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"Missing Children" Creepypasta 

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Happy Friday 13th! For this day I've written little thriller for you all. :)
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@mushroomwings3236
@mushroomwings3236 8 лет назад
Detective: Makin' my way downtown Detective: Walkin' fast *really creepy shit starts happening* Detective: Walking faster
@rachozbaxtoz
@rachozbaxtoz 8 лет назад
This made me laugh so hard. thank you for that
@mushroomwings3236
@mushroomwings3236 8 лет назад
+Rachel Baxter glad I couldhelp
@ParryThisCasual
@ParryThisCasual 7 лет назад
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
@asmallpastelstar6060
@asmallpastelstar6060 7 лет назад
Alex Phillips your the best XD
@liralilly7071
@liralilly7071 7 лет назад
Alex Phillips LOL!!! 😊😀😄😬😁😂😂😂😂😂😂 ;) ;3
@ImaTroper
@ImaTroper 7 лет назад
Would have loved it if she did come back. Mom: Did you find him? Det: Yeah, but he was creepy, so I left him in a crumbling old house. Mom: W-what!? Did he attack you or something? Det: No, not really. Actually helped me now that I think about it....but he looked weird, y'know? Like he hadn't eaten in a while... Mom: Oh my god, my baby!
@evermore20
@evermore20 5 лет назад
Lmao! Me as a detective 😂
@finley9045
@finley9045 5 лет назад
Thanks Kanye very cool
@gothboi4ever
@gothboi4ever 4 года назад
Lmao
@victorplayz5777
@victorplayz5777 4 года назад
Lol
@donnageorge6506
@donnageorge6506 4 года назад
yeh agreed
@Sclasspsycho
@Sclasspsycho 10 лет назад
Woah, wait! Stuffed animals aren't supposed to breathe?! Excuse me, I have to go deal with something.
@C102y
@C102y 10 лет назад
Pfft... Of course they do! Didn't you ever see Toy Story?
@andreeaangel5822
@andreeaangel5822 6 лет назад
Sclasspsycho Wait what?!?!
@darielgibson8623
@darielgibson8623 6 лет назад
I learned that they stop breathing if you sleep on top of them
@melissawilson4925
@melissawilson4925 6 лет назад
😂
@klein2042
@klein2042 6 лет назад
**Grabs minigun**
@hshamilt2
@hshamilt2 7 лет назад
Wait... an average 11yr old child is 5ft 2? Well, now I feel really short.
@plant9288
@plant9288 7 лет назад
Hannah Hamilton I'm 11 and 5 foot 3
@Dslasher99
@Dslasher99 6 лет назад
this is 17+ area.. banned
@MrWise-tk5bj
@MrWise-tk5bj 6 лет назад
I am 5'6. Feel tall now?
@lio8651
@lio8651 5 лет назад
I was like 5’7 when I was eleven
@kellyschafer2939
@kellyschafer2939 5 лет назад
Hannah Hamilton me to I’m only 5ft even lol but I’ve been this tall since 7th grade
@mywinterfirefly98
@mywinterfirefly98 10 лет назад
Ok I don't know if I'm the only one who thought about this but, I think that the child in the story is Christopher Robin. He has the same name, looks the same by description, is the same age as when "Winnie-the-Pooh" was published, and has a lot of stuffed animals. His room and toys are based in the same time period as when he was a child also. The bedroom matches the description of his actual bedroom and the stuffed bear has the same description as Winnie. (originally named Edward bear but yes that's what the toy looked like) Everything just matches so perfectly together so yes, this pasta might have Christopher Robin as the missing child.
@colinmcneil4264
@colinmcneil4264 10 лет назад
wow.
@DerpingReachGaming
@DerpingReachGaming 10 лет назад
Love it
@kiracaroso
@kiracaroso 8 лет назад
+storiesofthedark I agree.
@ckrause81
@ckrause81 5 лет назад
Interesting perspective
@kipechawolfeortiz8791
@kipechawolfeortiz8791 5 лет назад
W O K E
@johnvinson3217
@johnvinson3217 7 лет назад
That kid is an albino with asthma and he is trying to ask for help cuz he can't find his inhaler
@stocourt3818
@stocourt3818 7 лет назад
john vinson that's messed up yet hilarious
@ttvturtleman2861
@ttvturtleman2861 7 лет назад
john vinson lmfao
@lucascrider3907
@lucascrider3907 4 года назад
LOL
@xxmemequeenxx3147
@xxmemequeenxx3147 4 года назад
😂
@TheNachoKat
@TheNachoKat 10 лет назад
That...did not sound like running.
