"Notes to the girl whose house i live in" Creepypasta

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This is an older creepypasta story that i did back in 2018, I really like the story and so i wanted to redo it now that i have a better mic haha. I hope you like it! make sure to check out the original story and support the author / notes_to_the_girl_whos... Thumbnail artwork by David Remero, check out more of his work here: www.artstation...
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@Darksomnium 4 года назад

This is an older story that i did back in 2018, I really like the story and so i wanted to redo it now that i have a better mic haha. hope everyone has a good day!

@warmfrog1990 4 года назад

great vibe as always! have a nice day too :)

@robinhood5449 4 года назад

Bravo! ❤️ But...what IS it? People don't normally hang from the ceiling? 😂 In my mind's eye he's a praying mantis/man with a human mouth and lots of sharp teeth °ww°

@shawngillen3994 4 года назад

is there a name for the piano bit at the end?

@frithnanth1337 4 года назад

it is really nice and reminds me of how one can find solace in horror

@davidmorningway6025 4 года назад

Original was good but this is better, you have a good one too man! 😈😎😇

@emilybeaman379 4 года назад

You know you've hit a low point when even the monster who lives in your house is like "hey man, are you okay?"

@HisGrace365 4 года назад

*learns he eats spiders and other pests in the house* Me: He can stay.

@rhysedavis 4 года назад

LOL

@dorothyaebutcher7103 4 года назад

Ikr? Everyone is all " catch and release" until a spider enters the chat. Then everyone gets gangsta.

@vangildermichael1767 4 года назад

( eats spiders and other pests in the house). Yup. And banana peels, don't forget that one. I'm all curious. Is this a weird person. Or an animal. Or a ghost/spirit, or an alien? So, In one story. There is love, compassion, empathy, and crazy, and mystery. I feel satisfied.

@acheron1104 4 года назад

@@vangildermichael1767 in the beginning I thought it was a ghost but I think it's like a overly fond, kinda obsessed squatter

@thatsnotveryfresh 4 года назад

spiders are what eat the pests in your house tho im really not sure why people hate them

@lilchangeling 4 года назад

Soon as he said WiFi password in cutlery drawer I was like wtf?! Is this my house?!

@o0Eggy0o 4 года назад

Imma come to your house now XD

@lilchangeling 4 года назад

Egg lmaooo just take my dog out to use the restroom and wash any dishes you use >_

@crystal.hangovergang 4 года назад

That's what I thought when he was talkin about all the socks, lol!

@o0Eggy0o 4 года назад

Omg you have a dog too? Hell yeah! xd

@lilchangeling 4 года назад

Crystal LovesHorror same I have a bunch of socks too o_o but then as he kept going into detail I was like whew not my place

@carolusrex4008 4 года назад

Was going to say is this spiders perspective but then “I eat the spiders”

@valencia_mua20 4 года назад

Spiders often engage in cannibalism

@Rotsuoy 4 года назад

What if it was a raccoon though?

@vangildermichael1767 4 года назад

Your idea is still "very" valid. Some spiders eat other spiders. Well, no. I guess you're right. Some spiders KILL other spiders, not EAT them. I'm pretty sure when you go eating your own kind. Then a person develops "Kuru". At one time they called it "Mad Cow Disease".

@rhysproudmourne1646 4 года назад

Pretty sure spiders can’t play with lighters either. I was certain it was some kind of animal until the end. Not really sure now.

@valiantwarrior4517 4 года назад

It’s something that can use a lighter. And WiFi. Play with sticky tack, kaleidoscope, butter. Open drawers. Climb walls. Hang from the ceiling. Take “recycling” items up under the roof. Can hide under a pile of towels, but its mouth is big enough to swallow banana peels whole. Had thoughts of really hurting a human and becoming like it used to be. Implying that it has hurt or killed humans. 🤔 I can’t think of anything it could be that’s not paranormal. Maybe it’s a chupacabra. 😂

@christywhiteman4249 4 года назад

This one was so good. I've got chills, they're multiplying.

