The thing that sets this off from being a good introduction is “This easy will…” When writing an essay, avoid announcing things; explain them. Instead of saying “This essay will explain…” Write “The three main benefits of using technology are portability, features, and price.” This comes off as a good way of explaining the thesis instead of announcing it. Hope this helps. :))
But in an essay we never write a thesis that functions as an announcement like. "In this essay I am going to talk about ......" you could use a blueprint thesis statement.
we dont know where these videos start or end why dont u put the question in all your videos so we can be caught up on any video that appears on the feed???
Helpful video to explain the basics of introductory paragraphs...However, NEVER, EVER, EVER announce to the reader what you are writing about..."This essay will explain..." YIKES!