The way you are explaining the process is not very clear. Take your time to explain every step, you are going way too fast and at the same time not covering too many things about the topic. It should be crisp, short and too the point. Too many things said with less clarity of words
Ho brother, I have a question Mai cash pe job kr rhi Hu last semester h but muihe employer by cheque pay krta ( company ) toh Jb mai work permit apply krungi Kya usme pblm hoyegi , like kaam ka record sin pe nhi h but cheques deposit hue h plz brother ply me no one is guiding me correctly