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Need MAGIC in your writing? USE IMAGERY to bring your story to life! 

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In this video I talk about using Imagery in your writing.
For me, the best kind of imagery is that which has purpose as well as being nicely written. Imagery doesn't have to be all about beauty, it can be about utility and moving your story forwards too.
Imagery can also be used to direct the reader's imagination and to create stronger impressions of your story in their mind.
Timestamps:
0:00 - Intro
1:00 - Example and Analysis 1
2:31 - Example and Analysis 2
4:13 - Example and Analysis 3
5:58 - Imagery with Magic (Example 4)
7:50 - Example 5
8:39 - My Attempt at Imagery
10:04 - My Tips for Imagery
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@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
MY FLASH FICTION COURSE: www.udemy.com/share/103LYUAEAcclpQQHoI/ MY NOVELLA IN FLASH - GOLD FURY: US link: www.amazon.com/dp/B093MKXBY5 UK link: www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B093MKXBY5 JOIN MY DISCORD COMMUNITY!: discord.gg/c6gZS2p
@tree1291
@tree1291 3 года назад
You are the only writing channel I watch religiously. Thank you for creating these videos!
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
Thanks so much for watching them! ☺️ I really appreciate that.
@Loki_Dokie
@Loki_Dokie 3 года назад
Right here with you 😃
@ercrad3426
@ercrad3426 3 года назад
Hey man that bit of flash gave me that feeling in my stomach that I get when I can feel the magic of good writing. Nice one
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
This is the absolute best kind of feedback, thank you so much ☺️
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 2 года назад
@@billyalarie929 😂
@JoeyPaulOnline
@JoeyPaulOnline 3 года назад
I liked the flash piece, invoked a beautiful image for me!
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
Thank you ☺️ I liked how it came out, a bit more magical than my usual stuff, it was a nice change!
@bellav7093
@bellav7093 Месяц назад
Stephanie’s use of imagery is impressive and I want to be just like her when I grow up.🙂 I really like your draft and I especially like the line about the kids “tucking their heads beneath their parents airborne snores” It really creates the image of these kids sneaking out and also injects some humor. And you really capture the moodiness of their adventure just by using the blue color scheme. Thanks!
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting Месяц назад
Thanks so much, I really appreciate that! I agree though, I'd like to be like Stephanie when I grow up too ☺️
@pragya.writing
@pragya.writing Год назад
That was amazing! I could see the whole scene like a movie!
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting Год назад
Thank you! Imagery works wonders for stories for sure :)
@almogdekel1552
@almogdekel1552 Год назад
The right tips at the right moment :)
@laurabesley7095
@laurabesley7095 3 года назад
Love some of these descriptions: 'as tall as my longing for home' and 'plump on other people's grief' (might not have quoted these 100% correctly!)
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
I loved those too, I love having a reason to write them down and talk about them 😂
@laurabesley7095
@laurabesley7095 3 года назад
@@KierenWestwoodWriting Definitely!
@prafullavyas7649
@prafullavyas7649 Год назад
Another great video on imagery. Thank you.
@anthonywritesfantasy
@anthonywritesfantasy Год назад
Dude your videos are amazing! So helpful. Getting me inspired.
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting Год назад
Thanks so much! I always love to hear my stuff has helped a fellow writer 🙂
@AwakeArise
@AwakeArise 3 года назад
Thanks for the video Kieren. Still trying to find that spark to start writing again. Currently reading Catcher in the Rye, it’s a good book that’s giving me some ideas.
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
I enjoyed that book too, I think it’s a good example of a character driven novel ☺️ hang in there mate, it will come back, the spark is elusive 😕
@koltonheath6073
@koltonheath6073 3 года назад
Thank you for the tips
@BrittanyPutzer
@BrittanyPutzer 3 года назад
Great advice. I definitely need more practice with imagery 🤣 because all your examples sound magical and just take me away 😍.
