@@Mushroomscorner skywings exist. they're literally just traditional western dragons. if mudwings had more protagonists and were more fleshed out as a tribe, they could be really exciting.
So what I’m getting is Serenity is the avatar and the skywings are the fire nation “Long ago the 7 tribes lived in harmony, but everything changed when the skywings attacked”
@@Yazh9 Long ago the 10 tribes lived together in harmony. Then, everything changed when the skywings attacked. Only serenity, master of the (crystal?) orb could stop them, but when the world needed it most, it vanished. Fifty years passed and Nocturna and I discovered the new avatar, a silkwing named Serenity. And although her silk spinning skills are great, she’s got a lot to learn before she’s ready to save anyone. But I believe, Serenity can save the world..
Idk how I feel about that. Everything was forced upon Snowfall with the gift of vision, basically crafted to force a change of mind over time. If she didn't grow in those few days, I feel she would've been pestered with more visions for weeks or maybe even months.
I made one myself but guided Chat gpt a bit more, this is what it came up with (i basically kept the main plot, just formated it differently bc the original format was a mess, also to give some of my own flavour texts): *Book 1: Wings of Legacy* It's been " a few years" between arc 3 and 4. We follow the perspective of Marina, a SeaWing princes who's strugling to live up to her mother's, Queen Tsunami, Legecy (yes, Chat GPT made Tsunami the next queen. And yes, Marina is a Riptami child). She is Tsunami's only heir (no clue what happened to Anemone and Auklet, did not elaborate on their fate even after asking) and the tribe feels like she's not suitable to be the next queen. At some point, a SkyWing named Nimbus arrives in the SeaWing kingdom, seeking shelter after one of his expirements backfired hard on him. Nimbus and Marina form a friendship bc they have the same burden of societal expectations (ofc it's society). Meanwhile, a powerful cult lead by the NightWing Vespera, who randomly changed into a SkyWing and then a SandWing during various points of this story, starts gaining power in the SeaWing kingdom. This cult causes Marina to become doubtious of her mother's reign (why? idk, and neither does Chat gpt) At some point Tidebreaker joins the picture, he's Marina's brother, and he helps her work trhough the struggles of becoming a better leader and trusting her mother in being a good ruler. Marina comes to realise that Vespera and her cult are damiging her, and she realises they're the bad guys in this story. By the end she stands up to the cult and breaks contact with them, feeling better about being an heir to the Seawing throne. *Book 2: Forge of Flames* Now we follow Nimbus, a young aspirering SkyWing inventor who has a tendency to blow stuff up (he also has Firescales but that's never brought up asside from that one time Chat gpt mentioned it, which i will include later on). After seeking shelter in the SeaWing kingdom, he goes to Jade mountain, where he meets up with his old friends Emberclaw, a Cleril child, and Eclipse, a NightWing seer who's currently Moonwatchers Pupil. Then chat gpt implies he just, starts school again bc why not. Ofc the previously mentioned cult is there and has seized control of Jade mountain. So Nimbus decides to try and figure out what they want bc he doesn't want his friends to be manipulated like Marina was He grows closer to Emberclaw, bc Emberclaw's a hybrid, and he has Firescales, thus they're both outcasts (this is the only time his firescales are mentioned lol) a minor antagonist named Sable appears, and he's working for the cult! Though Nimbus manages to stop him and reveal the cult's influence to Jade Mountain, freeing it from Vespera's grasp! Meanwhile, another antagonist named Pyroxis appears, who's a rogue animus SkyWing (of all things) and is seeking for a rumoured artifact that's supposed to be hidden in Jade Mountain. He crosses paths with the 3 dragonets, which causes them trouble. All the way from the SeaWing kingdom, Marina guides them with her newfound wisdom on leadership to overcome their current predicement. and while doing something that's not dealing with either the cult or Pyroxis, Nimbus stumbles upon ancient scrolls that speak of a NightWing that's somehow connected to the artifect and may hold the key to unreveling what the cult's up to (it's not officially mentioned by Chat gpt, but yeah, the cult's also looking for the artifect). So now they're going to look for more information they could possibly find about this mysterious NightWing those ancient scrolls speak of. *book 3: Embers of destiny* the POV switches to the Cleril child i mentioned earlier; Emberclaw. Who's struggling with being a hybrid that's also related to Peril! So he goes to do a training