@COCHlNO
@COCHlNO 4 года назад
*fap*
@anthonydefilippo8526
@anthonydefilippo8526 3 года назад
bump
@anthonydefilippo8526
@anthonydefilippo8526 3 года назад
did not like this story
@brennanconley3110
@brennanconley3110 3 года назад
I've heard of stuffed animal fetishes, but this is ridiculous
@steel_boydepoy5827
@steel_boydepoy5827 3 года назад
Could not focus cuz that...that was definitely not running
@MrCreepyPasta
@MrCreepyPasta 10 лет назад
*Orders CreepsMcPasta Shirts for all his Christmas gifts*
@kiracaroso
@kiracaroso 8 лет назад
+TailsDoll I kind of figured. I am just joking around. I actually like the pastas about it, call it a guilty pleasure.
@kiracaroso
@kiracaroso 8 лет назад
+TailsDoll Heheh. *Reaches paw out to jiggle the gem*
@kiracaroso
@kiracaroso 8 лет назад
+TailsDoll *Deftly sidesteps the beam and grins* Hehehe.
@aegaming3353
@aegaming3353 8 лет назад
Ahh, so you're the one who copies this man's videos. I can't believe how everyone subscribers to you, you just copy.
@aegaming3353
@aegaming3353 8 лет назад
typo meant subscribe s
@Rantastic11
@Rantastic11 7 лет назад
If only the detective had watched SpongeBob, he would have known that Chris just wanted to buy all his chocolate.
@klein2042
@klein2042 6 лет назад
Chocolate? Chocolate!? Chocolate!?!? CHOCOLATE!?!? CHOCOLAAAAAATE!?!?
@marknavas4714
@marknavas4714 5 лет назад
fax
@Noni-ys2xw
@Noni-ys2xw 5 лет назад
Lol
@MrTurtluv
@MrTurtluv 4 года назад
Chawck-late.
@harleysparrow222
@harleysparrow222 10 лет назад
I think children are lured there, and their life essence is put into a brand new stuffed toy. The stuffed toy moulders as their essence is used, twisted, and forgotten by the house
@JayKahlid
@JayKahlid 10 лет назад
that was perfect!
@soratsukino8781
@soratsukino8781 9 лет назад
Yeah, I was thinking the same :/
@cheesesteak2795
@cheesesteak2795 6 лет назад
Laura Donnell that is such a perfect story twist!
@nightcrawler7498
@nightcrawler7498 6 лет назад
ConnorisgonnawriteNfight ISONplus Sounds legit.
@REAPERV-kd7px
@REAPERV-kd7px 5 лет назад
Night Crawler yes
@maliboyd7071
@maliboyd7071 7 лет назад
Me: *Drawing and listening to story* *door slams* Me: HOLY SH-
@naomireed5556
@naomireed5556 5 лет назад
BRO I WAS LITERALLY DRAWING WHILE LISTENING TO THIS AND MY GRANNY SCARED THE F OUT OF ME BY SLAMMING THE BATHROOM DOOR XDD
@airsoftboi6137
@airsoftboi6137 5 лет назад
Lol, me
@I_Eat_Lemons
@I_Eat_Lemons 5 лет назад
The door in the video scared me actually -._-.
@fawniacaulford9448
@fawniacaulford9448 4 года назад
I was driving n hit my damn brakes
@ohgamisakura2159
@ohgamisakura2159 4 года назад
yo i’m drawing rn too
@Dunmunll
@Dunmunll 9 лет назад
This is what a creepypasta reading should be. It's one of the most intense stories I've ever heard. The sound effects are ingeniously placed and the soundtrack is used at just the right moments. Forever a classic, the story is masterfully written too and beautifully paced.
@tavereth4553
@tavereth4553 7 лет назад
TL;DR Summary: It was AWESOME!!! You're welcome to all the lazy people like me out there.
@rubeast5512
@rubeast5512 6 лет назад
True I never thought I would get do scared from faping soundeffects
@ichijofreedman
@ichijofreedman 5 лет назад
I've been listening all day and this one is the best I've heard in days
@patbuttramssuperfan
@patbuttramssuperfan 2 года назад
Same
@DiggerDeeper01
@DiggerDeeper01 10 лет назад
Dude...my name is Chris...and every time the dude calls out it sounds like one of my parents calling me. It's...fucking scaring me.
@200ratsinasuit
@200ratsinasuit 10 лет назад
Are you sure they're you parents though?
@DiggerDeeper01
@DiggerDeeper01 10 лет назад
No I mean like the tone is the same.
@liambent
@liambent 7 лет назад
omg the breathing noise u put in there ......made me so nervous omfg......
