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Maybe I Am Lonely│Spoken Word Poetry 

Mel's Thoughts
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I wrote this while feeling an intense loneliness and it pretty much wrote itself. Sometimes we can be surrounded by loved ones, have many friends, or a special someone, and yet still feel so alone.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
Background music from freesound.org by the user connum
Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx

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26 авг 2024

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Комментарии : 297   
@Khartoum29
@Khartoum29 6 лет назад
"I'd rather disappear and go silent than feel like I'm bothering some one" i can relate to this and I'm still trying to figure this out.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
Oh yes it's very hard to feel that way and I've been trying really hard not to do that these days
@applesong01
@applesong01 5 лет назад
Here too...
@saruchhetri8540
@saruchhetri8540 5 лет назад
Same here.
@ohdetslilzi4394
@ohdetslilzi4394 3 года назад
Same
@thoelalger2244
@thoelalger2244 Год назад
Love apples
@jamlessarmi1821
@jamlessarmi1821 4 года назад
"I sigh when I see a group of friends having the time of their lives or couple holding hands" that's me, then I try to cover my jealousy.
@mariea82
@mariea82 4 года назад
“I hesitate to call or send a message because I feel like I’m annoying “ god I absolutely felt that , like 100% of the time which is why I hardly do it anymore 🙁
@darksidelovedarkness8135
@darksidelovedarkness8135 3 года назад
"Not wanting to become clingy and dependent on others for a piece of happiness" This is one part I relate too, and I'm trying my hardest not to cling to others..
@Blueschy
@Blueschy 5 лет назад
This is exactly how I feel
@tiny3641
@tiny3641 3 года назад
Same :(
@aye_204
@aye_204 5 лет назад
hey love 🦋🖤 “If you’re sad remember you’re just having a bad day not a bad life “ “I don’t know you but I love you “💖🖤🐝 Sincerely just a little reminder 🖤🍓🍇🐛
@anone03
@anone03 4 года назад
Oh this is nice..
@oluaamarachi2993
@oluaamarachi2993 3 года назад
Why doesn't the sad day want to end😔
@marthalongwe8863
@marthalongwe8863 2 года назад
I love you mel
@shahidarif7816
@shahidarif7816 6 лет назад
hey! you just gave words to my inner person now i can hear myself..
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
Haha, that's great!
@insanedictater2271
@insanedictater2271 5 лет назад
Holy crap. That’s probably the most relatable poem I’ve ever heard! Bout word for word. Thanks for the smile at the irony! Lovin’ these poems! Please, keep em coming
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 лет назад
Aww thanks!
@kalaichelvithayalan9292
@kalaichelvithayalan9292 5 лет назад
Elan life best Holland nicht singe ich tamil Mann spricht
@cyrileli9129
@cyrileli9129 2 года назад
@@MelsThoughts i can relate 💯🔥😢
@emilymartinez5502
@emilymartinez5502 4 года назад
I always feel alone. I always wanna call someone to feel better, but don't wanna be a burden. It's hard for me to share my thoughts when I'm too deepen with my emotional thoughts. I have friends, but who knows if they see me as their friend. I'm lonely.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 года назад
I'm sorry to hear that :( I've been feeling the same lately. I want to reach out to friends, but then I hold back because I feel like they won't want to talk to me. It's a hard and lonely thing to go through
@dheerajrajput2093
@dheerajrajput2093 4 года назад
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@Diana-gt1rv
@Diana-gt1rv 3 года назад
Whoever feels like this, don’t be sad, just be yourself and always remember, you are loved and you are loved because you are precious and because you are special! 💖🥰
@nursyarahadiba6128
@nursyarahadiba6128 6 лет назад
I understand the feeling, I feel it too. Thank you for saying the thing I cant put it in words
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
Nur Syarah Adiba You're welcome :) I'm glad to hear that you liked it!
@parkjaehyun9724
@parkjaehyun9724 6 лет назад
Your not alone..... I feel the same way....
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
Thank you ❤ I've been feeling this poem a lot these days
@parkjaehyun9724
@parkjaehyun9724 6 лет назад
@@MelsThoughts You can really feel the emotions
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
I'm glad to hear that :) I try my best to write how I feel
@-JAVY-
@-JAVY- 9 месяцев назад
I've said every word u spoke this whole year. Every day. Every moment
@pragya0164
@pragya0164 6 лет назад
This is actually beautiful! I wish I impress people through my videos as you impressed me! 🐣
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
Thank you very much! 😊 I'm happy to hear that you liked it!
