pd_rd_i=1798967650&psc=1
@@Piixelatte That's not what I meant. I already know what world I want to create. I was just wondering what aspects I should focus on when describing it. I don't want to overwhelm the reader with too many details. I'm just trying to follow your advice on less is more. Also, thanks for the suggestion on that book. I also appreciate your advice very much.
Aahh I see; then I suggest using images to demonstrate the style/tone/overall feel of the world, because that’ll paint a better picture that describing it in writing! If you’re not able to illustrate it yourself, make sure to site your sources and credit the images you’re using. You can also use a comparison in the description. Example: it’s “Cyberpunk” meets “Phantom of the Opera” (this establishes the story taking place in a gritty futuristic world, with dramatic musical elements and possible romance). Using comparison will ground the reader in something familiar so they can better understand what you’re going for.
Hey, thanks for the content! Just one question: if I'm a little bit of an artist myself, as a cartoon creator I get to choose and create characters design ?
Hi, Lucas! Being an artist definitely helps demonstrate your vision for the overall look of your story. However there's two sides to this coin, and it depends on what kind of deal you get with the studio you pitch your idea to; you can either be brought on as a character designer for your series, or hire character designers to join your crew (or both!). One thing I will say is to keep an open mind when it comes to your character designs, and not get married to your initial ideas. Alot of things are bound to change in the early developmental stages of your project, and you'll be collaborating with other creatives to make your story the best version it can possibly be, and streamlining the designs to fit the needs of the animation pipeline. (Look at pearl's design from the Steven Universe pilot compared to the greenlit series, HUGE difference!). TLDR; yes you can design your own characters, but be open to tweaking those designs down the road :) I hope that makes sense!
@@Piixelatte Wow thanks a lot for the reply! I have to admit, sometimes is hard to be humble and let others tweak my own creation haha but I know that great cartoons are never done alone but with tons of help! Anyways, new sub and waiting for new vids :)
My best advice would be to look for online classes/workshops that are taught live, (so you can ask questions) or ask your closest friends/family to look over your stuff and give you feedback! It’s important to gage how people react to your story/characters to know what’s working and what needs editing. That’s just my two cents!
