It is much better than before, there are still some parts that are not fully read, but it is great Do the next part and the next and the next and the next ... I love it !!!
Here some feedback btw no hate I love these!!! Maybe next time let Newt and Y/n’s relationship take longer to develop like have them be close friends of something like that 💖
Ok ty! My origianal idea was that they were already very close because she is kinda close to everyone and I kinda said that in the beginning but I also will be naming another series in the future so maybe I can include that more!
@@lilybeth9540 ok!!! And you don’t have to worry about it I know that I and a bunch of people enjoy the series as it is so don’t feel pressure to change anything ☺️☺️☺️☺️