@sam.reece1963
@sam.reece1963 5 лет назад
The Yes part made me fall off my chair
@alirocksize
@alirocksize 8 лет назад
79 people who disliked are lost children who didnt like him sharing their secret
@aegaming3353
@aegaming3353 8 лет назад
Yeah lol ;)
@harrymedlin8677
@harrymedlin8677 8 лет назад
+A Turtle 87*
@fashionovawigs
@fashionovawigs 8 лет назад
+Harry Medlin 89*
@DarklyAesthetic
@DarklyAesthetic 8 лет назад
+Hector Solis 90*
@Dogman_35
@Dogman_35 8 лет назад
+Ali Shuber Or they could just be racist. I've seen people say they watch MrCreepyPasta or CreepypastaJr of Creeps because they don't like his accent...
@Blackout1945
@Blackout1945 10 лет назад
that was one long damn hallway.
@naomireed5556
@naomireed5556 5 лет назад
IKR
@sorazakawathederpyotter9454
@sorazakawathederpyotter9454 10 лет назад
Despite this being creepy as fuck, he has an extremely calming voice. Just so calming. owo
@xDragonHybridx
@xDragonHybridx 10 лет назад
Its like David Attenborough. Almost hypnotic
@derpysawesomenessmuffintra465
@derpysawesomenessmuffintra465 10 лет назад
ikr i listen to these when i sleep but only when ^ he reads it because everyone else sounds like a heartless ass... but hes... JUST SO CALMING (imagine a kawaii face here)
@sorazakawathederpyotter9454
@sorazakawathederpyotter9454 10 лет назад
I bet he would even calm down an army. xD
@Crow12343
@Crow12343 10 лет назад
I agree :D
@andreawilliams2421
@andreawilliams2421 9 лет назад
yes even though the stories may be creepy his voice is very calming.
@superlemonsama8794
@superlemonsama8794 10 лет назад
I DONT THINK YOU UNDERSTAND EXACTLY HOW MANY STUFFED ANIMALS ARE SURROUNDING ME RIGHT NOW, HERE IN MY ROOM ALL ALONE IN AN EMPTY HOUSE. \(;A; /) THAT GOD DANG NOISE MAN!! WHY IS THAT EVEN A NOISE?!?!
@darielgibson8623
@darielgibson8623 6 лет назад
Lemon Sama same I’m laying in a pile of animals or I was now they are under my bed with Satan where they belong
@naomireed5556
@naomireed5556 5 лет назад
if you listen close enough you can hear their gasping suffering breaths :)
@normalhuman9878
@normalhuman9878 4 года назад
I may have over 40 different plushies, but so far nothing has happened so they stay
@danielsauromega958
@danielsauromega958 8 лет назад
The breathing made me uncomfortable lol good job
@CreepsMcPasta
@CreepsMcPasta 10 лет назад
Next video- "Americas Funniest Videos- Banned Episode"
@oldladybast5292
@oldladybast5292 7 лет назад
CreepsMcPasta Good story. Will look up link.
@peterburns453
@peterburns453 7 лет назад
CreepsMcPasta I will literally pay for a written version of this as I dont have internet at my house and watching RU-vid lots takes its toll on my data, I doubt anyone would have the patience to sit and do it but if there's anyone with no lives that would be willing then I'd appreciate it greatly
@TheMiralist
@TheMiralist 7 лет назад
CreepsMcPasta Did you get the story written? I can do it, if not. ✌😊
@laurametheny1008
@laurametheny1008 7 лет назад
CreepsMcPasta I have to say...everytime I listen to this...(yes I go back every now and then) it is one of my faves. I love that music at the end too! This sounds a bit different than the first time I heard it tho....😯just getting old I guess lol. Thanks again Creeps!🌚
@kikikungfukakes6639
@kikikungfukakes6639 3 года назад
thanks creepyman
@AnneDalton82
@AnneDalton82 10 лет назад
**hears whisper in ear "Yes?"** FUCK THAT CHRIS IS DEAD OH WELL! **hauls ass out of there**
@galacticjewels7856
@galacticjewels7856 10 лет назад
XD XD XD
@vozhdthirteen5857
@vozhdthirteen5857 10 лет назад
Finally, a normal person.
@AnneDalton82
@AnneDalton82 10 лет назад
Thank you! A normal person wouldn't keep searching thats retarded!
@soratsukino8781
@soratsukino8781 9 лет назад
Hah! I would've done the same thing XD
@asteri0nyxx
@asteri0nyxx 9 лет назад
YUP THAT KID IS DEFINITELY DEAD LET'S JUST GO OUTSIDE THE CREEPY HOUSE AND TELL THE MOM NOW!