@Darksomnium 4 года назад

Rom said this is a "Greasy" joke, so yay! :D

@LouisTheBlackCat 4 года назад

Are you losing control? Cause the power you're supplying...

@marixmoon9960 4 года назад

@@LouisTheBlackCat it's electrifying!

@LouisTheBlackCat 4 года назад

@@marixmoon9960 I better shape up!

@marixmoon9960 4 года назад

@@LouisTheBlackCat cause you need a man

@marra9654 4 года назад

I have a feeling the thing leaving notes is actually the spirit of her dead husband, it's memory all faded and mangled so it doesn't remember much of anything other than it loves her and wants to protect her.

@PHBRNTGGR2 2 месяца назад

This is logical.

@RowdyRedBeard 5 дней назад

But it eats spiders and banana skins....

@Chad_Thundercock 4 года назад

This isn't creepypasta, it's feelspasta. The writer is just looking out for the girl, who I'm assuming either is recently divorced, or recently widowed. That's wholesome as all hell.

@kari7403 4 года назад

Widowed. That would explain the people dressed in black, holding her hand and rubbing her back. All headed to a funeral. I get the impression that this creature came to reality/existence, as soon as her loved one died. Like it's some kind of grief ghost or demon. Some kind of guardian angel or something. Maybe I'm way off, though.

@yersiniapestis5237 4 года назад

Lordcuff Yeah, you’re probably way off.

@PsychicEdge4812 2 месяца назад

@@kari7403 it's a Yokai

@melofromdao 4 года назад

Another video to show how underrated somnium is

@brittanypanda9348 4 года назад

Right!! He should totally have more subscribers than he does.

@dailydoseremix4560 4 года назад

Facts

@willbernhardt4163 4 года назад

In not exactly one of your longest time fans, I’ve only been with you for maybe two years, with my favorite ever (and first) narration still being When Gods Blink, but I’ve always been a relatively quite fan, I maybe have posted four comments on your videos ever, but I figure now is as good of a time as any to remind you that your work is truly phenomenal. This video is yet another proof of that statement; you nailed the tonality of the main character, a mix of crazy and creepy boiled into one voice, with the music doing nothing but complementing the narration. In place of any advice to improve, as I really don’t know if there is anything you need to improve on, I guess I’ll just leave you with a generic “keep up the good work”. Stay healthy and keep it up Dark. You never cease to amaze with your talents.

@Dr_Skillz1188 4 года назад

I love this comment

@WALKUREX 4 года назад

It’s not as good as stolen tongues imo

@willbernhardt4163 4 года назад

Billy Metokur dont think I’ve come across that one yet, I’ll go check it out

@willbernhardt4163 4 года назад

Billy Metokur never mind lol, I started it and immediately recognized it, ya that’s a really solid one as well

@cincylaw14 4 года назад

This is the weirdest feelspasta ever.

@jakbos2377 4 года назад

I love this one. Almost wanna give that thing a place to stay.

@lovesick_loser 4 года назад

love the energy in this one so much.. you expect it to be really creepy but its actually wholesome n there's definitely not enough stuff like this that's been narrated ..

@DevylInside 4 года назад

Thank you for reading this one. It broke my heart and the way you sound reading it was spot on. Creepy and lovely. Very moving.

@Darksomnium 4 года назад

Aw thank you so much :)

@raccoonteur 4 года назад

Holy heck, man...the stuff you’ve been narrating lately, it’s all kind of on the sad side, and I must say, you’re doing a great job at it. 10/10 narration

@riosnyder6122 4 года назад

The people in the black clothes holding her hand, the empty place at the table. She’s a widow, right? But what is the narrator

@scumlord4709 4 года назад

good one 😂😂😂😂😂😂

@NateSceneTV 4 года назад

@blah blah blah Imagine being married then hiding in your wife's house for the rest of your life and she thinks you're dead or missing but you're just a few feet away

@MrSchism 4 года назад

@blah blah blah there are stories of people who squat in other people's houses, only leaving the walls and crawl spaces and attic during their "host's" sleep and away time.

@saltyark7564 3 года назад

Raccoon or possum.

