How to Write an Awesome "Why This College?" Essay

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The "Why us" or "Why this college" essay is a chance for you to demonstrate why you're a great match for a particular school. In this college essay guide, I'll cover how to write a great "Why us" essay, the most common mistakes to avoid, and some things you'll probably want to be sure you do. as well as a few of my favorite approaches.
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00:00 - Intro
00:53 - Common mistakes to avoid
04:31 - How to find all the resources you need
07:07 - 3 approaches to writing a "Why us" essay
15:57 - What if you don't know what you want to study?
18:52 - 3 ways to make sure your essay is doing its job
19:45 - Additional resources
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@gmh471 11 месяцев назад

The problem is that for most kids, they decide that they like particular college precisely because of things like the location, the campus, the size, ranking, athletics, the town, majors offered, etc. This is why I think the "why College X" essay is perhaps the worst supplemental essay topic used by colleges as it invites students to write the phoniest of all the phony essays they are forced to write. "I am excited to study thermodynamics with Professor Cohen after reading his article Thermodynamics In The 21st Century in New England Science Journal" even though the essay reader will never know that I found this information via a Google search and the reader has no idea one way or the other whether I actually read the article (I didn't). Essentially, the students who are able to be the most effective BS artists will win the admissions game. And it IS a game.

@Collegeessayguy 9 месяцев назад

Thanks for chiming in!

@davidohaegbulam9988 8 месяцев назад

It really is a game... And I'm going to win.

@gustavolopezsanchez3249 8 месяцев назад

@@davidohaegbulam9988 I hope you won lmao

@LoremidChaliphate 8 месяцев назад

@@gustavolopezsanchez3249 dude it's been only 4 days since he commented

@user-vu2jb3iw5b 8 месяцев назад

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@amytrinnaman2211 2 года назад

I'm so grateful for your generosity in sharing your amazing tips!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Happy to help! Thanks for watching. :)

@madhushriiyengar7156 2 года назад

I usually stress a lot about my college applications but when I watch your videos, that stress fades into thin air. Thank you for helping me with my essays and interviews, Ethan!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Thanks for sharing! :) You got this.

@Michael-lb3hh Год назад

I'm grinding through so much of your content on your RU-vid and your website because it has provided so much structure to this entire college application process. As a result, I'm less likely to feel overwhelmed. Thank you so much Ethan !

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@kalisanath4833 Год назад

Thank you so much for this amazing video and webinars you share! Looking forward to learning more helpful tips from you!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@moneyhearts 8 месяцев назад

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@kalkidanyibeltal4360 Год назад

true your value is JOY and its contagious. I feel a relief whenever I see your courses because the process is scary and intimdatin for me and I'm like "you got all these resources don't give up on your dream." I seriously don't know what I would do without you. I mean it!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Thanks for being here.

@evilgriffing1825 2 года назад

Your videos are so awesome because they immediately get my brain churning with ideas for my essays unlike any other tips channel. For someone with only 20k subscribers you put out more useful content that anyone else, thank you and keep making these wonderful videos!!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Thanks for watching! :)

@WendyBeatoVarsityAbroad 2 года назад

This is so good. Your mistake examples are so literal and funny! The students are definitely going to get this! :) Thanks for sharing!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Glad you enjoyed it!

@mahasaleh Год назад

I feel so lucky I found such an informative video. Thank you so much, Mr. Ethan!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@mariamawhai369 2 года назад

You are a life saver when it comes to these topics relating to colleges. How amazing,at least we still have a number of choices that allow for time. Thank you very very much for putting these kids through the right methods of doing things.

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@jon62314 2 года назад

Your sample essays are the best! Thank you Ethan!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

You're so welcome!

@machikr Год назад

I love your cheerfulness and great spirit almost as much as the wonderful insights and tips! Thank you for helping out all those who are writing their hearts out to craft the essays in their final stretch moments!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@stylernola Год назад

I really like how down to earth you are! I just watched the webinar you did today, 8-4-22.

