After listening to your video, I went to check the original that I had never heard before. Not that I would want to snob King Crimson, especially since they came up with this lovely song, but I like your version better. I believe you really made it your own in the sense that you adapted it to your perception of it. For myself, once I have figured out the basic of something, I rarely go back to it. I keep playing it until the version in my head is my own. What's the point of a thousand people playing the same song the same way anyway?
Serge Racicot I would agree that the vocals are pleasant on the ears, but the original has great vocals and beautiful musicianship. Some of the few songs that really seem to define the art of music imo.