@maskcyan 3 года назад

It's a cat

@glitchyfox2189 4 года назад

Monster in thumbnail: yep thats me you're probably wondering how i got there

@lamowkachow4597 4 года назад

It all started when Bob asked if I wanted to try meth

@Catastropheex1 4 года назад

when i learn something is living in my wall and eats pests and all that: it is *S T A Y I N G*

@kari7403 4 года назад

But that's exactly what spiders do! No need for a strange, possibly homicidal, much larger than a spider, man/goblin, thing. Lol

@calypsosnowy 2 года назад

@@kari7403 centipedes too! Just make sure that the spiders living in your house aren't venomous

@kari7403 2 года назад

@@calypsosnowy Yeah! You're right. And honestly, *looks around nervously before almost whispering,* I actually think centipedes are kinda cute! Lol. I know it's not a common view on centipedes, but they're all can be cute! Lol. From what I've found and read, there are only 2 kinds of spiders in the USA that have any kind of venomous bite that would be very damaging or dangerous to people. Those being the hobo/fiddle back and the black widow. Are there any that you know of that I missed? I mean, I really am curious n would love to know if there are.

@calypsosnowy 2 года назад

@@kari7403 I'm no spider expert, but I know that black widows are relatively common in Texas (My home state) although they're not hostile

@kari7403 2 года назад

@@calypsosnowy Yeah, I have black widows all over my yard in the later spring (these days) and summer, here in Utah. Hate those things. They are beautiful, but still make my skin crawl. A few years ago, when my son was 2, I found a black widow living between his toddler bed and the wall. I had just put that bed in that room like a week prior. That spider moved in quick. Just glad he never got bit, as he was only 2 at the time.

@stretchyboi6042 4 года назад

Somnium means dream in Latin. Your name means The Dark Dream. That's cool.

@Darksomnium 4 года назад

Not many people notice that :D

@vincentvalenzuela5718 4 года назад

@@Darksomnium really? I thought everybody did, that was your thing after all, the Dark Somnium series with the sleepy children

@Darksomnium 4 года назад

@@vincentvalenzuela5718 the sleepy children? Lol wat xD

@vincentvalenzuela5718 4 года назад

The Dark Somnium lol. Wasn’t it that? Children sleep, they go in a Maze Runner type hide and seek game?

@gnomemother113 4 года назад

it’s raining and dark outside. thank you🦀

@Darksomnium 4 года назад

I wish it rained here more often haha

@gnomemother113 4 года назад

The Dark Somnium it’s been raining for the past two weeks!! lol

@luckyghost7777 4 года назад

U must live in Miami

@Saint3188 4 года назад

It's hot and sunny where I'm at.

@seariakett4209 4 года назад

I want *"something"* to live in my house, to eat the spiders, and watch over me that loves me this much. 🐾

@russellwhitmyer6764 4 года назад

Get a German Shepherd. Mine chased after spiders and wasps. They also watch over you, and love you unconditionally.

@t.j.cornett7495 4 года назад

I'd volunteer but I don't eat the spiders. I just make them go away as well as any other pest, nuisance or problem.

@seariakett4209 4 года назад

@@t.j.cornett7495 My late husband used to take care of the whole "spider" thing and my cat is just not stepping up to do her duty as a great hunter.

@HippieInHeart 2 года назад

poor spiders tho.

@Katelin4098 Год назад

there is actually me

@ebblepebble3003 4 года назад

This made me emotional 💕 I want a spider eating gremlin that watches over me 🥺

@ripleyandweeds1288 4 года назад

"Why does one girl have so many socks? I get more use out them than you do though--" oh no "--I take them apart by the threads and wrap it around my fingers." oh thank god it wasn't _what i was thinking_

@roonkolos 4 года назад

I love how this story had me going from feeling creeped out to feeling a weird sort of compassion for... whatever this thing is. Its intelligent enough to know what wifi is but doesnt understand a kaleidoscope. Interesting story all around

@Rotsuoy 4 года назад

I've always loved this story. It's creepy, sure, but there's this melancholic sweetness to it too.