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@annerewey4023 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@ramapandey9579 2 года назад

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@hihi-og6nm 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

You are so welcome! Thanks for chiming in.

@taviishbothra2320 Год назад

Thanks, college essay guy! You helped me streamline the college process a lot!!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@lifewithrobert2 Год назад

Thanks a lot; just finished the why us for Warren Wilson College. Your tips were really helpful!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Glad it was helpful!

@klfeiyeen 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@miltonvento1822 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@nirelleksenasitchoa7652 Год назад

😂 The comparison to a date really puts it in perspective for me! Thank you! This was incredibly helpful.

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@dc4067 Год назад

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@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@marcelamorais577 Год назад

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@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@viviencheng_ 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@DrBStepsToTheFutureLLC 2 года назад

Thank you Ethan for helping me help students!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@nourrr5910 Год назад

Thank youu so much you inspired me to write my essay and it turned out ✨perfect✨

@Collegeessayguy 11 месяцев назад

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@rafidchowdhury1036 6 месяцев назад

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@Collegeessayguy 4 месяца назад

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@chitrasubbu7397 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@lilianatawoi741 Год назад

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@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@felipemendonca9451 Год назад

Came from the Webinar

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Thanks for being here. :)

@julieherrera239 Год назад

Great examples and guidance!!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Glad it was helpful!

@nataliemcfadden8643 Год назад

This was so helpful, thank you

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

You're welcome!

@Jayvyn-sz1sx 10 месяцев назад

Honestly, you've given me so much great advice that I give you permission to use the work "lowkey" more

@Collegeessayguy 9 месяцев назад

LOL thank you!

@chandramdutta3328 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Thanks! Our video editor is amazing. :)

@ceilingfloor6797 7 месяцев назад

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@Collegeessayguy 4 месяца назад

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@leomunguba5939 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

I appreciate that! Thanks for watching.

@diegoschlussel Год назад

God, you're amazing! In two months I have to start my applications for universities across The Netherlands and I'm more than thrilled to use and thrive with these tips when applying to my universities! Wish me luck everyone 🙏

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@profbolt9462 Год назад

A video on, "Why you need a scholarship essay" from a particular would very much be helpful...Could you share some tips on how to go about such an essay?

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Check out this guide: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/how-to-write-a-scholarship-essay

@Hermonyyy Год назад

I just finished my personal essay for my common application and started with my supplemental essay and using your methods and tips I am going really fast. If I got accepted by the Universities I choose, I promise you are the only person that I will mention and thank i.e. after my parents😊. Thank you very very very much Mr. Ethan you have made my life easier.(not a lie)

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@derickfigueroa8526 Год назад

did you get accepted?

@sheepish7815 Год назад

im writing an artist statement essay, and there are like 3 resources max, I pray for future students you will find a way in the future to help us with it!

@Collegeessayguy 11 месяцев назад

Thanks for the suggestion! We'll make a note of it.

@christinas8720 Год назад

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@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@br1ann88 Год назад

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@Collegeessayguy Год назад

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@duongothuy8649 5 месяцев назад

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@juliagu6165 2 года назад

“lowkey” was absolutely used correctly. hats off to the coolest college guy on the internet

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Thanks for the validation. :)

@adiso7613 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@amanueldaniel6431 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@ifeanyianyoku8650 2 года назад

Great guide

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

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@hawimegersa9560 Год назад

Thank you!! '

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

You're welcome!

@magicthegatheringlover4277 Год назад

I love how a great deal of this video is: it is called a "why this college essay" but don't write down the reasons you are most likely to want that college. Why have I (and I assume most people) chosen the schools I did? The ranking and location with consideration to the weather

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Thanks for watching!

@lulu_8615 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

You're welcome! :)

@uygunpolatov551 11 месяцев назад

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@pretentiousdelinquent 8 месяцев назад

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@Collegeessayguy 8 месяцев назад

Thanks for watching :)

@quanger6496 2 года назад

THANK YOU

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

YOU'RE WELCOME :)

@arjunarun9174 Год назад

These videos are really helpful. Is it possible to go into depth with a specific university's essay prompt, e.g. UMichigan's Ross Admissions portfolio.

