Lesson 4 CELPIP Writing Task 2 Masterclass: Introduction Templates

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In this series of video lectures, you will learn everything you need to know about CELPIP writing task 2, otherwise known as the Survey task.
The course consists of a series of lessons, which should be viewed in sequence.
In this lesson, I cover the introduction paragraph, its aims and the structures and templates you can use to save yourself a great deal of time and effort on the test day.
Task:
Write an introduction paragraph for the following prompt:
* Public Transportation Survey
The city council has announced that they will be increasing bus fares in order to provide better service to commuters. A survey has been sent out to town residents asking for their opinion.
* Option A:
Bus fares should be increased in order to improve the quality of services.
* Option B:
Bus fares should remain the same.
Leave your answers in the comments:

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@giselesarmento3117 4 месяца назад

Love that! It's very well explained. Thank you

@azharmehmood1595 Год назад

Great job

@deeptis5121 11 месяцев назад

Thanks a lot...Your videos are really helpful ..scored 10 in both writing and listening ..Thanks a ton!

@fasttrackesl 11 месяцев назад

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@deeptis5121 11 месяцев назад

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@ramansingh-kt4bh 2 месяца назад

Well explanation sir

@yogitabalamarwaha484 2 месяца назад

You are really very good Sir🙏🏻 Your writing is very useful and understanding for students.

@fasttrackesl 2 месяца назад

Thanks for your support, Yogita. I’m so glad you’re finding the content useful!

@mdsaurabhy2k Год назад

I really love your lectures. When ss your next video in the lecture series coming?

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Hi Saurabh, I’m glad you like my Writing Masterclass. The whole series is available to Channel Members. Check out the playlists on the channel homepage.

@ajaybhargavain 3 месяца назад

Excellent Job ! Introductions are always a pain in the neck...

@fasttrackesl 3 месяца назад

And a great way to waste half of your time wondering how to begin your essay! With this method, you can quickly get it out of the way, leaving you more time to focus on explaining your main ideas and checking your writing!

@ChiamakaChinedu 11 месяцев назад

It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is considering an increase in bus fares in order to provide better services for users. While some argue that bus fares should be increased, I personally disagree and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs. Please let me know what you think. Thank you.

@fasttrackesl 11 месяцев назад

Great introduction. Just remember: - “Service” can be both countable and uncountable. When used in the countable sense, it refers to the different kinds of service. However, if the service is transportation (just one kind), then you should probably use it in the uncountable sense. Keep up the good work!

@azharmehmood1595 Год назад

Sir plz solve the reading test of Cambridge book 10 to 15, I watched ur videos of book 17 reading tests which were amazing and I am waiting for reading test walk through .

@BLOOMINGUS26 Год назад

amazing

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Thanks for your support!

@user-cy8cn4ow6v 6 месяцев назад

Thanks for providing informative sessions and providing constructive feedback. My intro is: I recently discovered that the city council is considering an increase in bus fares to enhance service quality. Although some argue that having a rise in bus fares might lead to improvements, I personally disagree and will outline my reasons in the following paragraphs. Also, I'll be happy to know your idea about this one with a little changes: I recently learned that the city council is considering an increase in bus fares to enhance service quality. Although this approach might result in improvements, I personally disagree and will outline my reasons in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 6 месяцев назад

They’re both great paragraphs. Try reducing noun phrases by getting rid of any extra words. Say: “Although some argue that a rise in bus fares.”

@user-cy8cn4ow6v 6 месяцев назад

Thank you for your feedback.@@fasttrackesl

@nasimsohrabi1403 5 месяцев назад

Your lecture was really helpful for me. Can you please review my introduction? It was recently brought to my attention that the employer is considering a pre-packaged lunch for all the employees. Although some argue that providing pre-packaged lunch is not a good idea, I personally disagree with this idea. I‘ll proceed to justify my choice in the following.

@fasttrackesl 5 месяцев назад

Thanks for your support! - If you're writing to the employer, then you can say: "...my attention that you are considering..." - "Lunch" is countable, so you can say "prepackaged lunches" Keep up the good work!

