I watched the whole video and here's some advice: The story could use a bit of work! It's a good plot idea but it could use some more scenes such as prophesies and a reason as to why Carla became a monster, you could also give us more background on everyone's story and why they hate Carla. I also suggest being more serious when talking in RP instead of joking around or using emojis. Hope the criticism helps!
Hmm ok pretty good,I’ll give you some tips so you can do the recoding better! tip 1: you can get set up with the things you need BEFORE THE RP tip 2 :maybe you could clear the chat after setting up! Tip 3:you’d probably want to edit with CapCut?tip 4: if you have a computer and you’re good at using it, you can record on laptop,and then post it on YT with your laptop if you don’t know how, just ask some thechyy peoples or something.. tip 5 just umm ask for a helper to do commands so you don’t have to type it too much… yep… that’s all the tips I probably feeling sweaty so it’s the end I hope you read this tip message bye.
" Comedy Gold " A slime pup without a name was named Comedy Gold. This is because they were a gold pup, and they were a comedian. They were loved by many. Until one day, it all changed. Getting ready for the big show was hard for them, so they asked panther to help them get dressed for the occasion. Panther was very jealous of their talent. When it got time to have a meal, he snuck poison into their sandwich. When they ate it, they dropped to the floor and turned into a ghost slime pup. It was a tragedy. And panther ate their body. When they woke up, they chose to get revenge on panther. They grabbed a small axe with stickers and blood on it. It was sharpened as if it were a dagger. They were flying towards panther. Panther was asleep at the time and had plans of pretending to be Comedy Gold. They grabbed the axe, and the panther was dead when their friend went to check on them. Legend says you can still hear the axe scraping across panther's hard bedroom floor when you enter his house.
(NULL) day 8 of being hated in so far 9 AUs. I stumbled around this one. A rainbow pup being bullied by her sibling and her mom. Days came by and it got worse. I had to hide away so they won't notice. This rainbow slime pup turned into a ghost. She killed her mom and once she injured her sibling I had to fight her. The fight ended of her lifeless body in a broken cracked wall. There was rubble everywhere. And she slowly turned darker and darker till her body became transparent. And soon disappeared into thin air. As the sibling came up to me. I picked her up and teleported her to the surface. That was the last of her I saw again. What happened to carla? Her body that left a big rubble near the spawn was gone. The whole place is haunted. And lights never turned on. Never going back. Not again...
What if: i get a twin sister (slimepup) And she did the same as the power outage pup and she makes my mom mad at me everytime or let me do everything execpt playing and let me sleep outside what will feel?
She mom biru pup but can't want Rainbow pup but sad think doing... Pup she sad green... But she not pup Rainbow... She mom and pup Rainbow same... Sedih pup green... Not help me... What happened just who... But my pup green sad... Nobody idk know... She know just who pup Rainbow... She exterior... But died who... Ok guys... Thanks you guys video 600k... Bye bye...
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The child teh rb is the most spoiled one but the green one needs to be loved and cared :> and yes this is just a story and don’t say “oH wE aLl kNoW!!!!“
If buck alpha saw this pup snitch on their family like that i think he would kill him with a pink earthquake. BUCK ALPHA: one of the ancient alphas, spotted first in a blackout not being able to fit through a door, then killed the cameraman and hid the footage in the storage near garden. PINK EARTHQUAKE: an event, which only ancient alphas like Buck Alpha and Nightcrawler Alpha can do. its an earthquake with a pink fog inside the cracks on the ground. shakes the facility so much that it once collapsed. and Med (me) had to repair it. both info was written by Dr. Fashui. i just modified it to show u that i am Med