Not a bad level! There are some stuff to improve (other people already said what stuff in the comments lol) but overall i think you did a pretty good job
A few tips: 1. Use dont fade dont enter on the bess because he seems to have low opacity 2. You have orb deco but try to also incorporate air decorations and portal decor 3. Try to add a few more indicators for when you switch directions, like in the last segment Pretty nice level overall but it just seems like a layout so far, it may be difficult but you need to add some extra decorations whether its in the foreground background or just block design
Thanks very much for the useful tips! Personally, I think that if I add indicators in the 3,2,1 count segment, it will make the segment overall look worse. I would like someone to make some more decorations because I suck at them :) but unfortunately the GDPS server is down.