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Thanks! We have crash courses for over 70 schools on the website here: www.collegeessayguy.com/supplemental-essays Check it out!

@nanomacaron232 2 года назад

I’m not applying for a college, but instead this really good high school that offers majors I’m interested in. Although, this still really helps, thanks!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Awesome! Thanks for watching.

@nanomacaron232 2 года назад

@@Collegeessayguy If you don’t mind I have a question. Do you think it’s appropriate to directly mention their mission statement if you explain why it’s important to you? Or should it not be mentioned at all?

@shadrackboakye8002 2 года назад

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@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

I hope it's a lot! Thanks for watching. :)

@ndirangujames2028 Год назад

Awesome tips. Please make one on why major.

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Thanks for the tip. We have a guide for the "Why Major" essay here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/why-major-college-essay

@ndirangujames2028 Год назад

@@Collegeessayguy Thanks

@Banana-Joanne 2 года назад

damn seeing all these sample essays makes me wonder if mine are good enough haha. I've got work to do.

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

You got this!

@catherinexie4376 Год назад

Thank you Ethan! This video is so helpful for me ! !! I have a question that bothers me for a long time, which is: can I mention institutes, programs or labs that aren't in the specific college (such as the arts and science college) I am applying to? The essay requirement is "Considering the specific undergraduate school you have selected, describe how you intend to explore your academic and intellectual interests at the University of Pennsylvania".

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

That should be OK! Here's a free guide to the UPenn essays: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/upenn-university-pennsylvania-supplemental-essay

@catherinexie4376 Год назад

@@Collegeessayguy Thank you！Your advice has been so helpful in my application season!

@annaheloise9838 2 года назад

Hi Ethan! Thanks so much for your step by step analyzing the WHY US ESSAY, it really helps me a lot. By the way, I just bought The Best 386 Colleges from The Princeton Review, which is the 2021 version. Can I still use that as a guide for students applied this year? Will it mislead me somehow?

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Your 2021 version should work great! :)

@marcthompson5442 2 года назад

Hi Ethan, great content as always. Will you please clarify your 2nd point at the end during the "3 ways to make sure..." segment? You mention that students should bold their reasons but you never state that they should remove these bolded points before submitting their final versions on their applications. On your CEG website's guide to the "Why Us" essays, you specifically state not to leave the bolded words in the final draft and that you only did that in the examples to highlight the context. I've had students argue that "Ethan told me to bold my reasons in his video!" and so I'm just requesting a definitive answer right here, please. :)

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Hi there! Thanks for asking. My definitive answer: Unbold before submitting!

@spongeyamon 2 года назад

Every single time I watch your video, I learn so much and I'm taking notes like crazy. You are so informative, engaging and totally entertaining! My daughter and I are vegetarians... LOVE YOUR MEAT & POTATOES "edit"! Ha Ha. We are half-way thru your paid webinar series and it's soooo worth the money! Love the flexibility and access to materials! Thanks so much for easing us into this nail-biting process. ~Mommy of a senior in Texas!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Wow, thank you! Glad you're here. :)

@dc4067 Год назад

it was great tonight

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Thanks for watching!

@SubhaRaj-ri3xv 4 месяца назад

Can you make a video on how to write a essay on "why this major?".

@Collegeessayguy 3 месяца назад

Noted! Thank you

@victorchidera4966 Год назад

First I want to start by saying your videos are really helpful to me, thank you now my question is as an international student (Nigeria) Is it OK to include some of my traditional experiences in my essay?

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Yes, that is OK!

@HydraulicBeanbag Год назад

You aren’t too old to say low-key 🌝. My calc teacher used to say it all the time

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

LOL. Thank you!

@thebosstex1172 6 месяцев назад

I have a strength of writing pretty well. I’m no author though, nor in any profession I could use it for. I also feel like I could hone it more. What degree/major in college should I go for that could potentially lead to that pays thrivable income?