montage! (literally, qoute from Chat gpt; Emberclaw, seeking to prove himself, undergoes rigorous training to control his fire and enhance his combat skills. His journey includes encounters with dragons who challenge his place in the world, pushing him to overcome self-doubt. This is absically a training montage, especially since it's only supposed to be a small part of the story) after le training montage, Pyroxis decides to persue his quest for the artifect. Although they have no clue what the artifect actually does, they decide that him getting it must lead to catastrophic consequences, so they have to stop him. They decide to look more into the ancient scrolls, and eventually find a NightWing named Nocturne. It says that Nocturne basically info drops them all the info they should need about the artifect, that's anticlimactic. So yeah, Noturne is noted to be a very confused dragonet, She doesn't remember where she is or how she got there. But we don't care about that bc Emberclaw first needs to learn how to accept himself! Also, Marina's mentioned again, this time helping Emberclaw to accept himelf with motivitional messages! and it does mention that Pyroxis is till hanging around somewhere so that's cool *Book 4: Echoes of Eternity* This one follows Nocturne, and does a bit of a "go back in time" to when she woke up from her assumed slumber. Bc yes, this is an ancient dragon! specifically from Darkstalker's time! (I asked chat gpt how old she was, it said 2000 years. So I asked it if that was after Darkstalker's time and it told me no. She's from during Darkstalker's time. No wintroducing: Darkstalker the sequel) and she remembers jack shit, so she goes on a journey to recover her momories. She at some point finds an old prophecy about the artifect, and remembers what it was. The ai says she made a connection as to what Pyroxis is looking for, which is impossible, bc at this point, she shoudn't know yet who Pyroxis is (the summery states specifically that she meets up with Eclipse, Emberclaw and Nimbus later) then somehow we change perspective to Pyroxis as he decides to form an alligiance with Vespera and her cult bc, well, both are looking for the artifect. Then we go back to Nocturne, who suddenly finds her lost younger sister who's also 2000 years old and somehow still alive, Nyx. And somehow this helps her connect all the dots and remember everything. then it says she meets the main cast (interesting note: chat gpt says the main cast is Marina, Nimbus and Emberclaw. Which means that Marina at some point came over from the SeaWing kingdom and Eclipse dipped) and then we have the infodrop scene from Nocturne's perspective. In which it is revealed that the artifact can *rewrite the fabric of time itself*. So it's very fricking powerful. Anyways, they all realise they need to get that shit asap but woopsy, they're too late, as a member of the cult manages to grab the artifact in front of their eyes. And then the book ends. *Book 5: Harmony's eclipse* The book is from Eclipse's pov (he has replaced Marina once again), and we see a terrible devistation happening at the hands of Pyroxis that will destroy all of Pyrrhia (I asked Chat gpt, it has decided to make Pantala irrelivent to this story. It noted that one of the Cult members was a SilkWing when I asked more info on the cult, but that's it). But luckily for us, it hasn't happened yet. It was just Eclipse having a future vision. But that doesn't matter bc moments later, Pyroxis is noted to have used the artifact anyways, creating a time paradox of some sort. Vespera and her cult realises that this was a bad idea, and they turn on Pyroxis, going for a (In Chat GPT's words) Redemption arc. While Pyroxis decides to keep destroying the world for some reason. However, loosing the alligiance of the cult has caused Pyroxis to be defeatable, and the main protagonists create a plan to stop him. It then says thay Marina is a part of the main group again, despite it being stated earlier she never left the SeaWing kingdom, and that the five dragonets put asside their differences (as if that has been a problem in this arc) and to fight the dual threat that's the cult and Pyroxis (even though just minutes ago, the ai said the Cult had sides with the protagonists) They go through some trials that the artifact has created, and Eclipse uses her forsight to guide them. Eventually, they get to the artifact and neuterlize it, killing Pyroxis in the process. The cult disbands and everything goes back to somewhat normal, and using the artifact, they restore the damage it has caused (bc apparently the artifact can both cause and undo damage). After this, they start working towards a new era of peace. This story was... certainly something. I think it has actually the potential to be interesting, especially the story given in the last 2 books, but it needs some serious tweeking lol.
