you could have added a little bit of cuts in the video every few seconds to make an overall better video and a shorter one so your watch time become better, but the idea and the concept of the video is great!, i can see you becoming a big channel if you just keep improving yourself.
Good video, was honestly surprised with your subscriber count. A bit of advice to help get those numbers up: try and make your videos a bit more streamlined. I saw one person say to add more cuts, and another say to talk more; luckily, these can actually can go hand in hand. You can cut out moments of silence where you're just walking, mining, or thinking to make the video flow better and seem "fuller", if that makes sense. If you don't feel like doing cuts, you can just fast forward those moments and overlay some music or a fast forwarding sound instead. Another piece of advice would be to bleep out curse words, maybe using the old "Steve hurt" sound to cover them up. Bleeping the curses will open your videos up to a much larger audience. Good luck, and keep up the good work👍🏼!