Well done! As you continue to improve, listen carefully to the sorts of lines Jaco was using. His are very harmonically rich, and learning more about what he was doing can help your fills sound more deep and in-keeping with the tune. Congrats though, this is a great start!
@masterharkonnen3045 He's not rushing at all. And "playing too much" is only something you talk about when the bass isn't the melodic line and when you're improving. He's covering a song, playing over it actually, and the bass is the melodic line. I'm sorry man, but your comment doesn't make that much sense