Indeed my brotha, i dont, this world needs to improve, this better or worse complex people get comes from money hungry 3%erz. Music can be found in nature, a good bar can be found in a simple sentance, we hinder ourselves by selling ourselves short, to ourselves and those around us. Remember that, and keep going
@@loud3663 I think this is the best mentality. Because your SoundCloud might have some top tier bangers in there, it won’t get the recognition it deserves, but rather than shitting on urself be proud of it. Or you might have some shit dead tunes on there in which case. Keep up the work my bro ❤️😂
This video is a banger y’all. Great tips for all skill levels. As a singer trying to up their pen/punchline game, I usually try to write in the moment. So hooks come more easily than verses. I got “become the beat” down.. but staying on topic and forging those punchlines have been a struggle. (hooks are dope but you can’t tell a story on hooks alone, my songs feel scattered at times like the narrator said) thanks so much for the content! This advice is invaluable.
Remember in English class they taught when writing a story you need a Beginning, Middle and Conclusion it works for song writing too. Beginning=Intro in a nutshell what's the topic of this song depending on how you structure your songs this will also be your Middle=Telling the story this is when you get to the essence of the song, tell us what's going on in more detail, any drama and so on. Conclusion=wrap it up tell us what you learned, maybe you're still trying to figure it out. The hook and your punchlines should be the most emotionally driven sections but keep it simple you want the listener to really hear those parts clearly and feel what you're saying because this is what they will mostly remember. With your punchlines how you say it tone, emphasis, pronunciation etc.. matters. Something that's considered lyrically simple can sound better than something that's more complexed if you have a good delivery. Hopefully this helps ya and whomever else that decides to read this. Practice makes perfect keep it up!
I can write verses but I can’t write hooks to save my life. People think hooks are easier to write than verses but I don’t! Jealous that comes easy to you man
Day 4 on my 16 bars for 16 days, an rapping to my friends an fam it’s interesting running into flow problems or in another one of my cases bar structure and syllables matching from bar to bar. An sticking on topics been 50/50 the one today I got the feedback that he got lost in the middle but I brought it back so staying on topic is definitely what I’m working on
I’ve been trying to improve my rhyme schemes recently. As a beginner it’s easy to get comfortable with a basic flow. I’ve found playing around with the rhyme schemes helps improve flow. Also, I just wrote my first bar that successfully breaks the bar line. This is a great way to switch flows mid verse.
The more syllables rhymed together or rhyming a sentence with the following sentence word for word or doing run on sentences that never stop like a never ending story with rhymes are all great tools that I’ve come up with on my own
I’m a female and I’ve never rapped/written lyrics in my life, but a mutual ex friend of mine decided to write a diss about me and being my mother into it, so I’m gonna fight fire with fire 😚
I have watched many videos about double entendres. I'm from a region (Africa) where this technique is deemphasised. I feel if your rhymes are one with the beat, interwoven with the subject with excellent poetic devices, and unpredictability, then your raps are just fine.
I don't care about being super lyrical I like the club style and energy without rappin tongue twisters. I'd rather punch in than write but I'm in between low and mid level
@@miguelsosa5972 you don't need a persona. People will love you for being you and they'll love your vulnerability through your art. Eminem may have a persona but he stayed true to himself. 2pac had a persona bc that's what the world viewed him as. Just be you and let the world decide. All the gimmicks and bullshit to create an image is how careers end
I been writing for a few months now. I can make pretty basic lines on my own. But if I’m remixing something I’m a lot better at writing something w substance. I guess I’ll have to practice that way somehow.
