The death and marriage stuff does feel heavy or something. What I enjoy about you is you're sensitive and kind but you are also direct and have a purposeful way about you. I wish you would do more material on stories you've told that make me laugh. For example, when you had to navigate a neighbor's unsupervised, barking dog. Didn't you do some kind of noise cancelling warfare at which the dog's owner confronted you on? Also didn't you write a note to her? I remember the story was funny and I believe you can write it funnier. It's lighter, it aligns with who you are, which is funny and sensitive. We, the audience, would love how you navigated it as a highly sensitive person and can relate with conflict in our own lives. I also like how you described the credit card company as the mob. That was funny too since we can understand the relatability to playing the 'system. You're not neurotic. You are a confident and well adjusted human being. You are also well supported by your loved ones. The insight where you discuss marriage and being single is not as fun. It just doesn't ring true to who you are: a highly sensitive person reaching for his goals.
