jealousy jealousy meme but different (TMF) || Broken Jake AU || [REUPLOAD] 

Jake: note for myself...never p*ssed of a British or they'll colonize you... Me: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 It’s a step into the right direction. I’m sure they’ll gain his trust someday.

I'm so sorry for the reupload 🙏🙏🙏 And im so sorry for making this part to similiar with ANA Rune's scene 🙏🙏🙏 I promise i'll do better next time 🙏🙏🙏

Hailey, you kicked jake out, didn't let him explain and ran past him. Drew, you made your best friend lost the only place where he felt good, you didn't supported your friends dream. You two are horrible, I know one of you didn't meant it, but you have to accept that you did something horrible, and he is trying to enjoy his life again with someone that does care, and helped him and still helps him. Maybe he will forgive you, but remember, forgiveness takes time, and he has all the right to say no, so don't be angry if he doesn't forgive you two. But Hailey and Drew, you are trying to be better and fix your mistakes, thats a good start. And Hailey, you letting jake enjoy his life is amazing, thats what a true friend does. (Dang i wrote a whole paragraph even if I didn't wanted to 😭😭) ALSO THANK YOU DOMINIC 4 DEFENDING OUR JAKEY BOY HE IS A BABY, HE DESERVES TO BE PROTECTED, THANK YOU SO MUCH ILY!!!

I hope the story continues and I hope they all forgive each other

Why is everyone so shocked Jake made another friend like: World don't revolve around you girl your not the only one

This made me relate to Jake 10x more, everyone needs a Dominic, and ı am really glad ı have one of my own

I’m not crying I just sweating out my eyes😭😭😭

New people watching angst videos: "THIS IS SO SAD IM ABOUT TO CRY😭😭😭" now people watching angst videos: "i am always up for dramas😍🍿"

This is amazing bro keep up the good work you’re doing

I might be late but... Damn Dominic is tall.

EWWQ NOOOO NO NO NO I LOVE THE VIDEO but i cant when someone tells the club that jake still cares for them (I LIVE FOR THE AGAINST!!!!!!)

I love it but i don't really get the drama by calling someone by their last names

Dominic is a really nice guy and good friend.

I love your video as always and 2 days ago, I turned adult so wish me luck to adulthood. Also, Dominic is not being a friend, he's just being a father figure. I hope we will get to see Emily soon...

AHHHHH So Good,I'm waiting for the next part, Keep the spirit for your fans!

AHAHHAHAHAHHAAA OMG XDXDXD "Never piss off British or they will colonize you" LMAO XDXDD

Hello! Please don't take my criticism as hate but here are some points that are annoying. 1. The repeated storyline: Repeating an event again and again get tiring as well as boring, in this case it's the fighting between the club and jomies and then Jake snapping. Yes I admit that the two groups don't get along but always making them fight every episode gets tiring. Also the way that Jake reacts, I understand that this is the 'broken Jake" AU, but the difference is that broken means less emotions and more depression, here it seems like the "Snap AU". 2. The grammar: A few spelling mistakes here and there are perfectly fine, but they are there in every scene, also I would give the advice of giving more character from the way they talk, like when Hailey was crying you can add stuttering as people stutter when they talk while crying. 3. The crying: It does not match the scene or the character, for example Hailey is the most emotional in the group so it makes sense for her to cry, but for Zander to cry seems very unlikely. Speaking of crying, in the episode they cry over every single thing and have the same expressions. I'm saying that there are different ways to create this, let me give an example: Zander saw Jake and Dominic at the mall, his eyes widened for a bit and then he came back to normal, or Milly saw Jake at the mall with Dominic and her face breaks out into a smile of relief for finding out where he is. 4. The way the events ae unfolding: To be honest, it all seems very rushed, the relationships between the characters, the storyline, the hatred and the fights. I don't think anyone would open up to someone after they took them shopping once. The storyline is interesting, don't get me wrong but there are a lot of loop holes. I would advice working on the script thoroughly and making the conversations seem realistic. End note: I know that you worked extremely hard on this and I'm no experienced gacha tuber, but I'm giving criticism so you can improve. I appreciate your efforts and look forward to future uploads from you.

THE QUALITY IS SO GOOD WTH

19:15 this was so wholesome I almost cried

I cant wait for part 13 lol 😭

One mysterious thing is that Jake’s past bullies never aged.

OMG why did Jake just called him friends omg 😱🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 and I’m saying this brah omg JAKE WHY BRAH WHY WHY😭

I will wait for part 2

I’ll Say This Again. Good I Was Waiting.

Can't wait

YOU! YES YOU.... CONTİUNE!

*Me thinking Dominic is a normal adult* OH S*** HES BRITISH

We need part 2 but take your time

I just love how i have a friend also named *dominic*

Looks like I wasn't wrong about the music club and possibly the jomies of being jealous

If anyone wants to know the intro song is called Shadow

Can you please make a part 3

WHERE IS THE NEXT PART CMONN😾

Me gustó esa historia muy bonita pero ya pesotes dicatura de estos también y si

Umm hi so Jake was sad mad at the same time brah I mean like the same time becuaes jake never does that in the music club 😢😢😢😢🥹🥹🥹🥹🥺🥺🥺😭😭😭😩😩😩😞😞😞 ok bye and rosy bye to 😋😋😋😋

Ayy my name there Dominic

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Jake sterling go back

Wil i goes i better watch the video about music F.

What ie that music you used at 6:59

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WHO THE FUCK IS DUDE?

haily onlyfans when?