Well Luna does make sense as a nightwing name cause I’m pretty sure the context behind Luna the silkwing’s name is different (I’m pretty sure it’s based off a type of moth, might be wrong there) than how Luna the nightwing’s name is chosen (based off the moon I’m pretty sure). Also Luna is a super common name for an Ai to use, similar to eclipse. Also sorry if I ended up talking about the wrong character you were talking about.
I’m still in the progress of making it but it’s going to be about a hybrid sandwing/sea wing finding a new fan tribe called a axolotl wing. And then they discover the leader of the fan tribe used his animus powers to make an island. Which takes a while. For him to use it to capture all the dragon tribes and be the ruler of all of them.
this is what happened when I asked, and I actually rly like it!! Book 1: Shadows of the Eclipse Protagonist: Emberclaw, a Nightwing with a unique ability to see visions of the future in his dreams. Plot Summary: The peace between the dragon tribes is threatened when Emberclaw starts having ominous visions of an impending catastrophe-a solar eclipse that will plunge both Pyrrhia and Pantala into darkness. Despite his reluctance to believe in his own visions, Emberclaw sets out to warn the leaders of the tribes. Along the way, he encounters a group of dragons from different tribes who join him on his quest, including Cascade, a Seawing healer, and Flint, a Sandwing warrior. As they journey across the continents, they uncover ancient prophecies and forgotten lore about the origins of their world. However, they also attract the attention of a mysterious group of dragons who seek to use the eclipse for their own nefarious purposes. Ending: Emberclaw and his companions manage to warn the leaders of the tribes about the eclipse, but they realize that their journey has only just begun. The mysterious group of dragons remains a looming threat, and Emberclaw knows that they must uncover more secrets to prevent disaster. Book 2: Sands of Betrayal Protagonist: Mirage, a Sandwing scholar who is determined to uncover the truth behind the eclipse and the ancient prophecies. Plot Summary: As tensions rise between the tribes, Mirage delves into the archives of the Sandwing kingdom in search of answers. Along the way, she meets Solstice, a young Skywing with a talent for deciphering ancient texts, and Eclipse, a Nightwing historian with knowledge of forgotten legends. Together, they uncover evidence of a hidden society within the Sandwing kingdom that has been manipulating events for centuries. As they unravel the conspiracy, Mirage and her allies must confront betrayal from unexpected sources and navigate the dangerous politics of the dragon world. Ending: Mirage and her companions manage to expose the hidden society and prevent them from sabotaging the peace between the tribes. However, they realize that the conspiracy runs deeper than they had imagined, and they must continue their quest to uncover the truth. Book 3: Tides of Destiny Protagonist: Coral, a Seawing princess who must confront her own past to save her kingdom from a new threat. Plot Summary: When a series of mysterious disappearances rocks the Seawing kingdom, Coral is tasked with leading the investigation. With the help of her loyal friends, including Wave, a Seawing warrior, and Reef, a Mudwing diplomat, Coral discovers that the disappearances are linked to an ancient curse that threatens to destroy her kingdom. To break the curse, Coral must confront the ghosts of her past and uncover the truth about her family's legacy. Ending: Coral and her friends manage to break the curse and save the Seawing kingdom, but they realize that the threat is far from over. As they prepare to face the next challenge, they receive a cryptic message from Emberclaw, urging them to meet him at a hidden location. Book 4: Flames of Rebellion Protagonist: Blaze, a Skywing rebel who seeks to overthrow the tyrannical ruler of her kingdom. Plot Summary: As tensions between the tribes reach a boiling point, Blaze leads a group of Skywing rebels in a