@johnscott928
@johnscott928 7 лет назад
Is that Bart Simpson's shadow in the window next to Evil Crusty The Clown.
@MsSpidey2
@MsSpidey2 6 лет назад
John Scott Don't you mean Sideshow Bob?
@arielann6887
@arielann6887 6 лет назад
John Scott omg it looks like it
@TallicaMan1986
@TallicaMan1986 4 года назад
@@MsSpidey2 Slideshow*
@person1860
@person1860 10 лет назад
Best thing to do, listen to creepypasta and play a nice game.
@person1860
@person1860 10 лет назад
Indeed my good friend, indeed! Those two things have actually kept me entertained for 3 or 4 days, and would have continued if a bug didn't get in the way, I was playing on a mod pack. So now I just play different games on steam that don't have any character talking, but just text, or a nice dungeon crawler such as Hammerwatch.
@beetle__bug
@beetle__bug 10 лет назад
***** Holy shit... I'm not the only one who listens to creepypastas and play minecraft at the same time.
@person1860
@person1860 10 лет назад
Nope, one of the best nights!
@guro8294
@guro8294 10 лет назад
***** It just so happens that I'm doing that right now. :P
@person1860
@person1860 10 лет назад
its so nice, just love it!
@1297Eman
@1297Eman 8 лет назад
The moral is, never help anyone
@annanicole3063
@annanicole3063 Год назад
No good deed goes unpunished.
@SquirrelN
@SquirrelN 10 лет назад
Okay, I know that foot steps part is supposed to be tense... and maybe I've watched too much hentai. But it seriously sounds like fapping, and the person has really bad asthma. I just couldn't help but laugh once I got that idea in my head. Still, awesome pasta.
@cosmicdownpour2182
@cosmicdownpour2182 9 лет назад
love the yuno pic future diary fan
@kikikungfukakes6639
@kikikungfukakes6639 4 года назад
Lol I tried to think of it as bare feet, but the kid would have to be running hella fast barefoot haha. Then I just smirked the whole time haha ❤️
@victorplayz5777
@victorplayz5777 4 года назад
Or his feet are size 13 or something
@Curlyheart
@Curlyheart Год назад
Ew
@Rachel98246
@Rachel98246 10 лет назад
12:13 admit it, we all jumped?!
@thatgirllily5148
@thatgirllily5148 9 лет назад
I know right
@SpeediraWindira
@SpeediraWindira 9 лет назад
~raises hand~ Meeeee....
@nenasarrts
@nenasarrts 9 лет назад
yep
@robloxgamereviewerk
@robloxgamereviewerk 9 лет назад
thank you for the warning
@Rachel98246
@Rachel98246 9 лет назад
No problem!
@CreepsMcPasta
@CreepsMcPasta 10 лет назад
Previous video- "Ugly the Cat"
@chelseasanchezmartinez3246
@chelseasanchezmartinez3246 10 лет назад
that video made me cry yet it warmed my heart
@36shadowboy
@36shadowboy 10 лет назад
annie leonheardt I am surprised you can watch videos through that thick ass shell.
@chelseasanchezmartinez3246
@chelseasanchezmartinez3246 10 лет назад
***** yeah so am i
@Happy-yx2tf
@Happy-yx2tf 10 лет назад
Not all cats are ugly!
@somerandomdudeontheinterne1157
@somerandomdudeontheinterne1157 10 лет назад
annie leonheardt it did everyone bro. id did everyone.
@Kiwi_Tea
@Kiwi_Tea 10 лет назад
My guess is the mother was perhaps not alive? A ghost maybe?
@jacobsartoriusisbae7001
@jacobsartoriusisbae7001 7 лет назад
Spectre i luvvv the your profile pictureeee
@SoniaSephia
@SoniaSephia 10 лет назад
NEEDS to be a Part 2 to this, cuz 1. Pretty original with the creepy breathing toys & pale face black eyes kid 2. Did the kids mom set this up? R the living toys former kids? 3. 20:40-21:30. Good stuff a part 2 should answer. Keep him for what?
@TheTechPoTaToCHIP
@TheTechPoTaToCHIP 10 лет назад
Since I am listening to this while I am playing gta v, I just balled out laughed when he said his name as Michael Philips XD
@MinecrafWolf
@MinecrafWolf 10 лет назад
Oh god....
