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My CSS 2023 Essay outline that made me pass the exam. 

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When I was preparing for CSS, I always wanted to see a passed Essay outline in its exact wording and original formating. I did not get to see any but luckily I had preserved mine, so sharing it here with in-depth discussion on its various parts.
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@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Hello everyone, I'm trying my best to answer all your queries in my comments, for any further queries, you may reach out through my social media handles : instagram.com/musingsbyhajra?igsh=MnY2NGFicDR6Zm5i Or twitter.com/MusingsbyHajra Moreover, I'll try to do one or two Instagram lives for 2024 applicants too. Good luck ❤
@successinevitable9630
@successinevitable9630 6 месяцев назад
Which topics or themes should we cover for CSS 2024 essay's paper??
@annieawan8272
@annieawan8272 6 месяцев назад
Thank you very much... Mera 1 question hai k aap ny sirf over view dia hai introduction ki heading k baad or udr thesis statement ki heading nai de bss waisy he likh dia hai tou thesis statement ki heading dena zarori hai ya miss kr dyn or wo kia aapki thesis statement hai
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
@@annieawan8272 not needed. Only write thesis statement at the end of your introduction
@user-hx7ge5wu8i
@user-hx7ge5wu8i 3 месяца назад
If u don't mind it ,ma'am I m ur big fan from Peshawar how to collect data for essay and from which websites ,books etc and how to link angles with others plz help and make a video on linking with different themes ,
@abroozainab8448
@abroozainab8448 3 месяца назад
@CSSwithDrHajra please share a video on body paragraph structuring thanks in advance
@usmanhaider1774
@usmanhaider1774 Месяц назад
The only youtube channel where the teacher comes down to the student's level to make them understand, so her efforts are highly appreciable.
@KahaniSonu
@KahaniSonu Месяц назад
Thank you so much. That's one of the best videos I have ever watched on essay preparation and attempt.
@zaraihsan4695
@zaraihsan4695 6 месяцев назад
I ve attempted my essay today on this format. Alhamdulillah i am satisfied with it. JazakAllah Khair❤
@Css_journey
@Css_journey 3 месяца назад
Can uh tell me.where is the slybus of English essay
@g.qadirbadini5345
@g.qadirbadini5345 Месяц назад
well explained maam and i personally noted my mistakes which I had done in special CSS ..make more informative videos like this
@darkpearl348
@darkpearl348 4 месяца назад
I highly appreciate, thank you so much for your tip and tricks,
@alianwar6328
@alianwar6328 8 дней назад
Dr sahiba, it's helped alot thank so much.
@fightwithmyself78
@fightwithmyself78 5 месяцев назад
Yes mam this is very helpful and informative video about the essay.
@ibnenawaz805
@ibnenawaz805 6 месяцев назад
zabardast mam i had listened a long ago that b.a english is a beginner's level of css essay it resembles with b.a english thank you so much
@sajidabatool341
@sajidabatool341 6 месяцев назад
Super informative and worth- watching beloved! ❤
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Glad it was helpful!
@user-vg2bq9qw8u
@user-vg2bq9qw8u 3 месяца назад
Thank you so much Madam your way of teaching is very nice.