@emnaellefi3083
@emnaellefi3083 6 лет назад
maybe i don't belong..maybe i'm afraid of being forgotten and replaced...
@al-kisah257
@al-kisah257 3 года назад
mapuh kerah ghinii.. huaaaaa...TOKSE DOHHHHH... PADE GU..TOKSE DOHHH.. Peritt
@saramorando6545
@saramorando6545 3 года назад
This poem has touched my heart. This is how I feel but never could describe it.
@shovansarker5403
@shovansarker5403 3 года назад
Those words are so relatable, I also don't wanna bother anyone when my closest people misunderstood me, rather it feels better to disappear. Thanks a lot for the poem :)
@mirabasnet9546
@mirabasnet9546 5 лет назад
I feel like u r speaking my inner words ... u r jst amazing
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 лет назад
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D
@vanejahvanejah2311
@vanejahvanejah2311 3 года назад
This video brings me tears😳Please don't stop doing videos
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 года назад
@angelabrown7966
@angelabrown7966 3 года назад
You need a friend, I'll be that person. BECAUSE, I believe you're a blessing whether your happy 😊 or sad 😥. Everyone is precious & unique in your own way. And You're truly, deeply respected & appreciated by the one's closest to your heart. Never underestimate your value, worth. BECAUSE, whenever your not around, you're truly missed. Everyone has issues. And sometimes (friends) may seem neglectful,but I believe they're having problems also. You're a blessing not a burden. And if you need,time for yourself cool. But don't distance yourself. BECAUSE, family & true friends will always be there holding your hand & waiting. If you feel lonely, do whatever you can to improve that situation. Fill your life with friends, hobbies, projects. Engaged yourself with things, you like doing. Don't ever give up, because life is a beautiful thing. And situations change , just like the weather. We all experience the ups & downs about life. Nomatter the situation, we're stronger than we think. And nomatter where you're at, Theirs someone that appreciates & recognize (you), as a precious friend. Have faith & cling to hope. It will guide& maintain your strength & courage. God will listen & bless your life with the things you deserve. You're worthy of kindness, respect & friendship. You just have to believe in yourself.
@hannah1234xo
@hannah1234xo Год назад
What you said about feeling like you are bothering someone is what I feel all the time... I love your poetry. I write poetry too, keep it up.
@mellisakirabo3547
@mellisakirabo3547 2 года назад
The words in this poem were one of the last words or sentences that XXXTENTACION aka X the late rapper whose death was unxpected said before his death and it makes me feel lighter that my name sake MELISSA wrote most of them in this poem coz l felt dead after his death coz he really motivated me and made me feel loved and less alone but ever since he died l have never felt the same I was heartbroken coz he really motivated many depressed youths like me but now am looking up to ur poems coz they legit remind me so much about him😞😕😭😭🤧 RIP XXXTENTACION 💗💯
@SHASHANKKESARWANI-jp2ol
@SHASHANKKESARWANI-jp2ol 3 года назад
This is exactly me, every single word describes me perfectly
@kevinholliway8521
@kevinholliway8521 2 года назад
I just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing person and anyone who knows you in life are blessed your words make me feel like I'm not alone thank you so much Mel. 😎 a kindrid spirit.🙏
@maganouusiku2202
@maganouusiku2202 4 года назад
I’d rather disappear and go silent than feel like I’m bothered someone “... oh this talks to me 🙌🏾
@sharifahannurrahimah620
@sharifahannurrahimah620 3 года назад
Me too..
@anipiece3758
@anipiece3758 3 года назад
Why it is so relatable
@cassiusfelix2805
@cassiusfelix2805 4 года назад
you can feel lonely even if your with someone that's the scary part.
@yennguyen-uj3ri
@yennguyen-uj3ri 2 года назад
You’re right, I’m married for 24 years and most of the time I feel lonely
@heykari_5926
@heykari_5926 4 года назад
'Loneliness brings along jealousy'. That's true, sometimes I compare my life to other. It's like I hurt my self. Loneliness is nothing, my mind said. But deep my heart can't lie.