@deathbat1884 4 года назад

Thank you so much for putting "into the ocean" in this one almost in tears of joy your voice isn't sad it's in the form of someone playful and appreciated of this person and I love it, I love you somnium thank you truly.

@stephenstevens6573 4 года назад

What a fantastic story!! Leaves more questions than answers! always the best kind! Well done! Bravo! sincerely, thank you!

@dantedealmeida 4 года назад

Bro, I love the way you narrate stories. I can feel the thrill in them Much respect 🔥

@Q19484 4 года назад

Amazeing narration as usual. Glad I'm early.

@35PHaaton 4 года назад

You're really good with the feelspasta. Your voice and also the subtle music and sound effects that goes along with it. What Happens When The Stars Go Out is still my fave feelspasta due to your narration.

@BitchyBubblez 3 года назад

This is honestly the most wholesome creature/stalker thing I've ever listened to. I need more like these 😭😭

@uncle._.reaper 4 года назад

I love that your voice is calm it draws me in to more of the story

@isaiahburnett6331 4 года назад

The simp we need.

@JesslengtonRune 4 года назад

We don't joke about this one

@chrisnorth1786 4 года назад

This is BRILLIANT. For some reason vaguely reminiscent of "I Am Nightmare" perhaps just the first person but my god man. What a talent you have. Thank you Ronnie.

@nobodyspecial7004 4 года назад

Hey. I love your stories aha. I love sleeping to them. Keep it up, you're great at voice acting!

@dpkirin9426 2 года назад

This is the one story I always come back to. Every month I’ll just put it on and I never get tired of it

@twotailedtiger1464 4 года назад

Such a great story and a good way to show how much you've grown as a narrator. Keep up the amazing work!

@joshuacampbell17 4 года назад

I remember reading this when it was originally posted. Probably my favorite story from nosleep honestly, and you absolutely knocked it out of the park

@UnknownDraw 4 года назад

Aa you're so good! You're really good at capturing the heartache in the voice at it is about to break into sobs You're amazing at this and it's so nice to listen to, keep it up! New fan

@atalina2271 2 года назад

Aaaaaand I'm crying. Such a good story. Love that the unknown creature saved her. I hope they can be friends

@nathanstultz3434 4 года назад

Dude, I literally just listened to the old version barely a week ago after scrolling through your video list. Gotta admit the new mic is making quite the difference in sound quality. Though the old mic's sound had a fair amount of charm to it.

@luvenstein1852 4 года назад

I'm not at the end yet, I'm still out of the loop of who/what this person is, but great job author. Lack of knowing who's writting this really makes for a good story, I don't know if I should feel creeped out or bad for this person. And great narration as always. 👍

@leinsb.4908 4 года назад

Once again your narration fails to disappoint. Keep up the great work.

@foxfire2731 4 года назад

Most definitely better than I imagined ❤ do please keep up the amazing work, I love how you add in background noises so the story seems more life like,I can really get into them as I work and it eases some of the stress I feel,so thank you for the work you put into the stories and the videos 😊

@stitch1318 2 года назад

This one's a Feelspasta. I'm amazed how you change the tone of your voice to match the story. Been a fan ever since

@acheron1104 4 года назад

This story gave me mixed feelings.. Its freaking creepy but also kids sad.. Awesome narration as always 😊

@Romanticoutlaw 4 года назад

imagine having your suicide attempt foiled by a strange man who lives in your walls and eats spiders relationship goals

@JustInsane1 4 года назад

I really love this content and although it makes you think how lonely life can be it almost comforting how the ending sounded like they were content. Great job!

@XionicAihara 4 года назад

Brooooo, this was heartwarming yet creepy too. Love it!

@Lexiconincursive 4 года назад

this story was so wholesome and your voice fit it so perfectly

@KingArthur95364 4 года назад

Damn, that gave me shivers. I was hooked all the way through, great job.

@kari7403 4 года назад

Me, too. I couldn't wait to hear what came next! It was an awesome story, to be sure! So amazing.

