IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 Pie Chart Band 9 

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Despite, being the second most emphasised category in 1997, went on to have a marginal decline of 4%, ending up at 17% in 2007. Thank you so much i just got so many new ideas through your video❤

I think you have already covered it in your first sentence of the last paragraph. But, if not, I would write it thus: The chunk of students who chose university on the basis of good quality resources dropped gently to below one-fifth (17%) from just over a fifth (21%).

The reason of university, quality of resources, was given by around one-fifths of the students in 1997 which dropped to 17% with slight decrease.

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Also quality of resources experience a sharp decrease over the period from 21% to 17% as one reason why students choose Universities.

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As regard quality of resources, it was a slight decrease between 21% and 17%, this causes was the second favorite by student in UK in 2007.

In addition, the quality of resources experienced a slight decline from 21 to 17% between 1997 and 2000.

furthermore the quality of rexources is consider slight decreases from the both categories between 21% to 17%

The other factor the quality of resources showed marginal decreases that ranged between 21-17%

Consideration on the quality of resources showed a slight decrease from 21%to 17%

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sir quality of resources decrease so, how you mentioned it in marginal increase

If i used" why students preferred specific higher learning institution" would it be wrong ?

However the quality of resources indicated 3%decrease in between the 1997 and 3007

However the quality of resources had slight decline of 3% in 2007.