Mysterious Alien Metal Infects Colony Miners. Transformation Begins | Sci-Fi Creepypasta 

Congratulations you’ve discovered Adamantium!

So you become Silver Surfers 🏄‍♀️…Neat…

Suddenly having the Origin story of Cybermen...

"I'm Mr. Frundles"😂

The Borg

If only the survivors got on board, to head back to earth. Where did the horde come from.

I love your narrations

Excellent story!

Great story...👍

This is just HFY Dead Space

The Future Sucks !!! Good Story !!!

Profound x 10⁹

Sorry, why quarantine an infected ship on Earth?😊

It's a COVID-19 shot that transformed the Miners 😮

I think author Simon Green would have been able to craft a better, less monotonous, but still thrilling and frightening tale. The narrator is doing his best, but the story's repetitious use of adjectives and adverbs is very predictable, lacking any element of well constructed suspense that any reader would expect from such a story. The use of predictable incredelous plot events gives the story an amateurish level. For one thing, I've always wondered why the rescue ship always felt the need to immediately venture into the crisis area without sending in various types of drones to assess the situation. Also, the reader is left eith the impression that the rescue ream arrived complpletely "in the dark about the nature of the crisis. Surely before the infection had spread far, some of the uninfected colonists must have sent an emergency message. complete with an automated data log about the details of the crisis. Caution would have mandated sending in the armed security personnel into the colody to recon while the rest of the team stayed aboard the rescue ship which , for safety, would have logically lifted off to a safe distance to await and observe the results of the insertion. Another plot omission; why couldn't the rescue ship have remotely accessed the colony's internal surveillance cameras ( or at least tried to), In the end, the plot resembles the plot of a B rate Horror flic made on a tight budget more than a well crafted sci fi suspense / horror story.