@teeto5115 4 года назад

An absolutely wonderful story with genius narrating and music. I love your stuff and It never fails to resonate with something inside of me, thank you for your dedication. Never stop, you are amazing :)

@coreydemc 4 года назад

One of the best stories ive read in a long time hands down with a powerful message.

@Q19484 4 года назад

Note #1 :were out of toilet paper

@ToxinWolffe 4 года назад

This is creepily wholesome. I both want this thing in my life and fear them.

@whitneymason3098 4 года назад

This may be one of my favorite stories I've heard in a long time. It's almost oddly comforting. Hope that if there's some little critter living up in my attic they're as polite as this one is, haha!

@ciderxera4963 4 года назад

I listen to creepypastas all year long, either when I'm working or before going to bed. No nightmares. I watch one shitty horror movie and I'm suddenly waking up in a cold sweat for the next week. I just don't understand my brain anymore

@ArDeeMee 2 года назад

Just wanted to let you know you‘re not alone with that! =)

@HippieInHeart 2 года назад

poor girl, already lost someone who she clearly loved very much and then she's also got some kind of insane stalker creature. but also poor creature, having to watch her kill herself and then sacrifice something that clearly is very important to him to save her. it's just really sad for everyone involved.

@ronway7280 4 года назад

Right in the feels! How dare you make me feel like this! ;) Excellent story and narration!!!

@roxycontinog69 4 года назад

I REALLY liked this one...I loved it when you did it a while back, and even more now that it's done with better audio, and your acting skills have gotten better, though you've always been a natural with your voice acting. Awesome!!🤘🤘🤘👏👏👏👻👻👻

@Ape-xPredator 4 года назад

Is it weird that I want to go keep the little guy company? 😂

@mysoncrumphaseveryinjury3853 4 года назад

This is the only time I felt sympathy for a monster living in someone's house.

@HHpotatoes 4 года назад

Love your channel you deserve way more subscribers

@robertfuentes9677 4 года назад

Was he like some other worldly creature? We all need a friend like this regardless if they are human or not

@jackalina91 4 года назад

Oh yeah this was an awesome story & I ♥️ your voice- so laid back & easy to relax to usually anyway!! Freaky. ♥️♥️♥️

@sagetscippio8878 4 года назад

Oh, this gave me a feeling of dejavu. I swear I have heard this before!🤔🤷🏾‍♂️👍🏾👍🏾 Really good job my friend!👏🏾👏🏾 #Blessings #KeepUpTheGoodWork

@MaskedRiderChris 4 года назад

You scored an excellent balance of creepy, crazy, and pathos with this one, and I liked it a LOT. Best part is, I have no idea who/what the protagonist is, and that adds to the mystery factor. Good show!

@nevasoba5953 4 года назад

Wow ,this is weird.i still can't figure out what kind of creature it is.

@UnknownDraw 4 года назад

Thought it was a racoon, but its cool bc we get to imagine ourselves!

@user-fz3ip3ke8p 4 года назад

@@UnknownDraw tbh i thought it was some hairless anorexic humanoid creature

@voidcrowx 4 года назад

@@UnknownDraw what kinda raccoon uses wifi

@luvenstein1852 4 года назад

I'd like to think the creature or person is perhaps the lover she lost, that somehow it and the lose she experienced are connected somehow. Maybe Johnny turned into a creature, or was eaten by the creature, or is now some weird crawling zombie lol.

@UnknownDraw 4 года назад

voidcrowx oops sorry I didn’t realize XD didn’t rlly focus in the beginning my bad

@guacamole1769 4 года назад

You should narrate “my friend has been living in an alternate reality” it’s really long but it’s one of the best story’s I’ve ever read.

@kierajones4230 4 года назад

It's already been narrated

@coleflemmons8694 4 года назад

“And I eat all the spiders” that part took my by surprise. Chuckled a bit.

