THIS SHIT IS ASS!!!! 🔥🔥🔥 *Let me explain why:* *- **0:11**:* how tf is Elias really short? The height difference is like a couple of inches. But I think in the Gacha world that Elias is like really short? *-(**0:11** to **0:27**):* I’m glad with the beginning, we get some info about how the characters act. That’s an important part of the story. *-**1:12**:* lol foreshadow, maybe try not to put out a foreshadow in the most obvious way possible? *-**1:54**:* Elias knew damn well what he was doing. Reminder: they fight literally all the time. Why would he rest his shoulder on Levi knowing that ITS LEVI?? Maybe instead of opening his eyes you could’ve have them closed still, since in sleep you just want to rest on someone. Or you could make Elias’s head rest on the table instead maybe? That’s more realistic *-**1:56**:* elias has sleeping powers now! He could make anyone sleep just by him falling asleep on their shoulders. Nah but seriously how did Levi fall asleep so fast when Elias rested his head on his shoulder?? *-**2:19**:* out of character. Why are they smiling?? Aren’t they built like a married couple? (1:24). *-**2:30**:* I don’t want a teacher being in my love business. It’s cringe or just second hand embarrassment. Btw it’s so ironic that the teacher didn’t even explain what the project was about. All she said was “project due in a week” like what’s it about? What’s the specific requirements. They were sleeping in class so you need to tell them what they have to do!!! *-**3:07**:* this scene is okay. When you’re developing feelings for someone you feel jealousy when someone is hanging out with your crush. 😊 *-**3:38**:* woah how are they suddenly so happy to see each other. (1:24) all they did was sleep in class together (intimately) and now they do some project and they’re all _smiley hugs love_ *-**3:52**:* when you sleep in class you’re not tired anymore? You may feel tired waking up but that’s it… *-**4:14**:* WHY USE SLEEP AS AN EXCUSE FOR THE CHARACTERS TO HAVE SOME ROMANTIC MOMENT???? 😡😡 HE ALREADY SLEPT IN CLASS FEW MOMENTS AGO, HOW IS HE TIRED AGAIN?? *-**4:35**:* that hoodie could have so much dirt, stench, stink. I couldn’t even imagine. He probably put it on Elias so he doesn’t feel cold and there’s a FUCKING blanket THATS BETTER THAN THAT SHIT. *-**5:40**:* finally they know what the project is about!!! Not to mention, aren’t they suppose to be in class or something? In future GLMMS we should know that the day is and the time too. *-**5:59**:* I just kinda hate how their personalities just have been wiped off from the story. (1:24) 😢😢 *-**6:30**:* she’s like “ILL MAKE HIM MINEEE MWAHAHAHA” *-**7:02**:* WHO KISSES SOMEONE IN THE HALLWAY?? WHERE PEOPLE COULD JUST BE LIKE “why are they kissing in the hallway?” LIKE THERES SOMETHING CALLED DORMS IN THIS STORY. Why couldn’t they kiss in the dorms??? Why there?? *-**7:37**:* tbh this scene is kinda cute no im bffr. It’s like the most normal ahh scene in the entire GLMM *-**8:00**:* booo party pooper *-**8:08** to **10:56**:* is going to be like: jealous people team up to break Levi and Elias apart. Jealous girl kisses Levi so Elias could see. Elias runs away without hearing Levi’s explanation. Literally knowing that Levi said “I’m sorry I’m taken” jealous boy calms Elias down. Levi saw and got deja vu. Levi cries lol. They end up talking which is the most importantly thing in relationships. Then they kiss PS: Tbh Elias is a stupid ahh soft boy if I know my boyfriend said “sorry I’m taken” to somebody but that somebody kisses them anyway. I would think that the somebody forced kissed them, righttt?? *-**10:13**:* OMG WHY IS ELIAS SO SURPRISED IT WAS SO OBVIOUS THAT THE GIRL FORCED KISS LEVI. My notes: so this story was just so predictable once they started dating. The second they get together some assholes try to break them apart, this BL had so much potential but no. Where’s the originality??
I’m sorry but- WHY WAS READING THIS ACCTUALLY SO FUNNY BRO- While I was making this I was like “Ima make these out of Oder cringe no logic gacha scenes, hope somebody has the courage to talk bout it” and there you are! I’m taking MOST prob all of you (basically) advice and trying to make these better :P thanks
