Trust me man, nobody is going to strike your video or your channel for a 1920s piano roll with period lyrics xD In fact, I can almost guarantee nobody would catch on without you saying it.
The music is quite nice. The ending chorus was quite off, though 🤔 (reading description) Ah, that's why. Totally normal, it happens. Sometimes I think of trying to continue my pieces with a better ending, but I end up rushing and add a basic ending, like I did with most of my recent pieces. 😂🤣 Quite a dissonant chord. E, F, G, and B-flat (don't know the name of such a chord) sounds shockingly good for an ending.
Thank you for commenting! Please, do not apologize for not commenting sometimes! I am delighted whenever you do comment and I don't assume you will. I haven't commented on your most recent video I think. I still need to listen to it. Sorry about that. That last chord is G B D# F I believe. It's called G+7, Gaug7 or G7#5 because it's built on the G augmented chord. I always like when there is a strange chord at the end haha!