@leonnorth9592
@leonnorth9592 10 лет назад
Wolf-God and MinecrafWolf says ur name
@leonnorth9592
@leonnorth9592 10 лет назад
:P
@tidebleach9667
@tidebleach9667 7 лет назад
TheTechPoTaToCHIP I can relate to this so much even though my name isn't Chris
@Meg_Lovegood
@Meg_Lovegood 6 лет назад
TheTechPoTaToCHIP, yeah power is out in my home and this started playing on my phone but i didn't know where it was.... it was okay at first, then i made a mess trying to find it lol
@enjikap1217
@enjikap1217 10 лет назад
Damn those sound effects, they creep me out way too much.
@watcheem
@watcheem 10 лет назад
Same here, I can't relax!
@Tgkjj
@Tgkjj 10 лет назад
watcheem love it adds more scare to creepypastas
@TheVandralretard
@TheVandralretard 10 лет назад
***** totally sounds like fapping
@greywalker505
@greywalker505 3 года назад
He definitely eased up on them in later years.
@Asertix357
@Asertix357 10 лет назад
28:45 is when it gets really scary.
@freddy4584
@freddy4584 10 лет назад
I think we all know what the "tapping and thudding" sounded like. XD
@rainbowdash9000
@rainbowdash9000 10 лет назад
Ugh Erisol...
@freddy4584
@freddy4584 10 лет назад
Yes, Erisol. I'm not sorry. VuV
@cosmicdownpour2182
@cosmicdownpour2182 9 лет назад
*facepalm*
@catgirl4250
@catgirl4250 9 лет назад
the fangirl hey nice sole eater pic ^^
@cosmicdownpour2182
@cosmicdownpour2182 9 лет назад
thanks
@skeuzmusic
@skeuzmusic 9 лет назад
your freakin sound fx get me every damn time
@xenophobicbastard5732
@xenophobicbastard5732 9 лет назад
commonmanfilms2 what do you mean, funny or scary because the foot steps sounds like someone was fapping
@aegaming3353
@aegaming3353 8 лет назад
commonmanfilms2+ Ha! Got him!
@Kanthros-kreations
@Kanthros-kreations 8 лет назад
First mistake: Going at night. I heard he did that, and I was like, "Oh, you fucked up."
@ApolloChild1512
@ApolloChild1512 9 лет назад
Nope, nope, nope, nope, nope. HELL NO. Not today Satan.
@kiracaroso
@kiracaroso 8 лет назад
+ApolloChild1512 Satan has nothing to do with it.
@ApolloChild1512
@ApolloChild1512 8 лет назад
+Kira Caroso your point?
@kiracaroso
@kiracaroso 8 лет назад
+ApolloChild1512 Oh, no point, just wanting to joke around.
@ApolloChild1512
@ApolloChild1512 8 лет назад
+Kira Caroso ah
@ApolloChild1512
@ApolloChild1512 8 лет назад
+Kira Caroso hi
@CreepyPastafanGF2011842
@CreepyPastafanGF2011842 9 лет назад
Damn! Very well written creepypasta!
@quincyadams63
@quincyadams63 9 лет назад
not tht many good stories anymore its a shame
@oren1305
@oren1305 9 лет назад
Well, Creeps wrote it himself, so it's bound to be good. Seems that apart from a few authors out there, it's usually up to the major narrators themselves to compose a good yarn.
@dragonflymoonraven
@dragonflymoonraven 9 лет назад
Quincy Adams if it wasn't for the submission block, I wold make a clocky-like creepypasta called cat-anna about a girl who lost her parents to a vampire
@MiaOnYouTube
@MiaOnYouTube 10 лет назад
Around 30 mins it started sounded like a weird porno.. Am I Right?
@naomireed5556
@naomireed5556 5 лет назад
XD a scary one
@Crimson-1997
@Crimson-1997 5 лет назад
On the sofa scean, I was thinking the young detective is about to get raped of something untill they described the shadow as a young child 😐
@mkilo9770
@mkilo9770 4 года назад
Gonna be honest, that introduction for this creepypasta was the most memorable piece of text I’ve read in a long while. The characters perspective at his job, the case he did that he regrets, his necessary apathy to remain sane at his job. Good stuff :)
@GrowingIsConstant
@GrowingIsConstant 5 лет назад
Great narration! Your choice of sound effects is amazing. It wasn't overpowering or distracting. Chills man, chills. The wheezing stuffies had me pulling my shoulders up by my ears.
@nightside9065
@nightside9065 10 лет назад
I'm happy I watched this during daytime lol
@jakefoster3542
@jakefoster3542 9 лет назад
Same.