@ramansingh-kt4bh 10 месяцев назад

Thanks sir

@fasttrackesl 10 месяцев назад

I’m glad you’re finding the lessons useful. Happy learning!

@KK-ll3lp Год назад

Hi, Good job. Could you please review my introduction para? I recently found out that the city council is considering a change in bus fares to provide enhanced services. While some argue that bus fares should be increased, I personally feel that bus fares should not be raised. I will proceed to justify my choice in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Thanks for sharing. This is a well-written, structured response. My only suggestion is to avoid repeating the two options (when you’re dealing with an Apples/Apples type questions). Here’s an example: “While some argue that bus fares should be increased, I personally disagree and will proceed to justify…” Hope this helps.

@dell0816 10 месяцев назад

Hi Sam, Thanks for your amazing video. Having an introduction is mandatory in Writing Task 2 same as ielts. It would not decrease our scores? Some teachers suggest not using an introduction and immediately opting your choice(because of wasting the words).

@fasttrackesl 10 месяцев назад

Hi there. That’s actually a great question. I think it’s definitely possible to write a response without an introduction. However, I feel most students end up starting their response too abruptly. Writing a brief introduction can serve to provide some context as well as making your choice explicitly clear before you delve into the reasons. While an overly lengthy introduction can indeed be problematic, you won’t lose points for including one.

@user-iq1hp4st9c 11 месяцев назад

I recently came across that the City Council is considering a raise in bus fares to provide top-notch service to commuters. The choice between increasing bus fares or keeping them unaltered certainly presents a complex dilemma. Although some argue for maintaining current bus fares, I personally disagree and opine that this proposed increase offers more advantages than disadvantages. I will expound on my choice in the subsequent paragraph.

@fasttrackesl 11 месяцев назад

Thanks for sharing. Here are a few points to consider: - “I recently came across” needs to be followed by a noun. Instead, start your sentence with a phrase like “I recently discovered that…” - “presents a complex dilemma” doesn’t seem to match the nature of the issue discussed (it’s essentially overkill). - The verb “opine” or the phrase “I will expound on” are also too formal and don’t sound right in this context. - In general, avoid overly-formal expressions and flashy words. Instead, try to be natural, clear and expressive. Keep up the good work.

@sunilg660 Год назад

Hi @Fast Track ESL - here is my sample, thanks to check and provide your feedback. Introduction Paragraph: I was recently informed that there is an announcement from city council to increase bus fares for providing better services. While some argue that, it will not be beneficial and bus fares should remain the same, I personally disagree and will explain my reason in the following paragraph.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Hi Sunil, Thanks for sharing. Here are a few things to watch out for: 1. Be careful about countable and uncountable nouns (e.g., service*) 2. Check your use of articles (e.g., the* city council). 3. Don’t use a comma following “that” 4. When introducing the two options in the introduction, try to keep the clauses short (e.g., “While some argue that bus fares should remain the same”) Keep up the good work!

@sunilg660 Год назад

@@fasttrackesl Thank you for your feedback.

@limuelcastro3152 11 месяцев назад

I recently found out that the council is considering a hike in bus fares for better service to commuters. While some argue that this is not a great idea, I personally support this move and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 11 месяцев назад

Excellent introduction paragraph. For the sake of greater clarity, you could also say: “…is considering a hike in bus fares for the sake of providing better service to commuters.” (Please note that your original sentence is not wrong).

@limuelcastro3152 10 месяцев назад

@@fasttrackeslI passed my exam with high scores. Thank you so much!

@pardesifilmy486 Год назад

It was recently brought to my attention that city council is considering to bring changes in bus fares. While some argue that increase in bus fares is not a good idea, I personally think that increase in bus fare will leads to better services. I will explain my reasons in upcoming paragraph.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Thanks for sharing. You need to use a gerund after the very “consider” (e.g., consider doing something), but to avoid double -ing, you can also say: “…is considering some changes to the bus fares.” (Consider + Noun) - “some argue that an* increase in bus fares is not a good idea, I personally think that it* will lead* to better services.” Keep up the good work.

