Honestly tho, theres no actually major issue, only a minor one which is preferentiable, like some people does like it some dont The push from 1:35 to 2:55 is too long, maybe u can cut it but still giving context to the video, and the scale of this video seems like stretched, and give a text in the video will be much more entertain, like whats ur reaction or whatever Overall its a great video, no major issue keep it up❤
