Not bad despite a few mistakes and (assumption) lack of knowledge of how R.Nerg's claw slams work.Friendly advice as a fellow LS main with the full Fatalis set, Gama Velkhana legs and every deco I could want, try using Maximum Might on your build so you don't have to Tenderize so much and specific to this monster-learn how it's claw slams work so you can avoid and punish accordingly otherwise you could consider Earplugs 5 or Bleed Res 3.