Reposting a bad story and editing it to make it worse does not make for a better story. It makes for a horrible one. The storyline was janky and ridiculous to begin with. But then to edit out plot points? No. Just.... No. Don't bother.
pathetic copy of a story that has been out there for months, just changed the names and instead of Guadalajara, he went to San luis potosi. Ridiculous.