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
They did that for me too, it’s such a good collection of stories and I love the magic in the everyday ☺️
@maliya6208
@maliya6208 3 года назад
I LOVE THESE SO MUCH
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
Thank you! 😁
@NicoleWilbur
@NicoleWilbur 3 года назад
Ahhh I love this!! So useful and your videos always make me want to sit down and write!
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
Ahh thank you! That's exactly what I wanna do! 🙂
@drstafford4194
@drstafford4194 3 года назад
Outstanding content.
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
Thank you for watching! ☺️
@cliffordurmaza4398
@cliffordurmaza4398 3 года назад
I liked your flash fiction, it reminded me of camping in the woods far from civilaztion and all you see is the sky going to dark blue. I often get the inspiration of my stories from images that flash in my brain at the most mundane moments of the day, like doing the dishes or waiting to pick up my kids. Imagery often is one those aspects of fiction I enjoy, like painting my story with just the right words. Thanks I enjoyed your video a lot!
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
Thank you so much, I'm glad the story brought an image to mind for you. I also get inspiration from small flashes in my mind. It's amazing how those mindane moments can just allow a little bit of creativity to make it's way through!
@hayleywestwood3432
@hayleywestwood3432 3 года назад
Love that description of Aunt Ruda. I might need to steal that book for my tbr pile 🥰📚
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
You’re very welcome to it ☺️☺️☺️❤️
@tracypattin3746
@tracypattin3746 Год назад
I LOVE your channel Kieren. Thank you for your brilliant writing insights and guidance.
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting Год назад
Thanks so much! You're too kind 🙂
@themeanderinghero4279
@themeanderinghero4279 3 года назад
This video reminded me of a quote by Spike Milligan about radio that went something like: "the pictures are better because they happen on the other side of your eyes." Really enjoyed your flash piece as well. Keep up the good work!
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
That’s the perfect way to put it I think ☺️ Thanks mate, appreciate that as always! Hope all’s good with you.
@andreasboe4509
@andreasboe4509 7 месяцев назад
Great video. This imagery can work like seasoning on a bland text, so the text doesn't necessarily need to be reworked to improve it. It's more like a change of tone.
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 7 месяцев назад
Absolutely! Great way to look at it I think.
@bignose3639
@bignose3639 3 года назад
🎯
@fannikag4183
@fannikag4183 Год назад
Loved it!!!
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting Год назад
Thank you!
@laurabesley7095
@laurabesley7095 3 года назад
Can't find the link to the collection you're discussing. Need to add it to the other million books I want to read! 😂
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 3 года назад
Here it is: amzn.to/3xOIAu3 🙂 Hayley has already nabbed my copy for her TBR!
@laurabesley7095
@laurabesley7095 3 года назад
@@KierenWestwoodWriting I'm not surprised! It sounds excellent 😊 Great video, too!
@JustPerusing
@JustPerusing 8 месяцев назад
oh wow, a new subscriber you've found indeed.
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 8 месяцев назад
Thank you and welcome!
@willname1654
@willname1654 2 месяца назад
Unrelated question: When it comes to copyright in writing like Walmart or Abraham Lincoln, can i put this in my writing, or do i need permission
@KierenWestwoodWriting
@KierenWestwoodWriting 2 месяца назад
I’m not expert but I’ll give you my thoughts - you can use brand names and stuff, that shouldn’t be a problem. The only time you might get into trouble is if you use names (especially of people) in a disparaging way. Even then it’s very unlikely I think.
@markovichamp
@markovichamp 5 месяцев назад
I guess it's a matter of taste, but by "...high vaulted ceilings," I'd have been out of there. That prose has veered irrevocably into the purple zone. The smilies don't land for me, and I'm not pulled into the scene. The language does not function to 'show' his style of oration, nor does it provide subtext, hinting as the character's misbelief. I'm at a loss to understand what the writer is trying to achieve with that imagery.
@koltonheath6073
@koltonheath6073 3 года назад
Those examples are confusing 🤔