@Good_Y3llow
@Good_Y3llow 4 месяца назад
In the depths of solitude, a lonely soul resides, Embracing the silence, where darkness quietly hides, A yearning for connection, a longing to be seen, Loneliness, a companion, where the heartache convenes. In the vast expanse of emptiness, a void unfolds, Where echoes of laughter and warmth have been untold, The stillness engulfs, a silent symphony, Loneliness dances, in melancholic harmony. No footsteps to follow, no hands to hold, Loneliness, a companion, in stories left untold, Aching for understanding, in a world so vast, Seeking solace amidst the shadows that contrast. Yet, in this solitude, a strength takes root, Loneliness, a muse, where resilience takes pursuit, A self-discovery in the quiet and the plight, Finding solace in one's own company, day and night. Loneliness, a teacher, revealing truths untold, Deepening empathy and compassion, to behold, A gentle reminder of our human connection, To reach out and bridge the gaps of isolation. In the depths of loneliness, a seed of hope is sown, For amidst the solitude, growth begins to own, For in this journey, where the heartaches persist, We find the strength within, to rise and persist. So embrace the solitude, let loneliness be, A catalyst for introspection, for the soul to see, That in the midst of loneliness, we are not alone, For empathy and understanding will guide us home.
@MS-pl5gv
@MS-pl5gv 2 года назад
Each and every word said here relates to me… i wish that i could meet the person who has written this …😞
@dalejoreye839
@dalejoreye839 Год назад
Wow!! Beautiful. I can relate.
@joegonzalez6189
@joegonzalez6189 5 лет назад
This is nice. I might have to start posting my own I have a book of them.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 лет назад
You should!
@shreyanigam5576
@shreyanigam5576 4 года назад
Goodness... You are totally my soulmate... You are expressing my feelings that even I can't express... I'm a poet too... But I've never got enough words to explain me... But today listening to your poetry made me cry, not because you are like me, but because you could express me... The way I also couldn't... I love your poetry... Thanks for writing this...
@marianaschuler182
@marianaschuler182 2 года назад
Thank you, Melissa 💜 you hugged me
@maliksmith6561
@maliksmith6561 3 года назад
You literally just said everything I’m going through. I’m not good with saying what I feel. But Loneliness is the worst
@pompomkitty306
@pompomkitty306 4 года назад
Soooooooooo relatable!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
@hailiethompson2034
@hailiethompson2034 4 года назад
I have this one on repeat! I can relate so much, I really love your work. It’s beautifully done. Love it 😊
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 года назад
Thank you!!!
@queenofheart1603
@queenofheart1603 3 года назад
Sometimes when you share your deeds what you have done is batter then to keep it because you said you have a family and a few friends but because of that happen you are not ok and feeling alone you need to talk instead to keep. That’s better for you live a batter life which you and everyone deserve
@leidaefes6115
@leidaefes6115 3 года назад
"i sigh whenever i see a group of friends having the time of their lives.." and then i started crying
@cassandramarkiewicz8221
@cassandramarkiewicz8221 6 лет назад
I love this, thank you.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
Live Happy Thank you for checking it out! 😊 you're very welcome!
@lawrenciasoglo5922
@lawrenciasoglo5922 2 года назад
This feeling where you with friends but still feel lonely
@lejlav__
@lejlav__ 4 года назад
I am bawling my eyes out rn, this is so fuxxing relatable
@KorgenJurai
@KorgenJurai 3 года назад
This is so relatable.
@siankyoung
@siankyoung 2 года назад
I send you love.xx I have seen the darkness of loneliness
@rhanneaudreydelacuesta8897
@rhanneaudreydelacuesta8897 4 года назад
God! Stop being so relatable😥😟😭Finally...you express what I really wanted to say Thank you😊
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 года назад
@F3ARTHEKHAOSJBaiz
@F3ARTHEKHAOSJBaiz 4 года назад
i feel this so much .... 😥
@sahanagv5136
@sahanagv5136 Год назад
This touched my heart❤
@yesuilee1092
@yesuilee1092 4 года назад
I'm not feeling useless but I'm just feeling like I will annoyed someone even with just my existence in the same room so yes maybe I am lonely
@tammy5938
@tammy5938 10 месяцев назад
Not everyone wants to leave,they figure you don't give a damn about them anymore, so why try, it hurts to love and be turned down
@DarkWolf-lz5xf
@DarkWolf-lz5xf 2 года назад
this is so true. Even though I'm surrounded by family and I have a boyfriend, I still feel lonely.
