I think the humor and tone of the video is great, but I think it could use a little more structure. The video felt a little all over the place with the order in which the cards were talked about and what role they played in the deck. I think if you stated things like the decks budget, what is the deck trying to do, and how it plans on achieving that goal at the start of the video, it think that would help the viewer follow along better. Id also maybe recommend grouping the cards together by what role they play in the deck, reading one or two in full, and then naming a few other cards that also fulfill this role to help newer players connect the dots without having to read each card in full. Keep it up tho good work!
So many of these cards belong in my self-mill/sacrifice Savra deck! This will up the ante on it for sure. Even if I don't build this guy, I'm hanging on to every word.