@naomireed5556
@naomireed5556 5 лет назад
i watched it during the night ;-;
@ravenhep5484
@ravenhep5484 10 лет назад
18:40 it's completely symmetrical. Who is this guy, Death the Kid? :D
@cosmicdownpour2182
@cosmicdownpour2182 9 лет назад
lol soul eater
@thomasbrogan8928
@thomasbrogan8928 9 лет назад
It's spelled Death the kidd. Not kid
@ravenhep5484
@ravenhep5484 9 лет назад
Thomas Brogan I know, darn auto correct!! Good catch though ^^
@thomasbrogan8928
@thomasbrogan8928 9 лет назад
Raven hep :)
@CushPesaro
@CushPesaro 9 лет назад
death the kidds name aint symmetrical the real death the kidd is someone else
@GravityK-b
@GravityK-b 2 года назад
A classic gem on your channel that really shows how good your narration skills are that really immerses you in the narrative and makes it feel as though you are there looking for those children speaking of which the title "Missing Children" reminds me of 1990s shows that involve detectives like in the creepypasta namely Law And Order. What I else I can say that you are not only a legendary Creepypasta RU-vidr but also a really a wholesome person irl and stories like this where involve making the tone just creepy enough through your voice and music to keep the viewer hooked and calmer at some points to make the story more realistic and for the viewer not to lose suspension in belief. Yes I know the majority of Creepypastas are non fiction however just by lifting the suspension of disbelief in some points throughout the pastas in my opinion makes them all the more creepier.
@yourscreepilypasta3660
@yourscreepilypasta3660 9 лет назад
very spooky! I love how you used the different sound effects for the breathing and footsteps! great atmosphere!
@ReverendBonz
@ReverendBonz 9 лет назад
My little search kit for this.. a Sun.. a rocket launcher and a nope button... and maybe a stool hardener so I won't shit my pants... sounds good to me..
@stocourt3818
@stocourt3818 7 лет назад
lmao when the wheezing started all I could think about was that one scene in spongebob and I can't stop laughing 😂👌👌
@kccx5comments349
@kccx5comments349 8 лет назад
I really like how you bring the character tension and fear to life with how you narrate the story . I can actually be as afraid of the situation as the character is. You are amazing .
@altaregodesign
@altaregodesign 9 лет назад
Your stories are just marvelous and very creative! This one in particular sent some very visceral shivers down my spine. Anything that combines children with horror is a perfect recipe for fear.
@ThestuffthatSaralikes
@ThestuffthatSaralikes Год назад
I love going waaaaay back and listening to the ones I have missed or somehow forgotten!!!
@LabMatt
@LabMatt 9 лет назад
The moment he mentioned the creepy toys on the bed, I immediately thought about that movie Akira!
@TwilightLuna16
@TwilightLuna16 10 лет назад
This is fantastic! You sure have some amazing talent at making your own stories ;) Awesome job!
@kusaiashionamete220
@kusaiashionamete220 7 лет назад
One of the better creepypasta's I've heard. Your voice certainly does accentuates the mood of the story as well.
@PachucoDesigns
@PachucoDesigns 10 лет назад
Fantastic job, Creeps. Both in writing and narration.
@greatgallade
@greatgallade 2 года назад
I mean now that u come back to it. The story made no sense.
@ItachiUchiha-tf8pk
@ItachiUchiha-tf8pk 7 лет назад
When I heard the breathing I was like ," OHHHHH HELLLL NAHHHH"
@PseudoNym13
@PseudoNym13 10 лет назад
Gotta Love Creeps!!! Love most of your stuff dude, been looking for some REALLY creepy stuff.............
@ScarletTiger109
@ScarletTiger109 9 лет назад
Nice work with the smooth voice and music meld once again
@sonofodin1636
@sonofodin1636 10 лет назад
WHERES JASON VOORHEES WHEN U NEED HIM????????????????
@aimeewolf557
@aimeewolf557 8 лет назад
Amazing sound effects!!!!!
@smashingtulips
@smashingtulips 5 лет назад
I usually fall asleep listening to these, which is always a bad idea. I had a nightmare about being chased by a dead child. :’)
@lolasum_sumi_san
@lolasum_sumi_san 5 лет назад
Bravo! I loved your narration and the sound effects. Sheesh this is terrifying, I'm definitely loosing my sleep over this CreepyPasta.
@willowtree9090
@willowtree9090 7 лет назад
Oh hell no. 20 seconds into the video my power went out for a few seconds and I nearly crapped myself so hardcore. I almost cried from how spooked I got :(
@willowtree9090
@willowtree9090 7 лет назад
okay, now I'm 19 minutes in and those breathing noises are really freaking me out. Why do I do this to myself.