@sinanobakht3589 Год назад

I recently found out that the city council is considering an increase in public transport fares to give a better service. Although some argue that the bus tickets should remain the same, I personally believe that for receiving an improved service, the bus fares should be increased. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraph.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Good job, Sina. Here are a few tips: 1. Use “provide” with “service” to form a collocation. 2. Keep the choices brief in the introduction. Don’t mention any reasons at this point (e.g., “for receiving an improved service.”

@rafiabdul770 6 месяцев назад

It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is considering increasing bus fares to provide better services. While some argue that the bus fares should remain the same, I personally disagree and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 6 месяцев назад

Well done. Keep it up.

@shivamgupta9458 5 месяцев назад

It was recently brought to my attention that city council is considering to give better services to the residents by increasing the bus fares. While some argue that keeping the same fares would be a great idea, I personally support increasing the fares and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 5 месяцев назад

Thanks for sharing. Here are a few tips for you to consider: - Use the verb “plan” (Say: “…is planning to give better services to…”). Well done!

@mirabelmartins3870 Год назад

I was recently informed that the city board is considering the increment of bus fares in Toronto. Although some residents argue that price increase will bring about improvement in the transport system, I personally believe that current bus fare should not be changed considering multifarious reasons.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Thanks for sharing, Mirabel. You’ve organized your introduction very well and have used the template effectively. Keep in mind that you don’t need to use big words such as “increment” and “multifarious”. Words shouldn’t stand out and should blend in naturally with the rest of your writing. Keep it simple, clear and always understandable. Good luck!

@mirabelmartins3870 Год назад

@@fasttrackesl Thank you, Please can you rate the full essay below

@dennisnguyen231 Год назад

It was recently brought to my attention that there will be a bus fare increase for better service. While some argue that a change in bus fares is essential for a significant improvement, I personally disagree and will explain my ideas in the following paragraphs.

@toyosiakibo9599 3 месяца назад

I was recently informed of the announcement made by the city council, on the increment of the bus fare. Although some claim that the bus fare should be increased, I personally disagree; I think the fare should be maintained. I will proceed to explain my choice in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 3 месяца назад

Thanks for sharing your response. Here are a few tips to consider: - Avoid language that is too formal (e.g., "the increment of the bus fares" vs "the increase in bus fares" - Use an indefinite article (e.g., "a" or "an") when mentioning something for the first time. For example, your readers are learning about the increase in bus fares from you. Therefore, when you mention it for the first time, you should say: "...announcement made by the City Council on an increase in bus fares..." - "Fare" is usually used in the plural (e.g., "bus fares"; "train fares", etc.). - Try to merge your sentences together to avoid short ones being strung together (e.g., "...I personally think that fares should be kept in place." Keep up the good work!

@toyosiakibo9599 3 месяца назад

@@fasttrackesl thank you for the corrections. I will take note of them.

@taniyasingh6442 7 месяцев назад

A recent survey has been sent out by the city council to the residents regarding an increase in bus fares for better bus service. Whereas, some argue that bus fares should remain the same. I personally feel that the increase in bus fares with improve the quality of the bus service.

@fasttrackesl 7 месяцев назад

Good work. Remember, “whereas” is a subordinator, so it should be punctuated as below: “Whereas some argue that…., I personally feel that…”

@esraasaberkhalil943 Год назад

I was recently informed that the city council is considering some changes in the transportation service. Whereas some residents claim that increasing in the bus ticket may assist in getting better service, I personally disagree with this modification, and I will proceed to justify my choice in the paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Thanks for sharing your response, Esraa. Here are a few comments to consider: - “considering some changes to* the transportation services*” - “increasing bus fares* may result in* better service” Keep up the good work.

@cybertirtha 3 месяца назад

I was recently informed about the city council's decision to increase the bus fare. While some would argue that it is required provide better services to the public, I beg to differ. In my opinion, continuing with the exiting fare structure is a better idea. Please allow me to justify my choice in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 3 месяца назад

Good work. Here are a few tips to consider: - Use plural forms when referring to general ideas (e.g., “bus fares” - Unless only the fair for one particular route is being increased, which doesn’t seem to be the case). - Make sure your phrases are complete. Say: “…that it is required in order to provide better services to the public…” - Keep your paragraph short and to the point by avoiding redundancies. Say: “…better services to the public, I feel keeping the existing fare structure is a better idea.” Keep up the good work!

