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@thomasdevine867
@thomasdevine867 3 месяца назад
This reminds me of both Bradbury's "Dark They were and Golden Eyed," and Le Guin's "Vaster than Empires and more Slow." But it lacks the poetry of either of those. I see some influence of Van Vogt's "The Village" as well.
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 3 месяца назад
Thank you for your thoughts. I hope I can achieve a smoother narration in future stories.
@EllenCrawford-h1f
@EllenCrawford-h1f Месяц назад
Story keeps repeating itself need to communicate with your editor to prevent that from happening
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY Месяц назад
I am working on it. Thank you for your valuable comment. 🙏
@johnmac4769
@johnmac4769 3 месяца назад
wish the story line was better put together.
@GiantHFY
@GiantHFY 3 месяца назад
Thank you for commenting. I hope it will be more settled in future stories. I am trying to improve.
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