daring campaign against Queen Inferno's oppressive regime. With the help of her allies, including Thorn, a Rainwing guerrilla fighter, and Spark, a Seawing spy, Blaze uncovers evidence of corruption and injustice within the Skywing kingdom. However, their rebellion attracts the attention of Queen Inferno's loyalists, who will stop at nothing to crush the uprising. Ending: Blaze and her allies manage to overthrow Queen Inferno and establish a new government based on equality and justice. However, they soon realize that their victory is short-lived as a greater threat looms on the horizon. Book 5: Wings of Unity Protagonist: Harmony, a hybrid dragon from Pyrrhia and Pantala who holds the key to uniting the tribes against a common enemy. Plot Summary: As the solar eclipse draws near, Harmony embarks on a quest to unite the dragon tribes and prevent catastrophe. With the help of her friends from both continents, including Emberclaw, Mirage, Coral, and Blaze, Harmony seeks out the ancient artifacts that hold the power to stop the eclipse. Along the way, they must confront their own fears and insecurities and learn to trust each other despite their differences. As they journey to the heart of the eclipse, they discover the true nature of their world and the destiny that awaits them. Ending: Harmony and her allies succeed in stopping the eclipse and saving both Pyrrhia and Pantala from destruction. In the aftermath, the dragon tribes come together to form a new alliance based on mutual respect and cooperation. As they look to the future, Harmony realizes that their journey is far from over, but they will face whatever challenges come their way together. Throughout the five books, the protagonists face internal and external conflicts, encounter new allies and enemies, and uncover secrets that shape the destiny of their world. The overarching narrative explores themes of friendship, courage, and the power of unity in the face of adversity.
There are a few things I liked about this AI written story that I think could actually be fleshed out into a better book. The idea of the next arc focusing on the oldest dragon ancestors and how animus magic specifically originated would be very interesting. We only know how one tribe, the Nightwings, gained their animus power (through three full moons), but we are never given an explanation for why some other tribes are able to be born with magic, and why some simply cannot. We could delve into what the FIRST dragons looked like, and lived like, with maybe bringing one of those ancestors back somehow. Nocturna's ability to see the dead appealed to me quite a lot, considering it is a unique ability that I'd never thought of before, and which adds a layer of mysticism to the group's dynamic. The ability of speaking with the dead isn't that far from being able to read minds, so perhaps Nocturna's power is a mutation from mindreading, which came about through highly uncommon circumstances regarding her hatching. Maybe Nocturna isn't actually a modern day Nightwing, rather her egg was left in stasis in an old ruin forgotten to time, and is only hatching now because after thousands and thousands of years, it has been exposed to moonlight. Nocturna's description should be different than a normal nightwing, something perhaps more primal, and her power is different, because their powers were just different thousands of years ago. This is throwing darts at a wall, but these were the things I found most intriguing. I mostly just want something different than another political power struggle, because other than the second arc, thats what the other two focused on. The conflicts we've had are: World war, ancient BBEG trying at world domination, societal oppression eclipsed by another ancient BBEG this time trying to enslave the entire world, and what I'm proposing isnt entirely fleshed out yet, but it has something to do with a conflict driving the characters to seek knowledge from the first dragons. Play it out like a dnd campaign with dungeon delving and discovering ancient artifacts and long lost dieties maybe, idk.