@hantuemm
@hantuemm 5 лет назад
wow i never related to anything more than this. this is written really awesome.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 лет назад
Thank you very much!
@zoh3ri638
@zoh3ri638 5 лет назад
This is the same feeling I'm going through. Even though I didn't get the answers I needed at least I know I am not alone. Thank you.
@sinukumari4246
@sinukumari4246 3 года назад
Why i found you this late ?? All these lines ,it' like i'm feeling them in my skin,as i go through the same...Thank you so much for voicing out so many people's feelingz into words..
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад
you have a beautiful story to tell
@jamiepersona
@jamiepersona 2 года назад
This hit me hard.. very relatable
@abdullahsherq8550
@abdullahsherq8550 5 лет назад
Wish I had someone who could read my mind like you.. THANK YOU!!!
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 лет назад
@skriaz2501
@skriaz2501 5 лет назад
I feel exactly same....each words decribes me....!!!
@melindapemberton999
@melindapemberton999 5 лет назад
Mel mitch and I love your poems butbi know how you have felt in my years long time ago but with Gods helped me I'm so.much better but everyone gets depressed one time another if they say they dont say they dont telling you the truth cause everyone gets that way one time or another but it isn't exactly depression is it but it ant I forget what the dr cause that but everyone has been though it so I'm proud of you whatvyiu have complexed you on the race so stay girl I'm very proud of you me and mitch is both is so keep writing the poems and we will keep reading them im.proud of you my friend thanks
@tamryngreen6265
@tamryngreen6265 2 года назад
I am connected to this
@angelabrown8423
@angelabrown8423 6 лет назад
Dear friend, I want you to share your feelings with family and friends.Theirs no shame admitting that you feel sad, alone.And don't ever feel like your annoying, because your not.Friend, most people, feel like you do.I don't want you,to ever give up, on yourself.Remain strong and hold on to your dreams.Someday your dreams will come true.The despair your feeling, just let it go.if you ever need someone as a friend .I'm here.Please have faith.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
Angela Brown Thank you for the kind words ❤ I appreciate them very much!
@manozkunwar4561
@manozkunwar4561 6 лет назад
Angela Brown yeah me
@tabathagilbert201
@tabathagilbert201 5 лет назад
You need your soulmate and it could be the best thing because a soulmate will love you for who you are.
@infoandmotivationaltv5636
@infoandmotivationaltv5636 4 года назад
Your company is my best priority
@mansikhandekar7138
@mansikhandekar7138 5 лет назад
this touched me
@dheerajrajput2093
@dheerajrajput2093 4 года назад
❤❤
@queenofheart1603
@queenofheart1603 3 года назад
Everyone is lonely own their own because everyone has a past so don’t worry
@kaisiigeorge8958
@kaisiigeorge8958 4 года назад
Simply amazing~mel....luv it👍
@Kei-ew8uh
@Kei-ew8uh 4 года назад
Mom: are you ok? Me: yeah, I'm ok. Mom: I'm glad you're ok Me: 🙃
@chembomuke2419
@chembomuke2419 2 года назад
Art❤️
@judylockhart9503
@judylockhart9503 3 года назад
I feel this too
@gracelibre7635
@gracelibre7635 4 года назад
It was me.❤ maybe I'm a weird human being. I prefer to distance myself to my family, friends and everyone else. I don't know how to be me to anyone. I don't want anyone to judge me as I am. I can relate on this.Maybe I have to find myself alone. So when the times come and I'm ready to talk to someone I won't hide my true feelings anymore.💙🙏
@kirstyy7572
@kirstyy7572 4 года назад
Every words that you've said hits me:
@himanshipal3469
@himanshipal3469 5 лет назад
I'm in tears right now because it's looks like this poetry was about me. 😥😥😥💔💔💔
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 лет назад
Don't cry, but at least you know you're not alone with this feeling
@britanicoangelynkayepatris608
@britanicoangelynkayepatris608 3 года назад
maybe i am lonely. every time I'm with them i always feel that i don't exist.