@LasagnaQueen 2 года назад

The ending music is... *Chef's Kiss*

@mankness 4 года назад

CAN YOU FIND THESE WORDS/PHRASES IN THIS SHORT STORY? HAPPY HUNTING! You have me Ive stuffed a few things up here Rubbing your back Do weird things I'm addicted to my toys. Great fun to fiddle with, but doesn't taste too good. I could look down at that thing for hours. Why would one girl need so many? 'Till the tips go purple I just eat them up whenever i find one. I like to open up my mouth all the way and drop them in whole. I can nibble ... it's pretty great I sort of started playing with it... Once I stuck my fingers in it once, it was kind of hard to stop... I had it looking like a puddle at the end. Doing moves with a spoon. CHEERS! BostonSteve

@dirtydan9785 3 года назад

sus

@katrienaluna2591 4 года назад

These stories are amazing, as always! I hope everyone is doing great in these crazy times! ^^

@wintermoonomen 7 месяцев назад

I really enjoyed your reading in this story. It worked really, really well!

@Darksomnium 7 месяцев назад

Glad you enjoyed it!

@GlitterismyCRACK 4 года назад

I love this story. The first narration and the updated one. 😁 Thank you Mr Somnium. Hearing about flicking a lighter, reminds me of the time I heard a person flicking a lighter in the empty apartment next door 🚪😱 XOX Luna

@kiddbeatz74 4 года назад

Bro, you tell the best feelpastas

@chel748 4 года назад

I'm spooked but I'm also cryin. Spectacular job!

@portiada 4 года назад

Equal parts incredibly sweet and incredibly creepy, Nicely done.

@Spooky__Spookster 4 года назад

Honestly, I find this one oddly comforting?? Like, I wouldn't mind having a little friend who looks out for me and stuff.

@Giantwaspface 4 года назад

Blimey, you're knocking them out of the park recently. Great stuff.

@Exletion 4 года назад

I feel like it might be the ghost of her dead husband or SO. Perhaps he can't remember why he cares that much about her but stays there in some form of ethereal life because of those feelings.

@toasteezy2647 4 года назад

Welcome to another episode of “what genre is this story?”

@Caboose-mg1vi 4 года назад

Idk why but i find this really wholesome I wish i had some one that cared foe me as much as this guy

@mobo8933 3 года назад

Imagine if your life is so fucked up that the demon living in your house feels bad for you and helps save your life and writes a note letter to you to try to cheer you up.

@d.barrett578 4 года назад

Definately the best horror narrator on youtube. I enjoy other narrators but pretty much all of them are kinda shit at conveying emotion and getting tonality right. But you are always on point. I dont know if you have heard of the Creepy podcast but you are on thier level of quality, and they do it as a full time job with very high production.

@pbrn2533 4 года назад

11pm is such a ripe hour. Thank you Ronnie. (Ronny? Im sorry)

@jakeb.6487 4 года назад

I love this story so much damn.. so wholesome yet chilling

@Darksomnium 4 года назад

Thank you I'm honored you liked it :)

@destinybeasley3288 4 года назад

This story made me cry, its so sweet😭

@rexcaliborb0i226 4 года назад

this was a nice story. wouldn't want someone like this in my house but still a neat bittersweet ending

@regitzekloster423 4 года назад

Idky but your stories are always so calming

@iamhusainrizvi5477 4 года назад

Best as always buddy... Don't forget ur goal... It's 1mil!!!

@minp3791 4 года назад

Listening to this at 3am.... this is awesome!!

@TiredEyes 4 года назад

when the stalker in your house is actually really polite

@astrodarkness 2 года назад

Dang, this was a good one. Now I'm looking at the door that's next to the stairs that is storage. I should probably check to make sure it is clear.

@sairindhreesaha7153 5 месяцев назад

The beginning of the story reminded me of 'the faceless old woman secretly living in your house' from Welcome To Nightvale

@HickoryStickGod 4 года назад

this is actually really heartwarming. this guy can come eat spiders at my house any time he wants

@brandoncobb4646 4 года назад

You uploaded just in time! Thanks bro

@Fractorification 3 года назад

Well, this was.....sweet? Creepy? Eh, I don’t think there’s a proper word to describe the feeling this story gives 😅 The thing was a stalker, but it had good intentions I guess? I sort of feel sorry for it, but I’d be terrified having this creature shuffle around my house, invading my privacy, stealing my stuff and listening to me breathe in my sleep.