Honestly, I think this arc is very much salvageable. The first book in this is good with our protagonist actually being the one to cause the problem to arise and bringing along discord under what they believed were good intentions. Some great ideas were brought in the other books but just kept adding in new craps when it didn’t need it. Plus The Shadowweaver is a pretty cool name for a villain that I quite like
Book 1: Pitcher, a lost leafwing meets a sand ain hybrid named Scorain who brings Pitcher to the Scorpion den where they get into a fight with Coldfang, daughter of Vulture also is a sand\ice hybrid but then a seawing secretly nightwing hybrid steals enchanted julery so then Coldfang finally realizes that her actions in the past were terrible and the earing was enchanted to hold her back from having any type of morality then when they go after the thief they meet Scorains pureblood sandwing half sister Cactus then after that somehow Scorain, Pitcher, Cactus, Coldfang and the seawing theif defeat Orcas secret daughter. Take that ai
it would be interesting if the umbra has absolutely no magical control or manipulation powers, and has to manipulate umbra through just straight-up being deseitful. would make it a bit more interesting of a supervillain. also, i have an idea for the umbra that it is actually the leftover artifiact of a long dead animus dragon that's just doing what it was enchanted to do and isn't really even a villain.
this is the messiest, awful, thing i have ever watched. This is freaking insane what ARE THE PUPPET MASTER AND THE UMBRA??? everything is all over the place, why the hell are there so many prophecies JUST WHYYYY
@@wuphatlizar2541 it started off good, new characters so new people could read those before other books. But then old characters cam in and ruined that- they could have done that in the next arc. Also, it started off with Wasp as the villain, but then it became hawthorn and the breath of evil.
The thing about ChatGPT is, it doesn’t have direct access to texts of books and can’t view or reprint verbatim parts of them unless those exact excerpts of texts are so commonly known that they get talked about a lot on the internet by generally big swaths of people or organizations (like a bible verse or historical public document). So ChatGPT doesn’t know what happens in the full texts of the series, only the back cover blurbs and such. Maybe an excerpt here or there. Even so, it has a hard time taking into account all the details of large amounts of texts (even just a handful of paragraphs). Usually instead it skims them to make super basic summaries to keep as mental notes, then bases its final output purely off of those summaries without considering the details it left out. So in this case it probably relied on simple bullet points and publicly available content about the books to get an overall picture of the series’s “plot” and filled in the gaps with simple reasoning and common tropes lol.
the puppetmaster doesn't have to be the same as the umbra, or even related, if they make the puppetmaster or umbra less mysterious so they don't overlap narrative roles.
While the initial overview seemed promising, it was _hilarious_ to see your mounting exasperation as the AI promptly made every single choice you dreaded it making xD I don't really share your opinion on any of the most recent novels (mostly), but this is still entertaining, and there are _hints_ of a story here that an actual author could use while ignoring all the nonsense parts. I actually like some of the elements you disliked? And some that you didn't comment on at all. But that just shows how subjective creativity is, and how machines will never be able to replace it.
Sir far I’m at 7 min. Y does it sound exactly like the fan fic I plan to write next? Wings of Unity was a possible name for one book too. And wing of freedom too. Freedoms the original main character too. ❤❤
If the new arc allows the characters to contact the dead it’s going to get pretty chaotic I hope there isn’t a big time gap and we still have some of the old characters in the new arc I have my own theories but we can only assume what will happen Also Ai will never replace human creativity Also wing of fire tv made my day
What I'd like for an Arc 4 is some rebel group (like Talons of Peace, except evil) will take over some kingdoms, kill some queens and try and take over the world. They would launch a bunch of coups and rebellions, and maybe plunge the continent into an all out war.
if i could make the end for the last arc of wings of fire i would make it so a natural disaster happens in the middle of the planet and starts to drag every small island and every single piece of land to collide and merge into one huge island where every dragon tribe lives together
i wouldnt say dangerous gift, dragonslayer or flames of hope were poorly written. the first two are some of my favorites and flames of hope was very tense, even if the expositionwas a bit slow. dangerous gift doesnt feel like filler at all, and it teaches you a lot about icewing society. dragonslayer is about humans, which i think throws people off, but i for one love seeing the dragon world from human pov and all three povs are very fun. size inconsistencies are really the only issue throughout the series. as for the guide, it is very fun but also very informative. i had a great time reading all of those, and isnt that whats important?