@cybertirtha 3 месяца назад

@@fasttrackesl Thanks for the feedback.

@shanellthompson6772 9 месяцев назад

It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is considering increasing bus fares to advance their service. While some argue the bus fares should increase, I personally differ.

@fasttrackesl 9 месяцев назад

Thanks for sharing your paragraph in the comments. Here are a few tips to consider: - To avoid two back-to-back “-Ing” forms (e.g., “considering increasing”), use a noun phrase (not a gerund) for the second instance. Here’s an example: “…is considering an increase in bus fares…” - To “differ” (as in phrases such as “I beg to differ”) is a very formal phrase which might not match the rest of your writing (in terms of tone). I suggest going with a more common verb (such as “disagree”). Keep up the good work!

@shanellthompson6772 9 месяцев назад

Thank you for the tip, this is very helpful.@@fasttrackesl

@sandhyas3275 3 месяца назад

I recently found out that the city council is considering changing the bus fares. While some argue that the bus fares should be increased to provide better service to travelers, I personally disagree and will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.

@gamerwithcomali1568 5 месяцев назад

I have recently become cognizant of the fact that management is considering prepackaged lunches. While proponents advocate for the viewpoint that prepackaged lunches are a great idea, I harbor personal opposition and shall expound upon my rationale in the ensuing discourse.

@fasttrackesl 5 месяцев назад

Low-frequency words like “cognizant” should be used with great care because they could easily stand out and distract the reader. Remember: keep it simple, clear, and effective. Keep it simple and avoid redundancies. Say: “While some support prepackaged lunches, I disagree and will share my reasons below.”

@hadih1025 Год назад

Hello teacher . You are the best always,my question is how. or what I need to do to I can pass the listening SEL exam specifically for information questions , of the news conversation part , its came different then I listen , what I should to study. Thanks.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Thanks for your feedback. Here are a few tips for improving your listening score: 1. Expose yourself to as much spoken English as you can. Listen to informational (e.g. news) texts, such as news podcasts, and try to keep up with what’s being said (even while multitasking). This way, you’re improving your processing speed and attention span both at the same time. 2. Focus on getting the main ideas. Don’t pause audio or listen again. If you don’t know a word or can’t understand a phrase, it’s ok. Just keep listening and focus on understanding what the speaker means or the message they want to communicate. This will really help you organize and make sense of the information on the test day. 3. Finally, repeat sample tests. Don’t just complete a test and check your answers. Instead, go back and listen again and find out why you made a mistake the first time round. Don’t just give yourself the answer. Work for it! Hope this helps, and best of luck with your exam.

@hadih1025 Год назад

@@fasttrackesl I meant, that they always provide options for the answer and we must choose the answer closest to the question, but they offer choices that were not present in the audible dialogue originally, and this makes me not know how to answer.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

@@hadih1025 Exactly. That's why I recommend you increase your exposure (so you can keep up with the audio as it's being played), and listen for the gist (so you can identify the correct answer even if it's paraphrased or expressed differently).

@Harshit_Dewan 10 месяцев назад

I assume the topic is apples & apples. Please correct me if wrong, also find the introduction as follows: It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is considering to increase bus fares to provide better services. While some commuters claim that increasing bus fares is a great idea, I personally disagree and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 10 месяцев назад

Thanks for sharing. Great introduction. Well structured. Well written. To avoid the repetition of to- infinitives, you could also say: - “…is considering an increase in bus fares to provide better services.” Keep up the good work.

@jyothiselsa9766 Год назад

Hi I cannot find the join button in the page, so I’m unable to access the lessons from 5, please help me out with this

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Thanks for your interest in becoming a channel member. You can access the complete tutorial by becoming a member of the channel. All you have to do is click on the "join" button on the channel homepage (make sure you're logged into your RU-vid account first). You can also join the membership program by clicking on the link below: ru-vid.com/show-UC9j659eaE5p0dhN-OeM_s2Qjoin (In some countries that are not part of the YT membership program, you’ll have to use a VPN to be able to join). Hope this helps.

