Damn! Jamie, you’ve converted this old lady! You are my new favorite boy! I’ve listened and watch hundreds of videos, most “Lost in the Rhythm “, and I was fascinated with your choreography! Your moves to the music were perfect! I’ll be watching you more!
Nice moves! Very clean and well performed. Also your ability to incorporate the arm movements is excellent! That's not easy and many never excel at it, but I think it adds so much to the dance.
In general broad strokes , very good - but far too much emphasis on arm and above the waist movement, and not nearly enough excitement with the feet / lower body usage, particularly with larger traveling movements. It's all too tight, too constrained. You need to study how to use and expand into a much larger area of space in order to amp up the visceral and visual excitement...
While i fully agree with your observations and also regard my foodwork as not particular good, i want to bring to your attention that this video is 5 years old. Please criticize one of my more recent videos, if you want me to improve. Thx in advance :)