Also putting this in randomly... I love the Anemone x Tamarin ship, I think its a nice contrast, I just hope in the future more lgbtq charcters will be made, in a more well built way. I can honestly see these two working out, with more building blocks set in their relationship of course. And as some who is abro, I really feel like Qilbi and Winter give that vibe, I am only two books into the second arc, but I still have hope that more gay, etc, character's will be made in the future. I feel like people are over reacting say that Tui just threw it in, I think she could have done it better, but maybe theres hope, I feel people are a bit harsh sometimes. :p This is cool ngl, I would like to see more videos like this, although I feel sometimes, chat gpt does not follow instructions very well, like telling it to write more, or not use existing characters, yk yk. More often uploads, would be swag, if you have the time ofc, this is a big comfort channel to me!
It's so weird that Serenity, a Silkwing on Pantala I assume, randomly got involved in Pyrrhia's war? And how did everything even escalate from political views and a beginning of a war to literal dark magic beings?
First discord now existing names Umbra and then the puppet master from prodigy math?!?!?!?!? If you play prodigy math you know who the puppet master is
I think this whole exercise really showcases why ChatGPT can’t execute a coherent story arc 😅 It’s a good way to brainstorm ideas, as I did find the overall high level concept pretty decent, and I was even gunning for a book featuring the SeaWing Queen Coral because she really does fit the description of Marine here and could really use some character growth herself. Once u starting prompting it for details though, it started resembling a combination of some the worst writing problems, with cliche plot developments, a constant influx of new antagonists, and cop out endings. Like seriously, they really went with using an artefact to magically force the tribes to become harmonious. WTF 😅
If I had a nickel for every time a Silkwing was a beacon of hope for a better, united future, I'd have two nickels, which isn't A lot, but its weird that it happened twice Also, I think that at the beginning of the Assassin Winglet, the Seawings used to be allied with the Skywings, before Tempest (I think that was her name) was killed. And it would be cool if Nocturna's spirit powers were some kind of Mind reading, maybe made by a special moon
Look i know theirs not alot of room for completely original wings of fire OC's but charcoal looks alot like my OC ash being a night/sky hybrid with similar colors. Just an interesting thing i noticed BTW THIS ISNT HATE JUST A COINCIDENCE ❤
15, and 14 are good!! but i agree about dragonslayer. but reading the beginning did give me some hints toward the fact that sky might be peril's supposedly dead brother, and i did like wren and sky, but it's mostly boring, and this series is supposed to be about dragons, not humans!
How I would make a new arc would time skip a couple of years long enouth to where some of the parent characters lets say Ruby as a example would be grand parents and I would structure the first book a legends 1 pov, 1 queen,1 new character that way we can be introduce to the new era of wof while getting to know about new characters and the storyline of the first book would prepairing for a possible war againest a third continent with the only info about the war would be a propercy (I am just going to type a propercy for a scraped fanfic with a similer idea as a place holder and who ever reads this comment tell what propercy you would make for this idea) "born from a deal of wings of xno and entities unknowen, if not stop all tribes will bow before him,the first animus will reveal himself and bring terror to all When a rebellion of unknowen tribes appear the war will begin and a dragon of ruin will decide the fate of tribes" and the end of the first book will be the propercy started to come true and thats all I got
Chat gpt? Why not have GPT-4 or Claude 3 opus do it? Chat GPT will have difficulties replacing human creativity. But making a statement of the generality of "AI will never..." basing on example of chat gpt is ridiculous.
Mat this show no one should used AI in any kind of storytelling and do your own the humans own sense creative ideas is very important in the end people are key not AI codes programs which bad
