Your video was really good but i need to inform you about some stuff which will make you really better. Settings: Turn down Dynamic FOV to a low number like 30 because effects such as speed can affect your aim, also make this for damage tilt also because it gets really hard when your screen shakes when you get hit. Cool Tricks: If you want to disable shields you can switch to your axe and press left lick at the same tick so if the opponent was using the shield it will get disabled but also if the guy didn't raised it's shield he will take the sword damage, so think like you have a guaranteed hit or shield disabled. SMP: You already ate 2 gapples before the fight so i won't talk about saturation and stuff. You should throw your pot above you so you get the max amount or if you in a situation where you can get knocked away from your pot just throw it below you so you get a less amount but at least a good percentage of it. Cobwebs are OP when used correctly, if you have low health you can make a thing called web bubble where you place 2 webs and you get inside and gap and replace the cobweb if broken and it is really good when the kit doesn't have any pearls. Conclusion: You improved a lot and just need to improve in game sense, some tactics, game mechanics and your settings and after those congrats, you are now a good player. I hope you read all of this and if you need more info you can ask me.
Congratulations on the results for the one training session, you did very well, keep making videos and good luck with pvp (one day I believe you will beat Leowook)
I'd say look into finding the best sensitivity for you and the best dpi, I personally use 60 sens and 800 dpi which makes me aim a bit better. as for gaps I'd gap at 2 hunger bars down or when you are 4 hearts when you have a small amount of gaps, but when you have more gaps than I'd go for 6-4 hearts and idk if the hunger part is as important then, but making sure you have full saturation means you naturally heal back most of the damage you take
practice makes you perfect if u really want to get good at pvp just pvp tips from best players and just play and without knowing u will get good at pvp