@jyothiselsa9766 Год назад

@@fasttrackesl yeah, I figured it out. Joined successfully, Thank you

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Welcome aboard! Hope you enjoy the lessons. Don’t forget to complete the tasks in the comments! Happy learning!

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So glad you’re finding the content useful. The membership fee is less than what it costs to book a single lesson with a tutor. This fee will also ensure the production of quality content (which takes hours of time and a lot of effort to make). I’m sure you understand. Anyway, your support means a lot :)

@shanellthompson6772 9 месяцев назад

Do you have any template for Celpip emails?

@fasttrackesl 9 месяцев назад

Hi Shanell, Thanks for your interest in my CELPIP preparation material. Yes! I have a complete course on both writing tasks. Please check the playlists on the channel homepage for details! Happy learning!

@ArunaKavetiGyara-ci7jt Год назад

Hello, I have already registered for Fast Track ESL membership. But, I am unable to watch from Writing Task 2 course 5. Please guide me to continue writing task 2 courses.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Hi Aruna, Thanks for your interest in my CELPIP Masterclass series. It seems you’ve signed up for the Speaking Course tier, which includes access to the complete Speaking Masterclass + additional sample tests + model answers. If you’d like to access the Writing Masterclass (both tasks), you can upgrade to the “Speaking + Writing” bundle tier. Please let me know if you have any questions.

@gurpreetubhu3834 10 месяцев назад

It was recently brought to my attention that the city council has considered increasing the bus fares to provide better service. While some may argue that bus fares should be kept the same, I personally believe that increased fares will add more quality to the service for commuters. I will proceed to justify my choice in the following.

@fasttrackesl 10 месяцев назад

Well done. Just one thing to consider: Try to use pronouns to avoid unnecessary repetition. For instance, you could say: While some may argue that bus fares should be kept the same, I personally believe that increasing them could add…” Remember, it’s ok to repeat certain key words and phrases as many times as needed (and in the interest of clarity), but using a pronoun whenever possible will help to make your sentences shorter and more cohesive.

@gurpreetubhu3834 10 месяцев назад

@@fasttrackesl Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it. I do write longer sentences and struggle with word count , usually go over 200 words. Please let me know if there are more tips to make sentences shorter.

@somayehbahadori-df5qr 7 месяцев назад

I am a member but I can not find the rest of the writing task 2 ,I have just access until lesson 4 can you help me to find them

@fasttrackesl 7 месяцев назад

Please check the channel playlists, and make sure you’re a member (not just a subscriber).

@olisaonugbolu1921 2 месяца назад

I was recently informed that the city council is considering a hike in bus fares to provide improved quality service for commuters. While some argue that the idea is unacceptable, I personally disagree and will proceed to explain my reasons in the following paragraphs

@ChiamakaChinedu 11 месяцев назад

Hey, please I don’t see the join button

@fasttrackesl 11 месяцев назад

Becoming a member is easy. All you have to do is click on the "join" button on the channel homepage (make sure you're logged into your RU-vid account first). You can also join the membership program by clicking on the link below: ru-vid.com/show-UC9j659eaE5p0dhN-OeM_s2Qjoin Use of VPN may help if RU-vid membership programs are not available in your country or region. Please let me know if you have any questions.

@amakamercy 10 месяцев назад

I recently found out that the city council announced a proposed increase in bus fares to provide better services to commuters, whereas some claim that the bus fare should remain the same, I personally disagree and feel an increase to improve the quality of services is a much better option. I will proceed to justify my choice in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 10 месяцев назад

Thanks for sharing. Here are a few comments to consider: - Use the present perfect for reviewing announcements: “…the city council has* announced a…” - “Service” can be both countable and uncountable, but in this context, you should probably be using it in an uncountable/singular form. - Avoid run-on sentences: “…to commuters.* Whereas some claim that bus fares should remain the same…” Keep up the good work

@glowinghandsservices7068 6 месяцев назад

I recently heard of the City Council's announcement to hike bus fares in order to provide better services to commuters. While some believe this is laudable and will improve service quality, I personally disagree and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 6 месяцев назад

Nice. Just remember: very long phrases (e.g., “the City Council’s announcement to hike bus fares in order to provide better services to commuters.”) can be difficult to read. Try forming a clause and see if it works better: Say: “I recently heard that the City Council plans to hike bus fares in order to provide better service to commuters.”

