The logic has left the chat already like seriously 😅 in the beginning it was really good but then ......ummm don't you think that it's a bit early to confess your love to your kidnapper whom was going to kill your parents and force you to go with Him and also tae didn't even know his name then how can give him a nickname this was really unexpected 😔😢
Its cool i liked it to but it needed to go longer I would have like Taekook to get to know each other grow and do things to get to experience themselves I wanted to know if tae liked him from school also I like that u wrote Tae BDAY that showed Jk love him because its important day for Tae I know the next one wrote more involvement between the persons Then yr story will grow U can look at some of the other writers made there stories it will help u with yr writing Good luck and KEEP WRITING U WILL MAKE IT 💯💯💯💯💜💜💜💜👍👍👍👍👏👏😀@taehyungsi_v
Why would tae even say yes. He got kidnapped by him, he should be saying a big fat no. Also if jk really loved him he should have done things differently and nicely