@SureshKumar-hf9gv
@SureshKumar-hf9gv 5 месяцев назад
MashaAllah Worthful lecture
@user-te3ck1rk8d
@user-te3ck1rk8d 4 месяца назад
Great mam for explaining outline
@A.Mujeeb23
@A.Mujeeb23 5 месяцев назад
Thank you for disseminating such highly useful knowledge ❤🎉
@RamshaTanveerAhmed-vb5se
@RamshaTanveerAhmed-vb5se 6 месяцев назад
Just one word Ma'am ,JAZAK ALLAH❤❤❤
@husnainplayz1614
@husnainplayz1614 2 месяца назад
great mam .....You split you essay in very effective and easy way
@hajrasarwar7213
@hajrasarwar7213 6 месяцев назад
Thank you so much sister🎉
@KhushMah891
@KhushMah891 6 месяцев назад
M so glad that I found u❤
@Csspms2024
@Csspms2024 5 месяцев назад
I also watched videos of topper in essay but yours video is more effective & informative ✅🙏🏻
@muhammadhasnain9894
@muhammadhasnain9894 6 месяцев назад
Soo much helpful mashallah! Allah bless you
@AliRAZA-qo8ej
@AliRAZA-qo8ej 6 месяцев назад
Great and thank you
@farooq2.0609
@farooq2.0609 6 месяцев назад
Wonderful explained
@amirrahim7580
@amirrahim7580 6 месяцев назад
Thank you very much. Very helpful video
@AbdulGhani-rg5ht
@AbdulGhani-rg5ht 2 месяца назад
Which documents are required for css admission.. Please guide sir
@WaqaraliJamali-mr3kz
@WaqaraliJamali-mr3kz 6 месяцев назад
Mashallah, it was great
@Anab_Khan
@Anab_Khan 3 месяца назад
I kindly disagree with you. The examniers of essay paper are not some stubborn ordinary people, but they have their education and career in literature. And, people from literature are more open to ideas irrespective of the ideas being conflicting to theirs. BTW, your work is really appreciating one, as running a channel is a headache.
@zaynmangrio
@zaynmangrio 2 месяца назад
Absolutely agree with you
@AbdulGhani-rg5ht
@AbdulGhani-rg5ht 2 месяца назад
Salam sir... Please tell me which documents are required for css admission..
@NajamSherazi-ly1yb
@NajamSherazi-ly1yb 5 месяцев назад
Excellent
@sairafatima9221
@sairafatima9221 3 месяца назад
Thnku madam this will help alot
@ghazalashaheen8541
@ghazalashaheen8541 2 месяца назад
JazakAllah Mam ❤
@usamaabdulrauf2470
@usamaabdulrauf2470 6 месяцев назад
Keep up the good work.
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Thanks, will do!
@MsLance22
@MsLance22 3 месяца назад
I wrote exactly the same outline but could score 32. You never know the true criteria of passing the essay. Practice could be the key.
@AbdulRehman-kb2yr
@AbdulRehman-kb2yr 3 месяца назад
Its not just outline, maybe you lacked or failed to justify your points effectivity in your essay. Or, you did some structure & language related mistakes.
@Css_journey
@Css_journey 3 месяца назад
Dear.essay ka slybus nhi hota kia
@Css_journey
@Css_journey 3 месяца назад
Jesy baqi subjects ka hota h?
@HinaHinaawise
@HinaHinaawise 2 месяца назад
Hay sis me b bahoot confused hu😢
@MsLance22
@MsLance22 2 месяца назад
@@AbdulRehman-kb2yr Perhaps, but the fact that I scored 32 alone shows that language must have been sound. The problem could’ve been in argumentation.
@advocate_asad
@advocate_asad 2 месяца назад
Good suggestions mam
@nayapakistanbywaqas2994
@nayapakistanbywaqas2994 2 месяца назад
Excellent ❤... you talked in detail and very realistic approach...seems like you are a student of Doctor arif javed .thanks
@muhammadishfaqmustafa
@muhammadishfaqmustafa 6 месяцев назад
Amazing mam bohat hi mext level ka ap na essay attempt karwaya h Jaza Ka Allah Mam
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Thank you. Keep watching
@muhammadishfaqmustafa
@muhammadishfaqmustafa 6 месяцев назад
@@CSSwithDrHajra Mam ma css 2025 KY liay preparation kr raha ho tw mam AP koi English essay or English Precis ka session conduct kr rehien h online ya physical
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
@@muhammadishfaqmustafa yes
@muhammadishfaqmustafa
@muhammadishfaqmustafa 6 месяцев назад
@@CSSwithDrHajra Mam How can I contact you?
@user-ki6vb7ot7r
@user-ki6vb7ot7r 6 месяцев назад
Very helpful!
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Glad it was helpful!
