My accepted Duke essay - breaking down my "Why Duke" supplement 

I wish I would’ve watched this before submitting my application.

This was so helpful! Would you be willing to share the other essays you submitted to Duke?

Thank you 💕 so much for this it's so helpful

thank you for the useful information

Hi! Thank you so much for this video, it helps a lot!!

Thank you!

Really cool

awesome

Hey Sherilyn, please can you proofread my common app essay

Would you please read my supplement essay?

HI!, l am applying to Duke university this year. Can you help me with this process by just answering my questions related to Duke? Can u help me plz? I really need ur help??

Share please your essays

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This is one of the worst "why this Univ" supps ever. From line one to the end, it reeks of insincerity. Anyone can just read Duke's website, blogs, anything online and manufacture this contrived statement. She did not get in because of this, AOs are not naive, she got in for other reasons, not this regurgitation of their website.