@samhitagollakota
@samhitagollakota 6 лет назад
I'm in tears, thank you for this.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
You're very welcome! :)
@minerva7699
@minerva7699 3 года назад
I love this. Something I can resonate.
@mahmoudmarouene1402
@mahmoudmarouene1402 3 года назад
That's exectly what i feel and i could never describe it I really hate myself I love your peoms keep going ♥️
@queenofheart1603
@queenofheart1603 3 года назад
Listen I am happy if anyone happy in their life because of me Next that’s called need is indeed so don’t take it personal ever . If you have a place in your heart for someone then feel it the other person has the same feelings for you . Listen to your heart about your family and friends and others you do like you will get the answers
@theunknown9745
@theunknown9745 5 лет назад
This is exactly what I feel.
@mr.royhari2202
@mr.royhari2202 3 года назад
Just enjoying the travel have the fun not easy but trying to take it easy it's normal ready to me. If I can yiu can right? just throw thats words pick what you want stick,it its free to everybody.
@queenofheart1603
@queenofheart1603 3 года назад
Open your heart
@narmees769
@narmees769 2 года назад
Every words are relatable!!Hey, are you me??🥺
@kreetika1153
@kreetika1153 3 года назад
I am on same phase😔I dont like crowd ! depressed in lone😐️I dont want to talk anyone! Cant stay peacefully lone too Dont know whats going on😑
@zarachoudhry4784
@zarachoudhry4784 4 года назад
This melt my heart
@yourfavoritebandaid
@yourfavoritebandaid 5 лет назад
I relate to this so much its sad.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 лет назад
@shreyaseemistri3517
@shreyaseemistri3517 3 года назад
Thanks for sharing my thoughts to me❤️
@pangetko22
@pangetko22 4 года назад
Your poem hit me this is me 😢😢😢
@maggiewanjiru2807
@maggiewanjiru2807 4 года назад
Looking at the comments.. surprised am not alone in this feeling that scares me all the time.
@queenofheart1603
@queenofheart1603 3 года назад
And the matter in past whould you like to forget or like to keep it and let it become a big wound
@infoandmotivationaltv5636
@infoandmotivationaltv5636 4 года назад
You will neither be replaced or forgotten bcz now you are reason of my life I love you my sweetheart Angel KD 😘 Never lose hope
@kushoautar353
@kushoautar353 4 года назад
Beautiful words
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 года назад
Thanks for listening :)
@sintah3855
@sintah3855 3 года назад
story of my life
@jack-dd4oo
@jack-dd4oo 4 года назад
I feel like a piece of poop. My life’s like a hatred loop. I tend to look for solutions. But it always turns out to pollution. Not just any pollution, it’s one in my heart.
@jack-dd4oo
@jack-dd4oo 4 года назад
omggg bro made me cry
@jack-dd4oo
@jack-dd4oo 4 года назад
such talent
@jack-dd4oo
@jack-dd4oo 4 года назад
man keep up the good work
@jack-dd4oo
@jack-dd4oo 4 года назад
i feel i broooo
@jack-dd4oo
@jack-dd4oo 4 года назад
i feel i bro? learn some grammar you doofus
@queenofheart1603
@queenofheart1603 3 года назад
Don’t hesitate if you want to talk to someone
@akbaralibappda8707
@akbaralibappda8707 3 года назад
Now you are not lonly,be happy
@poatoesforlifefood6839
@poatoesforlifefood6839 4 года назад
I have two siblings but they hate me when i look back at my favorite kid show of three siblings i cry becuase i cannt be like them it hurts but its ok becuase i cannt break if i am already broken.
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад
I believe it
@nicodemuspeterson6263
@nicodemuspeterson6263 6 лет назад
thank you
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 лет назад
NightMaiden Any time 😊❤
@RhythmAddictedState
@RhythmAddictedState 5 лет назад
I can relate so much, thank you!
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 лет назад
No thank you for checking it out! :)
@reagansmith2497
@reagansmith2497 4 года назад
Just be u inspiration comes standard
@user-pn5jq3zs8c
@user-pn5jq3zs8c 4 года назад
It's really amazing poem..
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