@user-ot2ts7qx4x
@user-ot2ts7qx4x 5 дней назад
Please make a video on introductory paragraph
@afrasiyabkhan8681
@afrasiyabkhan8681 6 месяцев назад
Great sis❤
@beastforcrick2642
@beastforcrick2642 6 месяцев назад
Very informative ma'am
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Keep watching
@SamShaikhEP
@SamShaikhEP 6 месяцев назад
I did it the same essay but secured 18marks.....it was my second attempt
@arsalemursaleen1478
@arsalemursaleen1478 6 месяцев назад
very informative
@asadraza132
@asadraza132 5 месяцев назад
Great mam❤
@_Basir
@_Basir 3 месяца назад
We cannot compare it with Indian civil services examination UPSC ..no comparison...upsc is one of the toughest exams in world.
@ridafatima0405
@ridafatima0405 3 месяца назад
Assalamualaikum My only concern is how to get the data for essays? Like which is the resources, how diverse has to study?
@haseebrehmanjokhio3898
@haseebrehmanjokhio3898 6 месяцев назад
Great ma'am!!! Ma'am how to build up own thoughts, and arguments?
@amberliaqat6451
@amberliaqat6451 Месяц назад
Thanks ...Ma'am kindly made a video on introduction writing with your sample example before 2025...please
@pakistan8736
@pakistan8736 5 месяцев назад
You are methodology is most best
@NASAclips-gov
@NASAclips-gov 6 месяцев назад
Outstanding maam❤
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
🙏🏻
@shsm2611
@shsm2611 5 месяцев назад
thank you Mam!!
@LearningTogether07
@LearningTogether07 Месяц назад
Mam we were learned that the topics and sub topics of the outline should be in phrases not in sentences, but you maked the headings too long.
@SweraFarooq
@SweraFarooq 3 месяца назад
A.O.A MAM...examiner ny pakistan k perspective main essay ni pucha to kya hum itny case in point just pakistan k perspective main dy skty hain?
@nisargujjar7555
@nisargujjar7555 6 месяцев назад
Million dollar lecture ❤
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Thank you
@bismillahbaloch2965
@bismillahbaloch2965 6 месяцев назад
Wonderful clarity ma'am... Stay blessed and happy 😊
@m.aniquemani6574
@m.aniquemani6574 6 месяцев назад
Well done mam..... First time all things in one vedio
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Thanks a lot 😊
@m.aniquemani6574
@m.aniquemani6574 6 месяцев назад
Mam I requested you to share your complete essay
@aleesandilo6015
@aleesandilo6015 3 месяца назад
Thank you mam❤
@roshandeenjakhrani4277
@roshandeenjakhrani4277 5 месяцев назад
Mam thanks for the explanation.I attempted the same topic but got just 28 marks.After watching this video I understand that most of the paragraphs were relevent.But failed due lack of case studies with strong justification and obviously Grammer.So try to reshape my essays strategies at all
@tayyabfarooqi345
@tayyabfarooqi345 24 дня назад
Once in a classroom, Dr. Arif Javed sb. said that you need to make outline into phrasal format. The one you mentioned is paragraph-styled. Does it make the difference??
@Muhammadokasha-tz7sj
@Muhammadokasha-tz7sj 5 месяцев назад
Kindly mam shre this outline in documented form with us plz.
@muqaddasshakeel779
@muqaddasshakeel779 2 месяца назад
Maam jo headings k neechy likha hua hai blue se wo main material hai . Shuru se parhty aye hain k essays mai lengthy lengthy paragraphs hon . Kia esa nhi krna css mai?
@SairaChaudhary2111
@SairaChaudhary2111 6 месяцев назад
Thanks alot
@abidalilashri4426
@abidalilashri4426 28 дней назад
this essay structure reminds me Sir Akhtar Nazir sb...
@alyakbarbalti
@alyakbarbalti 6 месяцев назад
Appreciated 👍 Please may I have your outline in PDF?
@fatimasgallery
@fatimasgallery 6 месяцев назад
Maam, kindly clear this thing that are you talking about making all the arguments of the forward in a single paragraphs?our teachers told us that when you are making subpoint write a complete para on the sub heading of the main heading.
@shahzaibparveez1187
@shahzaibparveez1187 4 месяца назад
Thank you! Found it very informative.Ma'am, is it necessary for a thesis statement to be written in an outline ?
@KnowledgeRealmaiman
@KnowledgeRealmaiman 6 месяцев назад
You wrote a very well-structured essay. What was your score?
