way,way better story than FSOG...i love this song for L/C. A lot of ppl fussed about not getting to see them make love..fading to black. I thought it what they did give us was hot enough,personally. It's been said that erotica is using a feather..porn is chucking the whole damned bird. As a writer, sometimes leaving what did happen up to the imagination of the viewer is a better experience. It certainly was in this case,i think.