This is great and i think the most valuable skill is to know what went wrong and what to do to fix it. For example the missed apex where you said that you maybe turning too early. I would have thought that this would mean, break earlier and and also turn earlier and not the opposite. I don't think that there is a better way to learn to analyse how to spot your own mistakes then to watch your videos. This is gold, thank you.
Thanks @sudikinoko! I think you've pointed out something that is really important (to me). My coaching principle is always self-analysis and self-coaching. There are certain tools and processes to figure out exactly how to go faster; they're not hard once you learn them, and that is what I impart to the drivers I've coached. Otherwise they're always going to need a coach and hand-held at every practice session or they don't know how to go faster, or they plateau - and that's not the hallmark of a good driver.
Fun video to watch you start to finish learn a track. Helpful to see the process! Side question, have you posted your pc specs/equipment before to run iracing in vr?