@user-ci1sq7ze3k
@user-ci1sq7ze3k 5 месяцев назад
please start proper lectures for 2025 attempt (ESSAY )
@ayeshasadiqa9319
@ayeshasadiqa9319 10 часов назад
please share another outline rather than thi essay ( olaese share other than argumentative)
@mehakbatool6286
@mehakbatool6286 2 дня назад
Ma'am hamen sikhaya gaya hai k argumentative essay mein wayforwards nahi dety. 😢 please clear kr den
@ankitsingh4612
@ankitsingh4612 6 месяцев назад
I am from India preparing for civil services. We also have an essay paper... You can also see those essay papers. Its somewhat similar to these topics.
@invinciblefarhan2698
@invinciblefarhan2698 6 месяцев назад
Comparing CSS with UPSC is like comparing candle with sun.
@Noone-nt7lr
@Noone-nt7lr 14 часов назад
Kindly koi ye bta dey ke full stop use karna hai outline ke end me?
@user-dn4gq7oe9n
@user-dn4gq7oe9n 6 месяцев назад
Love from kupwara... Kashmir Jammu and Kashmir
@user-dn4gq7oe9n
@user-dn4gq7oe9n 6 месяцев назад
I am preparing for Jammu and Kashmir state public services exam
@user-dn4gq7oe9n
@user-dn4gq7oe9n 6 месяцев назад
My English is very weak .... kindly guide how to improve.. As I take alot of time to understand a question
@huraimkhan6822
@huraimkhan6822 5 месяцев назад
Thank you mam for such informative video. Mam which mentor or academy did u join for essay preparation?
@muhammadsajjad3115
@muhammadsajjad3115 5 месяцев назад
following outline is mine. " PATHWAYS TO PAKISTAN'S PROSPERITY" Outline Introduction 1.Democracy a. Political instability in Pakistan b. Real Democracy vs Authoritarian regime in Pakistan 2. Relationships with neighbor countries 3. Education a. Technical education b. IT and AI should be promoted c. To tarnish cramming and route learning system 4.To Avoid blind trust on political leaders a. Populism in politics b. Nationalism c. statesman is important rather than political leader for Pakistan's prosperity 5. Cpec 6. Brics 7. SIFC Conclusion. what would you say about it?
@zahidhussain-hh6dr
@zahidhussain-hh6dr 3 месяца назад
Ma,am please introduction and thesis statement bhe show karen like outlines.
@wasimsajad6176
@wasimsajad6176 6 месяцев назад
Thank you, Madam
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
🙏🏻
@hunain4769
@hunain4769 6 месяцев назад
Mam also please eassy ke bare me deatil videos bane kse , or kis trah different eassy ki prepration krni chye .
@BOOKSHELF007
@BOOKSHELF007 Месяц назад
as we know that we can only discuss one idea in a paragraph so how can one talk about cyber bullying and training programs for teacher in single paragraph, these are different ideas...?
@rabiaayaz7879
@rabiaayaz7879 17 дней назад
But here it's online learning not online education. Both are totally different things.
@afrasiyabkhan1893
@afrasiyabkhan1893 6 месяцев назад
Did remember references and case studies during exam?
@asadraza132
@asadraza132 5 месяцев назад
Mam ,can you please tell us where you get statistics for reference?
@M.yousafM.yousaf-jv1qd
@M.yousafM.yousaf-jv1qd 3 месяца назад
Social media pe btaya ja raha hai CSS wohi pass krta hai jinki safarish hu Kiya ye Sach hai
@m.aniquemani6574
@m.aniquemani6574 6 месяцев назад
Assalamualaikum mam.... Mam can u share complete essay please
@AyeshaSiddique-j1v
@AyeshaSiddique-j1v 12 дней назад
Hi mam ....I need notes of eng precise and composition....will u share it PlZ
@SmartLearningIdeas
@SmartLearningIdeas Месяц назад
😊
@csshelpinghand4763
@csshelpinghand4763 6 месяцев назад
mam kindly provide an any full length written essay as i want to learn a number of things to learn please
@shoaibbaloch7468
@shoaibbaloch7468 6 месяцев назад
Mam, you deconstructed your topic into two main headings and these headings comprised on 12 aruguments altogether i.e. 5 for how online learning is convenient and 7 for how is it effective, so, one intro para , one overview and 12 these paras including challenges and solutions paragraphs you have written 17 paragraphs. Did you achieve the required words limit? how did you manage words limit in 17 paras?