@eqlimatahery4698 2 года назад

that is great

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Thanks for watching!

@revlordmusic4440 Год назад

this video actually got me into NYU without even giving them my friggin SAT lmao

@Collegeessayguy 11 месяцев назад

Awesome! Congrats to you!

@sthv777 Год назад

The uni I am applying to has 5 different options to choose from for these supplemental essays. "Why us ?" is one of them but there is also another option to write about my strategy to solve an issue and i think i can do better on later but i don't have much idea on HOW to write that whereas for the "why us" essay, well your vid is so helpful. So, I am confused. Which one do you think is a better choice ? Plus, do uni prefer "why us" essay to other essays ?

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

The "Why us" essay is likely a good choice if there are multiple prompt options. Of course the choice is yours!

@anivaldosambo7394 2 года назад

Hey Ethan, Thanks for the video. if you don't mind I would like to ask you a question: for the essays that we don't have much room ( 150 to 250 words) How can we get that detailed information there?

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

It's possible. I recommend taking a no-fluff approach. Maybe you'll only mention 1 or 2 school-specific qualities in your essay compared to the usual 3-7. For more help, take a look at my guide to the "Why us" essay here: www.collegeessayguy.com/blog/why-this-college-essay

@anivaldosambo7394 2 года назад

@@Collegeessayguy Thank you very much

@giulianaayleenfernandez1610 2 года назад

Thank you for everything Ethan! I cannot find the chart´s link. Can you leave it here in the comments? I would love to use that chart to organize my why us essays.

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Hey! Thanks for bringing this to our attention. The link to the chart is now included at the blog post linked in the description. Here is the direct link to the chart as well: docs.google.com/document/d/1SC43Y8HgsPlnlVmrzJkjmwFPKMiNnt07uix8m_p7zBw/edit?usp=sharing Hope this helps!

@adewaleadenle2022 2 года назад

hello Ethan, do you have any videos or points for international students who can't write essays in general.

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Hi there! My upcoming online courses will help you write your college essays. More info on them here: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses (Note: they're pay-what-you-can, and we'll approve your request no matter how much!)

@juliesisk2132 2 года назад

Great example essays. Can not find the chart anywhere...or anywhere that it is printable!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Thanks! The chart is linked in the blog post in the description. Here is a direct link to the chart which you can download/copy for your own use. docs.google.com/document/d/1SC43Y8HgsPlnlVmrzJkjmwFPKMiNnt07uix8m_p7zBw/edit?usp=sharing

@quinmreecorey8663 2 года назад

I believe you used "low key" correctly, not too old

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

LOL thanks for that!

@iambehryz3421 Год назад

I don't know what is low key, but I am sure ur low key is great

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

LOL thank you!

@shujayethossain6554 Год назад

When submitting essays to schools, should I highlight specific word/senetneces to draw the reader’s attention? Thank you!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Nope! Most applications tend to not allow text formatting anyway. Hope this helps!

@alyssanestingen5073 Год назад

what do i do if i already wrote my main essay on how i fell in love with law? I plan on majoring in political science, but having discussed that in my personal essay already I feel like it would be repetitive? Should I talk about my other interests outside of Law and what the school offers for that? Or dive deeper into my law passion?

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

It might be a good idea to round yourself out in other parts of your application and mention other things besides your passion for law. :)

@reneebushey1251 9 месяцев назад

Question - if you are applying to a college that your parents went to or that you have a family connection to, how do you recommend incorporating that?

@Collegeessayguy 9 месяцев назад

You'll have an chance to answer questions about this in the school's application itself, so you don't need to write about it in your essays.

@tevian9404 2 года назад

I think you are my favourite American out of the Americans I haven't met!

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

LOL. Thanks!

@johndylens9297 2 года назад

I have a question. If I am a basketball player, in addition of the specific course I will attend, can't a talk about the basketball team of the university that I'll integrate without forgetting to state my admiration for the coach and some players? And also can't I talk about specific character please???