@dibamahboubi7570 9 месяцев назад

How many types of membership is there? i can 3 3 types of color of members.

@fasttrackesl 9 месяцев назад

There are actually two tiers. Colors vary based on length of membership.

@dibamahboubi7570 9 месяцев назад

I can remember, I couldn't have both of them at a same time last year, could you help me to have both of them please?@@fasttrackesl

@jajapower3939 Год назад

Hi teacher .plz I want ask you .I got level 3 in listening and level 5 in speaking. In LS celpip test for citizenship. I passed or I faild ?reply plzzzzzzz.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Hi there. You need a minimum score of 5.0 on CELPIP (in both listening and speaking) to pass.

@samuelmartyns-yellowe1806 Год назад

Hello, I have just joined the membership, but still do not have access to lesson 5 to 9. Please advice

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Hi Samuel and thanks for becoming a member. I hope you enjoy the content and lessons. It seems you’ve chosen the “speaking course” membership. To gain access to the Writing Masterclass, you can choose to upgrade to the “Speaking + Writing” bundle. Please let me know if you have any questions, and good luck with your preparation.

@samuelmartyns-yellowe1806 Год назад

@@fasttrackesl The membership does not cover all the bundle? I did not realize I chose a specific bundle, I just joined to become a member to have access. I actually just started with writing, and hoping yo watch all the videos on that first. Please walk me through the process to understand it. Thank you

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Sorry for the confusion. So, there are two membership tiers. If you’re interested in the Writing Masterclass, you can upgrade to the “Speaking + Writing” bundle in the membership settings. Hope this answers your question.

@jyothiselsa9766 Год назад

Hi here’s my response,please review It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is going to raise the bus fare in order to provide better services. While some argue that the bus fare should remain the same, I personally disagree and will explain the reasons in the next paragraph.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Thanks for sharing. Your response looks great. My only suggestion is to use “bus fares” (The singular form implies that there is only one bus line). Keep up the good work.

@jyothiselsa9766 Год назад

@@fasttrackesl Thank you so much for your time

@AhmedElsayed-ds4tm 2 месяца назад

It was recently brought to my attention that the city council are planning to rise bus fees. while some argue that bus fares should be fixed. I personally think that increasing bus fares will lead to enhance the quality of services. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraph. One important reason why the city council needs to rise the fares is that they want to add more technological features such as Internet on broad, especially in long trips whereas passengers got bored, and they need to communicate and share their moments on social media platforms. A further reason that the city council is planning to add food and beverages with very discounted rate especially for students, as per the world mental health standards studies that indicates that taking a small snack while riding bus trips helps to decrease stresses with 20%. In conclusion, rising fares by improving the quality of services will make bus trips more excited, also it will help the community to reduce the stress precisely students. (171 Words)

@akashpatel483 11 месяцев назад

Why I am not able to see the fifth lecture of writing task 2

@fasttrackesl 11 месяцев назад

Hi Akash, Thanks for your interest. The complete writing tutorial series is available to channel members. ru-vid.com/show-UC9j659eaE5p0dhN-OeM_s2Qjoin

@BLOOMINGUS26 Год назад

do you provide online classes for CELPIP?

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Yes. For more information, email me at: info@fasttrackesl.com

@BLOOMINGUS26 Год назад

@@fasttrackesl I did email 3 days ago. Please reply me over there

@Ankursharma0212 9 месяцев назад

It has recently come to my attention that the city council is planning to make changes to bus fares. While some people may argue that these changes will not improve the quality of service, I personally disagree and will justify my reasons in the following essay.

