you should make the notes of the bass high and loud so it will have more dramatic, joyful, funky style...i do like the song and i appreciate all the efforts hihi
@@Hayden_Walchshauser I didn't mean that in any kinda downgrading terms like that brother. I've been a guitar player for over 30 years and I also teach guitar and music theory. I'm massive Nirvana fan and I love your guys song. Great potential! We need more good start up bands with the sound and feel of the early 90s today there isn't really any out right now and I think it's time for another break through! I'd try but I'm too old now. :/ but great song.. super catchy and you can hum it ... That's how you can tell a hit.. is if it sticks with you after it's. Over and. Makes. You think about it afterwards.. and this song has that.. keep it. Up fellas. :)
man, this songs neat. Don’t take the criticism in the comments to much to heart, i like the less defined style of your music. You did great! Also, as a guitarist i appreciate the accuracy of playing the buddy holly lick every chance you can get
I mean it's pretty much just Anuerysm and a little bit of I Got a Girl by Tripping Daisy and of course two notes of Buddy Holly at the end lol. I'm no lawyer but I say if they can "rip off" a melody you can too
Personally, I would just look up the titles of nirvana tracks and mix the words in different orders. Btw, this song is awesome! U rlly need to make a Nirvana styled album. That would be fucking incredible!
@@Hayden_Walchshauser Imagine the groove the song would have if he did the exact same thing, not even using 5ths or anything, just root jotes but by following the drums. very simple yet important. im sure yall will find a way tho, have fun
