(The longer version of the entry I submitted) Music used: Kevin MacLeod - One-eyed Maestro Kevin MacLeod - Nerves Kevin MacLeod - Hidden Agenda Clanadonia - Egyptian Kevin MacLeod - Sovereign
Demo slipping on the pencil might be one of the funniest moments in the whole collab. And while some of the other story elements were nice like Demo being nervous and the ending being kind of positive, the entry felt kind of drawn out. I think this could've been a 3-minute video without really losing anything, and that would've helped the pacing a ton. Maybe there could've also been another funny moment or two throughout the entry. Also, try to stick to just one framerate instead of changing it all the time, and I'd highly recommend 30fps because high framerates like 60fps require a really high skill to properly pull off and 60fps is arguably worse for animation; there are reasons why professionals stick to lower framerates.
Thank you for the critique! And thank you for that helpful tidbit about fps! I now can definitely see parts that I could've shortened for pacing too, so thank you for addressing it!. I'll likely upload a shorter version in order to remedy such issues.
i will be honest. that feeling of being scared and panaroid of might be failed is still causing me a trouble, but this entry is actually great presentation. i like it. nice one