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
I wrote 2700 words. It's always safe to give 17-18 Paras in outline and then write more in these rather than giving higher number of Paras in outline and leaving an incomplete essay.
@najafali6010
@najafali6010 6 месяцев назад
​@@CSSwithDrHajrawhat was your score in essay ?
@fazilatmarjan9608
@fazilatmarjan9608 3 месяца назад
Thank you for sharing Ma'am, how to write so many paragraphs within stipulated time ? Because i cannot write more than 12 paragraphs within in 3 hours. Please make a video on this or reply me here
@sherazali1086
@sherazali1086 3 месяца назад
How did you prepare for the essay?I mean from where have you collected the data
@jabbarlashari9640
@jabbarlashari9640 6 месяцев назад
Please share any of your complete written essay.
@SaudKhan-ip5su
@SaudKhan-ip5su 6 месяцев назад
Assalamualaikum maam . I felt joy when saw your incredible video. Maam i have a question. Maam mojy koch tips dy jis k through mai eassy likna aor eassy k leyy phrna start krsko.mai political science ka student hu 4th semester ka. But how i can start now . Please resolve my this issue
@CSSwithDrHajra
@CSSwithDrHajra 6 месяцев назад
Hi, I'm sharing everything regarding Essay in my videos. If you have any specific query, you may reach out. Thanks
@SaudKhan-ip5su
@SaudKhan-ip5su 6 месяцев назад
@@CSSwithDrHajra ma'am then make a video for the BS political science student or any other students to start eassy writing from the BS level.im in 4th semester.and also how to start eassy writing.i have command on English . please ma'am . And remaining I visited to your Google account but couldn't find it
@IshaGull-vy3rh
@IshaGull-vy3rh 3 месяца назад
Asslam o alikum mam... Can we make haddenings in essay?or we just write on 1st page to make it clear to reader on which topic I would discuss in my whole essay
@abeehaamjad5231
@abeehaamjad5231 6 месяцев назад
Pls share how and from which sources you collected these facts,case studies etc
@QuranicBlessings12
@QuranicBlessings12 Месяц назад
Assalam-o-Alikum Maam css ka syallbus kis website sy ly or is ki outlines b bata dy...or maam kya css ka syllabus hr saal change hota ha ..plz guide kr dy
@Anncode31
@Anncode31 2 месяца назад
plz make a video of full essay
@JeromeWilliam777
@JeromeWilliam777 2 месяца назад
Madam please tell us if we don't know critical and convincing English can we write in simple way? You wrote in very tough way but our base is not strong enough
@HafizaRuqiaBakshPS
@HafizaRuqiaBakshPS Месяц назад
Assalamualaikim Mam gi apky GSA k notes agr kar ly tou wo cover ho jaye gii plzz mam gi guide kar dy
@Belle...06
@Belle...06 3 месяца назад
Respected! I joined you just now. Wanna ask would you like to conduct essys class????
@hafizhasnainashraf3565
@hafizhasnainashraf3565 3 месяца назад
I am also doing Mbbs from Punjab .I want to ask u why u prefer css over Usmle ?
@syedsdaqathussain9099
@syedsdaqathussain9099 6 месяцев назад
Dearest ma'am, introductory paragraph mein Kia Tariqa adopt Kia Jae and Kia Likha Jae us mein?
@nazianazia1331
@nazianazia1331 3 месяца назад
Mam plz pms crack Karny KY liyeee Roz ek lecture upload Kary all subjects
@haseebullahkhan4604
@haseebullahkhan4604 Месяц назад
This is an argumentative essay. So way forward is optional simple structure of this essay would be Introduction Why is Online education more effective? Why is traditional classroom education considered to be more effective? ( 3 4 counter arguments) Conclusion U are making things a little complicated. Many of my friends have attempted essay in this way and have passed it with flying colours.
@ArubaBinteKhalid
@ArubaBinteKhalid 4 дня назад
Do you write thesis statement?
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