It looks pretty good for the most part, but in my opinion, having 32nd notes on the more slight slide notes like the ones at 0:55 and 1:05 don't look all that comfy to play. I'd recommend at least trying to make a chart using just a single note for those slight types of slides just to see if it would work out better
yes! i know a lot of people chart slides using doubles! but...sometimes i wanna do something a lil different! so ive been using 32nd notes until now. and, i have learned to make the opponent charts a lil bit crazier! while maintaning the balance of bf notes. HAHA