Been working on rapping at pretty much 28 ND half and I kinda get myself all over the place and not as organized with my lyrics I know I gotta practice chorus more and especially like you siad topic thank you for this vid. I get my self caught up because I'm 30 and I get worried ill never be able to structure stuff together to atleast put on shows for people and all that but I know my issue is consintrstion organization and chorus and topic structures. Thanks again
thanks, this is really helpful. I'm just a beginner but I learned how to "become the beat" super early actually its just sticking to a topic and thinking of good bars is hard for me
Thanks bro. :). Good video, i am on the Edge of realise as i know now that i need to improve. I dont feel like anything i rap is good enough… And i always feel like i need a beat that gives me the type of vibe that im vibing with. Pop rap / hiphop is my thing i think. I somehow feel stuck and have emotions that should i quit or keep on going… when i quit i feel hopeless… music is somehow something that motivates me to live… but at the same time i dont think what im doing is good enough.. 😅😅😅
I know how you feel but I’ve learned that you’re not gonna be satisfied ever if you don’t like what you create remember it takes years and years to get extremely good at something it’s just up to you to put that work in and love what you do my lyrics aren’t that good either but I love telling stories in a rhyming format so that alone pushes me to keep going you got this
How can I learn to use more complex words, I'm stuck with basic lyrics when I freestyle in discord but I don't understand punchlines and how to make them
(Verse 1) Mystic words that I convey Flowing like a river in May My mind's an enigma, can't you see? A labyrinth that's just for me Chorus: My rhymes are twisted, hard to follow A maze of thoughts that's hard to swallow But if you listen closely, you might find A deeper meaning that's left behind (Verse 2) I spit these bars, a code to unlock Secrets hidden in every block My voice echoes through the night A beacon for those in plight Chorus: My rhymes are twisted, hard to follow A maze of thoughts that's hard to swallow But if you listen closely, you might find A deeper meaning that's left behind (Bridge) The rhythm flows, a wave of sound My emotions unleashed, unbound A world that's hard to comprehend But one that I'll always defend Chorus: My rhymes are twisted, hard to follow A maze of thoughts that's hard to swallow But if you listen closely, you might find A deeper meaning that's left behind (Outro) So listen closely to what I say My words are meant to lead the way A path that's hard to navigate But one that's worth the risk to take 📌 Pin it please 🥺. Rate it 1/100
i would say a hard 90! its really good though! I mean it reminds me somethin of 2pac or eminem like in the bridge i feel like eminem has a part he would do there like younger em and the verses remind me of something 2pac would say It has charmed me alot!
Honestly dude I lose respect when the topic of someone's rap is how good they rap secondly that first verse is just cheap what relevance is may? You gotta bring meaning to radom shit not just input random shit
Im a 14 year old with no rythmic ability and im just trying to think of verses to add on to my favorite songs for fun. I have a great vocabulary and mind but thats it lol.
Listen to multilingual rappers from dhh like $ , brodha V , shah rule , Talha anjum (kinda) and try to figure out, how they connect lines and make sense...and try that for yourself too...
So like if someone named Moose With Magic talked shit And I was like Your name is Moose with Magic And you still live with your mom The truth is tragic Would that be like an example of what you’re talking about Just saying words that rhyme with a name then adding words behind it to make it make sense
Bro got the rhymes but not the flows. If anyone wants another simple tip for writing good flows is to pay attention to how the syllables match up with those 1st and 2nd words (advanced) example- they call me MOOSE of MAGIC, bro I’m TOO FANTASTIC. wearing the LOOSEst FABRIC, cause I shoot with maverick 1st has 3 syllables before the subject and the 2nd has 2 syllables.
I rap bcs i just simply enjoy it. I love hip hop music and been fascinated with how they put words together to make a song. But rao nowadays just ain't for me. Don't care what they say but most songs i hear today are pure garbage. No emotion...
Help I haven't even rapped for a month like I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing but I try to make it too complicated, I am not ready for that but I can find no way to make it basic enough How do I make it basic and more importantly, how do I make it not cringe
Hey man, if you feal like your lyrics are “ cringe “ maybe you should get some feedback form people around you, they might laugh at it but remember just a beginning.
Of course you can! Speed isn't everything in a rap song I hate that every rapper nowadays is trying to get on "par" thinking they have to speed rap or jam pack hundred syllables because the Top rapper does it
Be real in your rhymes tell a story and don’t be ashamed to admit you just don’t have it you don’t have the talent for that too many percent do very few do and I like that really truly have it don’t get the chance to so be real. Maybe you’re good at some other cat artistic think we can make some beats don’t do for money do it for the love of the art
Alr let's see if this works btw it's supposed to be fast, This how to rap guy, showed me how to sack my, puzzling lyrics and rhymes, That now make me cry When I hear it alive Give this comment a like I'd be happy you guys 👇