@kittypower5156
@kittypower5156 7 лет назад
i didnt notice the creepy man in the window until halfway the video
@nekochan2.03
@nekochan2.03 6 лет назад
Out of all the creepypastas he told, this one is my favorite. All the stories are amazing, but this one got me the most. I don't know why really. Thank you though, this gave me quite the chills and nightmares for weeks. I will always enjoy every story :3.
@ashkanr4796
@ashkanr4796 5 лет назад
I listened to almost 200 of your stories. some are poetic and well written, some thrilling, and some not so much. but by far this is the most terrifying story of all. the only one I listened to for the 5th time and still chilling my bones. kudos to you man. your voice and your contents are soothing and addictive.
@JimmmyRaynor
@JimmmyRaynor 8 лет назад
Michael Phelps went from pro swimmer to detective? go figure
@JimmmyRaynor
@JimmmyRaynor 8 лет назад
and then he becomes a private investigator? oook
@mostar1219
@mostar1219 8 лет назад
I thought it was Michael Phillips. Must be related to Kirby Phillips or something
@thomasoneil715
@thomasoneil715 8 лет назад
That breathing is nope
@jessicajocose3605
@jessicajocose3605 5 лет назад
Wow! I've only heard one other creepypasta that gave me chills. This was incredible. Maybe it was the sound effects? Idk but I'm thoroughly creeped out! Bravo!
@spongecat979
@spongecat979 8 лет назад
Bloody hell, Creeps! This was tense and awesome
@cuernosbeste
@cuernosbeste 9 лет назад
i like hearing these while drawing :3
@WingItMan217
@WingItMan217 9 лет назад
Same
@BigPapaClaire
@BigPapaClaire 9 лет назад
SAME omg
@saetiller1849
@saetiller1849 9 лет назад
Same
@WingItMan217
@WingItMan217 9 лет назад
***** inspiration I guess
@Toontown4everable
@Toontown4everable 9 лет назад
Same omfg I draw while i listen to these even if im drawing a super happy cheerful thing idk why xD
@Lycanite
@Lycanite 10 лет назад
Wow I'm listening to this at work, just outside of Durham, it's in the UK and has mineshafts so, this is pretty close lol! Unless it's a different Durham...
@KyoSunbringer
@KyoSunbringer 10 лет назад
I live in Durham also... Holy shit...
@mackenzieroper3110
@mackenzieroper3110 10 лет назад
***** SO DO I~
@amberrose4703
@amberrose4703 9 лет назад
SO DO I!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no i lied TEEHEE
@johnnyl8960
@johnnyl8960 Год назад
NC
@jenniferbarrett555
@jenniferbarrett555 8 лет назад
You write better creepypastas than any of those you read. Absolutely brilliant.
@wildshelly
@wildshelly 4 года назад
Those sounds hit different everytime and what I mean about that, I mean my head hitting the wall and my hand attacking the lamp next to my bed to make sure the demons hadn't come out yet
@RinLockhart
@RinLockhart 10 лет назад
OHM YG OD THE BREATHING WHAT EH FUCK.
@RinLockhart
@RinLockhart 10 лет назад
Very good story.
@squidwardtentacles7736
@squidwardtentacles7736 8 лет назад
This isn't real this isn't real this isn't real this isn't real
@randomidakatta4333
@randomidakatta4333 8 лет назад
+Pink Sheep's Mustache Its funny to see Pink sheep here, Now wheres the TNT mouse at?
@lpompey6610
@lpompey6610 9 лет назад
Amazingly superb story and tremendous job narrating as usual
@Forsete
@Forsete 10 лет назад
Hey Creeps, congrats on 100 000 subs!
@just_a_guy13
@just_a_guy13 10 лет назад
Fell asleep listening to this and that was about the freakiest dream I've had in yrs lol thanks brotha keep up the good work. P.s. I don't wanna listen to it again in fear that it might ruin my nightmare haha
@theplantlover9206
@theplantlover9206 8 лет назад
3:52 I can hear a phone XD I loved the video I love creepypasta, like to write them... but im not good
@dakaron02
@dakaron02 7 лет назад
haha I herd it to
@ttvturtleman2861
@ttvturtleman2861 7 лет назад
Hayden Wilcox same
@Thesnake1312
@Thesnake1312 4 года назад
This is the creepiest story I’ve listened to by you so far. Jeezous
@Moecoyote
@Moecoyote 10 лет назад
whenever i listen/read creepypastas at night i keep thinking ' im never going to look at creepy pastas again! Me in the day, Oh look a new creepy pasta! must watch o-o
@karkatvantas6328
@karkatvantas6328 10 лет назад
28:54 My god the first thought I had when I heard the tapping :|
@partenersintime
@partenersintime 9 лет назад
Ok I've been listening and reading creepypastas for over 2 years and I've noticed that Chris is a very common name used in Creepypastas or at least the ones I've read/listened to.
