Inclination "Uninhibited" 

Not going to lie you guys have inspired me to stop smoking and believe in myself I really enjoyed your LDBBB24 set and I hope to see you guys again next year I absolutely love the message and love the things you’ve done for the community as a whole very inspiring and hard hitting lyrics “free to feel feeling free”

İo amo gli İnclinazione

Here are some suggestions for improving the lyrics: Clarity: First verse: "Every sense as it’s exactly intended" could be made clearer. What does "exactly intended" mean? You could say "Every sense raw and unfiltered" or "Every nerve on fire, just as they should be." Second verse: "No feelings of superiority" feels a bit redundant with "I see this world unimpaired." You could combine them or use the second line to develop the idea further, like "No superiority masks, just clarity in every glance." Show, don't tell: Instead of saying "I wanna feel everything," give us specific examples of the emotions you want to embrace. What kind of joy? What kind of pain? This will make the lyrics more relatable and impactful. Instead of saying "I wanna feel it exactly as it’s intended," show us how you experience these feelings. Use vivid imagery and sensory details. Flow and rhythm: The line "This is my life / My drug free stance" feels a bit clunky. You could try something like "This is my pulse, my unpoisoned stance" or "This is my breath, my unmasked dance." The repetition of "free" and "feel" could be used more strategically. Consider replacing some with synonyms or using them in different parts of the song to create emphasis. Overall: The lyrics have a strong message about embracing life's full spectrum of emotions. Keep that passion and authenticity alive while refining the language and imagery. Consider the song's genre and mood when making changes. You may want to keep the raw energy or soften it for a more introspective feel. Here's an example of how you could rewrite the first verse with some of these suggestions: Nerve endings sing, a symphony untold Every touch, every taste, a story to unfold No numbing veil, no sugar-coated lie This is my truth, burning bright beneath the sky I hope this gives you some ideas for taking your lyrics to the next level!

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