Her nose is too long and too small (nostril is dropping) and her right upper lip needs to be bigger and her lips need to come down a couple mm. There’s also an angle issue. . Her eyes are also too big, too wide open and there’s an angle issue in the right eye. Her forehead is also too big . If you’re a beginner it’s a great start and I’m sure if you keep practicing your skills will improve. Really study your reference photo and compare your drawing and don’t be afraid to make necessary adjustments. Sometimes you have to step back and look at your work. It’s hard to tell what’s off when you’re up close. Best of luck to you in your drawing