@brice9548
@brice9548 3 года назад
any recommendations? i really wanna start listening to creepypastas more
@partenersintime
@partenersintime 3 года назад
@@brice9548 Tfw reply to a 5 year old comment.
@brice9548
@brice9548 3 года назад
yeah , so r u gonna give me any recommendations or not
@partenersintime
@partenersintime 3 года назад
@@brice9548 Have not read or listened to a creepypasta in ages dude. There's a lot of good ones but one of the best ones that I personally recommend is Penpal. I think I watched it on this channel. It's long but it was very good and kept me invested the entire way though. They also adapted it into a book so if that's more your thing then you can do that.
@selectidiot
@selectidiot 3 года назад
or a woman named Alex whos g--.
@kipechawolfeortiz8791
@kipechawolfeortiz8791 5 лет назад
The only thing that makes scary stories better than music and an interesting narrator is SOUND EFFECTS. Thank you for all your stories
@gothmo21
@gothmo21 8 лет назад
jezz this story freaks me out to no end. I still get shivers when I remember it even tho I listened to it week's ago. Nice work :). L x
@DamienAustinn
@DamienAustinn 9 лет назад
Did anybody else hear the message tone at 30:52?
@anyaprior3654
@anyaprior3654 8 лет назад
+DamienAustinn notmyfullname Yep.
@gretahogan2533
@gretahogan2533 8 лет назад
Nice twist, very creepy ... and you wrote this? Color me impressed and kudos to you, boyo!
@sicklittlepuppies9064
@sicklittlepuppies9064 7 лет назад
Amazingly creepy recording and editing, actually made me jump a few times, due to sound effects unexpected, very very good
@corakidd1267
@corakidd1267 10 лет назад
I love your voice creeps, I swear every time i listen to your stories while im in bed, I end falling asleep and then i was up and i'm like "No dammit I lost place. fahhhhkkk" lol
@itzchickengaming1366
@itzchickengaming1366 9 лет назад
I'm probably not gonna eat my pasta after this...
@borednerd5767
@borednerd5767 8 лет назад
you really like your sound effects
@doomiedoom27
@doomiedoom27 9 лет назад
The door sound scared the crap out of me. Nice work haha!
@kristjanmartin9883
@kristjanmartin9883 8 лет назад
door locked but no key? no problem. I got 257 lock picks and my skill tree is fully ranked up.
@sonicpride1
@sonicpride1 10 лет назад
what's your accent?Australian?British?I like it :3
@southparkfirefly
@southparkfirefly 10 лет назад
British o3o
@sonicpride1
@sonicpride1 10 лет назад
SouthParkFirefly oh thx ^^
@southparkfirefly
@southparkfirefly 10 лет назад
You're welcome o3o sorry late reply
@sonicpride1
@sonicpride1 10 лет назад
SouthParkFirefly it ok 8D
@Sims2VideoFunTime
@Sims2VideoFunTime 10 лет назад
Usually British accents are more softer while an Australian accent is more harsh, even when or if the Australian's voice is naturally soft. The tone will still be the slightest bit harsh. -English grandmother who's still alive and thriving...Known plenty of Australians/heard the accents enough to know.
@Grazzmazzium
@Grazzmazzium 7 лет назад
when i heard the breathing, on saround sound, i sank into my couch and to afraid to move
@gretchengould7992
@gretchengould7992 7 лет назад
Jonathan Delgado saround sound sucks with horror moves or creeps, they sound so damn real!!!
@livingtoaster1358
@livingtoaster1358 8 лет назад
I really love the atmosphere you add to the CreepyPasta's
@joniboi3699
@joniboi3699 Год назад
Yes! I finally found it! I remember listening to this with my friend ages ago and it being one of the best ones I'd heard in a while. The wheezing sound effect and the wet slapping sounds that the kid makes are iconic.
@SierraBearrrr
@SierraBearrrr 10 лет назад
This is definitely best with headphones
@gerardmourits8709
@gerardmourits8709 10 лет назад
Now adding stuffed animals to my nope list Next to dolls and crawling spaces
@darrengreen6341
@darrengreen6341 7 лет назад
you are a great Bard! :) No wonder you have so many followers!!! :) your voice, and your accent passion and music makes it special
@yllruk13
@yllruk13 10 лет назад
Great story telling, it really gave me the chills. 10/10
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