From the beginning, this story makes no sense because the characters aren't portrayed correctly. At all... Chi-Chi loves Goku, she would never treat him like this, she knew what she got into when she married him and had children with him. She married a warrior, a saiyan addicted to training and battle. Gohan would absolutely NEVER flip his shit on his father, he literally worships his father and thinks the world of him, same for Goten. Goku would NEVER give up on getting better and stronger, he'd never admit to be weak, that's not him at all. That's how he fought Vegeta, a guy who was much stronger than him when they first met. He knew he was outmatched, but absolutely NEVER gave up...And that was a life or death battle (Vegeta wanted to destroy the Earth). So....Giving up on training? NO WAY. This is wrong on so many levels...Making a sad story by changing the behavior of well established characters is not the correct way. Sorry if I sound arrogant, that is not my intention, I realise and also appreciate the effort you put into this. I hope you understand the criticism though.
Chi Chi would not have been pissed off at a surprise visit from Goku. A shame these fan stories don't know how to portray ChiChi. Her anger was always towards Goku making Gohan fight, not Goku fighting in general.
So true. Also She wanted him home a be a regular husband with a job, making $$$ for the family. I thought it cruel how easy it is for him to leave his wife. Vegeta is the same, except for when Vegeta comes home, he gives his family his time and love.
@@Phoenixdragon288chi chi is literally richer than bulma. She is the Kings daughter she got old old money. Plus they live out in the country they literally have no expenses.
Probably the worst story EVER made EVER! Gohan would never hate Goku. Gohan literally said he looks up to him and ChChi loves Goku. He’s left for a whole 10 years and came back and Chi Chi got pregnant and that’s how Goten was born. His family loves him to bits. My guy you know nothing about DBZ💀
Translation is difficult because of idiom and axiom. The story is actually well done, just that certain concepts are lost in the translation. With very slight adjustments this story can be adapted to properly fit the dbs canon.
I’m not against the story at all. I admired the creativity! I’m rather invested because I never seen a story where Goku’s family “hates” him even though they’re mind controlled! The biggest downfall was the voice actors honestly! I’m sorry, but AI voice would’ve turned out better for Goku and Vegeta are actually listed for the most part! But everyone starts off with a rough patch and ends up eventually getting better from it.!
I watched the hole thing maybe 3 or 4 times it’s very good story line you did a great job on this so please keep up the good work on making good content like this !
The story was super👏🏼👍🏻🫱🏻🫲🏼 but they make me laughing with "the Ballmaker🍡" 🙌✨️👍🏻😵💫😮😅😂. Big Thx for that & very nice a good laugh👏🏼👍🏻. @ the End it was an ultra good the story plot & really sad👍🏻.
The Kais: *Enjoying life, not thinking anything of the Energy disturbances* Granolah: Weird..Wonder what all this shaking is. Broly: Hrgh...? Frieza: Yeah i won't think anything of this. Cell: *Ded* The Androids: *Ded...?* Trunks: Uhhhhhmmm..................
I understand what happened here. It's fanbased people, You can not like it but it's someone else's imagination so i appreciate who made this. But in the future... I lil' less RL and it'll be set. I watch anime and other things to escape and see things that'll never happen. Tone it down like 2 notches and you have a masterpiece. Mort~ One Life,One Lord,One Love.
I highly doubt it that Chi chi wouldn't ever leave Goku for another man that's not a Saiyan a earthing wouldn't be Able to handle Goku's Saiyan children
Wait isn’t dishinkan and the angels supposed to be pure and not show emotions? Well I gues that was irresistible even I showed emotional damage when everyone betrayed goku t✌️ hx fo the 1 hr time buyer
I understand English, and even bad English. Thick Russian accents may be English... But barely. I live in the United States. Russian accents aren't normal here.
@@Phoenixdragon288Because she’s a Sayain like Goku. Chi Chi is just a human. How are you comparing a Sayain with a human? 💀. You aren’t bright are you?
Absurd. No woman in the universes has ever been more chill than chi chi. She expresses herself, has every reason to be upset yet never traps goku with an ulimatum and has absolute faith that gokus heart leads him on the path of right.
Will the end was missed up Chichi didn't deserve Goku because of being able to have her mind changed without any second thoughts I refuse to believe so kale really errand Goku love compared to Chichi
1st , it was "i waited so hard"... (What..?) Then chi chi told GOKU not to neglect his homework? Im done watching the video. Mad he got a damn view from me
What’s with the Goku slander lol, this man has died, came back, saved the world countless times always disappears to train and now they’re mad? lol please
I love how I just can't understand anything that one of them says during the fight scenes. It's so incomprehensible that I just paused the video and looked for something else to watch.
If there is someone that can erase the grand priest that isn't from the Dragon Ball Universe, it can be Asriel Dremmer. He just needs to use the Hyper Goner and consume the Grand Priest into nothingness
