the start doesn't actually sound too bad, you can hardly tell that there's sentence mixing done for "I am heavyweapons guy. And THIS is my weapon." Edit: Not saying the rest of the sentence mixing is bad, it's actually really impressive
I know I'm late to the party but this is very impressive! Usually characters can only be understood when the dialogue uses mostly complete words from the voicelines (eg. "medic is a sandvich") but this is quite listenable.