That’s probably the most generic ”indie pop” song I’ve ever heard. Literally every little melody and chord progression is predictable. Almost in a parodic way. Not critiquing your production btw, you’re probably a good producer. But the guy who wrote this song seems to be in the need of a bit of inspiration and creativity. Maybe it’s AI written? Wouldn’t be a surprise.
Really helpful! My only constructive feedback would be to use less reverb on the vocal and more delay textures. I like to put a slap delay, a medium time delay with a slight widener and a long tail delay that’s even wider. This will spread your vocal and help glue it to the mix without taking away from the clarity of the vocal. It shouldn’t be obvious when the track is going, but it adds a sheen to the vocal and makes it pop.
It’s a taste thing. I like a reverb-y wash on personally. I love when I can’t make out the lyrics at first, but have to go back and ‘decipher’ them. Maybe that’s weird, ha
aside from dabbling in logic in highschool and college Im not in the prodcuction space. Dont know how I even got to this video - but impressed by your work brother and just wanted to let you know,