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

It's your essay/application, so it's ultimately up to you. My advice to you is-answer the question(s) the prompt is asking. It's not always necessary to tie all your essays back to a sport or activity you engage in regularly. There are plenty of opportunities elsewhere in your application to make your point about those areas of your life. Try to keep your essays essential so that you're displaying what is important to you AND what the admissions officers are asking for.

@chloe-kq3gq 8 месяцев назад

6:40

@taijariley5753 2 года назад

What if you're interested in applying to a school that is located outside of the US? Would it be okay to bring up location then?

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Maybe. It's ultimately up to you! The more specific you can get, the better. :)

@cicilblinkz4204 Год назад

Can I type my name at the portion of the common app general demanding for ED signature??

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Yep, you'll have the option to do that when applying ED/EA/REA, depending on the school in Common App.

@HelloHello-hv1kd Год назад

5:43

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Thanks for watching!

@berosta7337 Год назад

After watched couple dozens of videos just realized something. Doesn't Ethan looks like Steve? If you instead of asking who is Steve and you just thought of Steve Jobs I believe he really does.

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

LOL that is a first!

@allenfrederick675 Год назад

Please can you deal with statement of purpose for graduates?

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Noted. Thanks for the suggestion.

@clawd_not_cloud 10 месяцев назад

My school is only giving me 100 words or fewer for this question ='(

@Collegeessayguy 9 месяцев назад

We might have a free guide for the school's prompt you're asking about. Check here: www.collegeessayguy.com/supplemental-essays

@beamlakfekadu1421 2 года назад

Ethan this is a great video🙏 Please help me! I am an Ethiopian and I am really passionate to get into a US college. But last year I got rejected from 20 schools. I have alot of problems. Is there anyway I can get help from you

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Hi there! Thanks for reaching out. My next round of online courses is starting in September; I'd love to have you join in. The courses are pay-what-you-can (and no one is turned away for lack of funds). In the courses there are opportunities to receive live feedback from me on your essays and to find a writing/accountability partner in our Discord community. Here's a link where you can learn more: www.collegeessayguy.com/college-essay-courses

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Also, I recommend trying to get in contact with your local Education USA center: educationusa.state.gov/find-advising-center

@rasikav.5955 Год назад

hi - from the webstream for the giveaway!!

@Collegeessayguy Год назад

Thanks for being here. :)

@foxywaxy4279 10 месяцев назад

I lvoe your jokes

@Collegeessayguy 9 месяцев назад

LOL thank you!

@vanshithbhandari1696 2 года назад

Hey Ethan! So I assume that you've read Geronimo Stilton(GS). I actually I know what I'll study but I've always been interested in exploring and I still am because I feel that there's a LOT o stuff I don't know about. So I am planning to write my essay - just like Geronimo Stilton goes on adventures exploring different worlds(I mean parts of the world) I wish to explore the areas of study/culture etc etc in their college. Also I want to study CS which makes me relatable to GS as that dude is a journalist and he still explores different stuff and integrates it into his work in the form of publishing articles, as I want to integrate the different fields if study I'll be exploring into CS - which in my case this essay will be for Cornell and Princeton. And so I wanna write my essay this way. What do you think about this? Would greatly appreciate an answer from you. And your advice has helped me a lot with writing my personal statement. Thanks PS: You can be a great beat boxer haha

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Overall it could work! Just make sure you're relating the essay back to you rather than GS. Try outlining this topic to get a better idea if it'll work for you. :) Love the creativity!

@vanshithbhandari1696 2 года назад

Thank you so much Ethan for the response! Greatly appreciate it. And love you and your content

@wonjang8615 2 года назад

What would be some other good, impressive facts to get out of my school research?

@Collegeessayguy 2 года назад

Anything that is specific/unique to the school-- that way, whoever reads your essay knows you did some quality research. :)

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@Collegeessayguy 9 месяцев назад

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@@Collegeessayguy thanks!

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