@fasttrackesl 9 месяцев назад

Great intro. Here’s a tip: Try to get rid of additional words. For instance, you can say: “While some may argue that…”

@DipenPatel-tc4fr 4 месяца назад

is there new videos for reading strategy for member?

@fasttrackesl 4 месяца назад

Yes! In the “Reading Masterclass” playlist, you’ll find detailed walkthroughs for all four sections of the reading test. There are two guides for each part of the reading test (one for each of the two free practice tests available for free on the Paragon website). In the CELPIP reading walkthroughs, I don’t just review the strategies; I also show you how each strategy is used in action (using a real CELPIP test). Happy learning!

@kishansojitra8033 6 месяцев назад

It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is planning to increase bus fares to enhance the transportation service. While some argue that bus charges should be raised to improve the quality of service, I personally support that bus fares should remain the same. I will proceed to justify my choice in the following.

@fasttrackesl 6 месяцев назад

- Say: “I support the idea* that bus fares should…” Or: “I support bus fares remaining the same.”

@vishnupvijayan9181 6 месяцев назад

hi Sam, i am currently a member of the channel but i am not able to watch the videos please reply

@fasttrackesl 6 месяцев назад

Hi Member, Please make sure you’ve signed up for the right tier (e.g., Speaking or Speaking + Writing). You can easily upgrade from the same place you joined.

@niravpchavda 11 месяцев назад

I was recently informed that the bus fares are about to be increased by the city council. While some argue that for improving the quality of services, increasing bus fares is a good choice, I personally feel that it is a bad idea and I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

@fasttrackesl 11 месяцев назад

Thanks for sharing. - Replace “choice” with “option” - try not to have mirroring sentences for the two sides of the argument. Say: “I personally disagree and will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.” Keep up the good work.

@suprabrajbhandari548 Год назад

I recently found out that the city council is looking to increase the bus fares to improve their services. While some might agree to that notion, I would personally choose the bus fares to remain the same and I will justify my choice for the following reasons.

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Nicely done. The verb “choose” could’ve been replaced with phrases like “would rather…” or “would prefer” for clarity and naturalness.

@ravneetsodhi8299 4 месяца назад

It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is considering an increase in bus fare to enhance the better service. Whereas some point out that consistency in the price of bus fare is a good idea, I personally disagree and will proceed to justify my stance or choice in the following.

@fasttrackesl 4 месяца назад

Well done. I have one piece of advice for you: Keep your phrases short: “…consistency in the price of bus fare…” vs. “stable bus fares” “…and will proceed to justify my stance or choice (🤷🏻‍♂️) in the following.” vs. “…and will explain my reasons below.” Simplicity is key! Keep up the good work!

@ghazaledadashizade3379 Год назад

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@fasttrackesl Год назад

Hi there, Thanks for your interest in becoming a channel member. You can join the membership program by clicking on the link below: ru-vid.com/show-UC9j659eaE5p0dhN-OeM_s2Qjoin Use of VPN May help if RU-vid membership programs are not available in your country or region. Please let me know if you have any questions.

@ghazaledadashizade3379 Год назад

@@fasttrackesl Hi Would you mind please telling me how I can book an appointment with you regarding the CElPIP course class and test?

@fasttrackesl Год назад

Hi again, You can direct your queries to: info@fastttrackesl.com

@anjalipatel3119 6 месяцев назад

I was recently informed that the city council is going to increase bus fares for the betterment of passenger services. While some argue that bus fairs should be raised, I personally feel that they should remain as they are. I will proceed to justify my choice in the following.

@fasttrackesl 6 месяцев назад

Good work. Just beware the dreaded homophone! Say: “Fare” (Not “Fair”)

@anjalipatel3119 6 месяцев назад

@@fasttrackesl Thank you. Just wanted to clear a confusion: can we end the introduction with ""in the following" or I should write "in the following paragraphs"?

@szelunchan1700 7 месяцев назад

It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is considering raising the bus fares to improve the bus service. While some argue in favor of increasing the bus fares, I personally disagree and will explain my reasons in the following.

@fasttrackesl 7 месяцев назад

Nice. Try to make the initial phrase shorter: “It was recently brought to my attention that the city council is considering a change in bus fares.”